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evashrestha

@evashrestha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#131

OMG...ITS TOOO GOOOD... 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
SUPERB UPDATES...READ 15 PARTS AT ONCE...COULD NOT STOP READING...NEXT PART ...PLZ...CANT WAIT...LOVED IT A LOTTT..!!!!!
KEEP IT UP...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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MaankigopiMadhu

@MaankigopiMadhu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#132

Nice update KK...loved that Maan was not fooled by Sameera .. but I don't think we saw the last of her :( .. Update soon :D

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: impoojaverma
padhne se pehle main yahi soch rhi thi ki aage kya hoga...
but d way u show wat is MSK is...
juz loved it...
this is d best part...
Thank god maan alreeady knew d truth...
update soon

he made it dear

yes no one cant fool MSK

love,

abi

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: mahimak
Yippeee..
this upadte was just amazing.. so so so so nice..
Just luved it..
Tho maan ne us sameera pe believe nahi kiya.. yayyy!!
Us sameera ki tho mai.. I hate her..:-(
Ab maaneet ke beech me romance chahiye.. he he he
Cont soon dear

dear we all knew no one cant fool MSK

he is the genius

love,

abi

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: maanhar
Being frank, i read ending first then came to read full update!!!! after reading last update, I had almost confirmed that I won't read this FF anymore, but later I only convinced my mind(?) ki Maan can't repeat his mistake, still was not fully convinced so read ending first😉 and now sooo happy😊

thanx for the trust u have on me

i hope i can continue this dea

love,

abi

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blueopal

@blueopal

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#136

this is awesome...
maan know the truth🥳 abt sam...wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
great...i loved it...looking fwd...

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Zohamaaneet

@Zohamaaneet

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#137

amazing update
thanx for pm
great going abhi love ur work and eagerly to know wat will happnd next

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#138

PART:54

at night mann cannot sleep at all...he want to meet geet he knew somewhere he hurted her but he dont no that she had hured this much he cant be far from geet...he just goes near her room and knock

but he cant see geet in the room

he is worried at this night where she can go

he is searching whole the mansion but she is no where

he knew where she would be

whenever she feel bad she ll be near garden park

but this time he is not there

he is tensed

he dont no where she went

he checked the parking...nikhil car is there so she is not with nikhil

suddenly he can see light coming from his room

so he went there and he saw geet there turning his back to him

he can guess that she is restless

he just touch her shoulders and said GEET

she turned and hugged him

she is sobbing and saying i m sorry mann

mann dont no why she is saying sorry

sorry...but for why geet

what u did ?

i did not trust u mann...

hen u brought sameera here i thought u want her to be there with u mann

sorry mann i thought even u ll leave me and go

i did not thought why u are doing this

i m sorry mann

pls forgive me

i thought i ll trust u but somewhere all my past came infromt of me when i saw u with sameera

i m sorry mann

pls forgive me

i thought i m loosing u mann

i cant take the pain of loosing u

pls forgive me i disbelived u...

he took geet face in his hands and said misthy

u are my life dear

i know how u feel at that moment

but what i can do

i want her to show that u are an angel for me dear

i cant live without u

i m idiot that i felt she is real

but this time ...no never i wont able to do this

i ll make sure that no one ll come between us

i ll do it geet !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

and about ur trust geet u why u feel u did not trusted me...

u did geet

but ur past came infront of u so only u thought that even i m doing the same

but geet it never happens

u have the right to scowl on me ...u are the only person whom i can share my life

never think that there ll be onemore person in my life than u

even i cant bare that

u are my soul ! i knew why u thought like that but still trust me geet that i never leave u ...

if i leave think i m dead

becoz without the soul what can a body do...

u are my breath...my soul...my life...my happiness...everything

i said na i m GEET KA MANN

so never think that

i m sorry ...

no dont say that geet...i love u

i m sorry ...i love u

oh so u want to say ur sorry like this

then what i should do...

dont u know

he took her in hands and he is walking towards her bedroom

mann !!!!!!

yes jann...she is just in the state that she want to kiss him

he called her jaan...

how sweet is he !

mann may i say something

u are so cute

really !!!!!!!!

yes mann

from when...when i was fallen for u

oh dear...

he took her to the room and he placed her on the bed and he came forward to kiss her head...

she accepted

slowly he came down and kissed her lips...he took her lips and he is playing with the tounge

he cant control himself

today geet herself lost in his embrass...

she gave up!!!!!!

she clutch her hands on his hair

and digging her nails for him

he cant control he just came down kissed her nape

she maoned mann...

that's it he lost everything

he opned her dori...he is kissing her back and he is unziiped her kurti

he unhooked the bra

and he can see the her bare back...he kissed her

she unbuttoned his shirt

she is only with bare chest

she kissed him on his chest and for him a current passed

at that time he kept his hands under her kurti but same time his mobile rang...

they got of the trances and see eachother with blush

geet good night!!!!!!!

he just think how can he do this

but what i can do she make me insane

precap:back to delhi

pls do comment

press like button...pls do comment

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Edited by abisamratgunjan - 14 years ago

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mahimak

@mahimak

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#139

OMG luved it luved it luved it..

awesome!!

I just don't have words..

Edited by mahimak - 14 years ago

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poongs123

@poongs123

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#140

Wow awesome update dear 😊

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