OS: Remembrance Part 2 pg48 Aug16 - Page 43

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

p.s. comment later!!😳

ill be waiting for it...😃

JAZ

Originally posted by: spvd

part 2
last part...
i think u are gonna be my dushman dear...
grrr and in this looks like someone also has joined in this...
but very beautifully and emotional and most importantly the pain has been described so very deeply...
all -ly in the part...
a very long lonely life for Maan to live...

aare dont say such things...im not your dushman...im your yaar...😃...i know...poor maan...i mean...if you want me to hook him up with someone else...i might be able to do that 😆

JAZ

Originally posted by: jnawaz

ill be waiting for it...😃

JAZ

Originally posted by: jnawaz

.i know...poor maan...i mean...if you want me to hook him up with someone else...i might be able to do that 😆

JAZ

Originally posted by: bansipatel

Beautiful part...!!
loved maan's POV...he is really missing his mishty...n her presence too...
loved the part where he was going thru the album n he was recalling his moments spent with geet...!!
awesome..!!
even where geet came in his dreams n told him how her wish was fulfilled...loved it a lot...!!
amazing part..!! 😳

yay!! glad you enjoyed it!! i think youre the only one who didnt yell at me!! ha ha

JAZ

Originally posted by: ninand

Jaz.. come off it.😳.. off the excuse that part 1 already had Geet die, so why was part 2 worse.. really ?! really!! i want to know...how is part 2 worse...i mean..jisse marna tha...woh toh maar gaya!! 😆

For me, its not simply that they could not come together,and one of the them died💔.. though that's heart breaking yes.. oh...hmm...

Its the gut twisting void that's left behind for the other, to live their entire life with. The kind of pain that can physically overpower that one, who is going to keep looking for her, despite knowing shes never coming back. well...if you put it that way...i can see why its painful...and more so...Maan's life w/out his mishti...ok..fine...you win!! 😛

Its the scary hope that lives deep inside for soo long, the pain becomes a symptom of existence itself. true...so true...feeling the loss of his Mishti is what makes him know he's still alive! 😭

The choking loneliness. and her reassurance will never be there, nor her endearment, her answers to his questions.. only forever evolving excuses he gives to himself. all the what if's are left behind for him!

That's why the parts after the death are most hauntingly painful. 😔 chalo...iss mein...you win! 😉

I remember, that OS 'There you'll be' and my throat hurts so bad just remembering of it, and trying to hold back sobs. i think that is my most infamous one...everyone was after me when i posted that...they were like...we had this sense that everything is ok...then bam! he's dead!! 😆

So there.. Miss Jaz.. this second part was worse cuz you again very adeptly expressed each and every painful emotion that can be associated with someone whose undergone such a loss💔 and I dont like you for what you do to us.😒 again and again🥺 yet you keep coming back!! he he...love you!!! 😳

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

well...r u supposed to comment...coz i cant...

my eyes are all😭

n everything is blur...

so if i have strength to read this again..i will comment...otherwise...🤔

aare...dont make excuses!! me expecting long comment!! *hmph*

JAZ