FF ||Renewed Ties|| Updated Last Part Page 20 - Page 5

Created

Last reply

Replies

137

Views

52.2k

Users

35

Likes

655

Frequent Posters

ritzy09 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 14 years ago
#41
great FF...please add me to your PM list
ash08 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#42
Thanks guys for your nice comments 🤗. Will update in a day or two. 😊
ash08 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#43

Chapter 4


Maan was shattered. He could see the nervousness, the edgy flickering questions in Geet's eyes. Geet knew just how connected and powerful Dev was. She knew just how much Dev craved power, how ruthless some of his business practices could be.


"Its not possible. Dev could not do anything like this" she whispered, as if to convince herself. She remembered all the nice things Dev did for Geet and Maan's family. He had always been a pillar of strength for the family after Maan had gone.


Maan got to his feet, went over to the windows and flung back the drapes dramatically. He turned to face her, standing squarely in front of the black window... in full view of whoever was there down in the street.


"What are you doing, Maan?"


"I'm going to show you something."


Confusion touched Geet's eyes. The clock in the hall ticked loudly. Geet glanced at the clock. It was almost two in the morning. She'd be expected in the office by nine for a routine start. But there was nothing routine about the day. She looked at Maan and felt as though she'd slid into some kind of twilight zone. She was unable to fully adjust to his presence, and she simply couldn't believe what he was telling her - especially about Dev.


Maan had said that he had six days to bring down Dev. Why did that seem so familiar to her? She realized with mild shock that Dev had made arrangements for the whole family to leave for a vacation abroad in six days. Her chest tightened. It was a coincidence. It had to be.


The familiar tone of her cell phone broke the silence. Geet jumped, confused for a moment. The chime sounded again.


Maan reached down, took her cellphone, handed it to her. "Answer it, Geet."


She took the phone, flipped it open, checked the incoming number in the display. It was Dev. Tension whipped through her. She glanced at the clock again. Why on earth would Dev be calling her at this hour?


She put the phone to her ear, her eyes fixed on Maan. "Dev?"


"Geet, are you all right?"


No. I am not. Emotion choked her, stealing her voice.


"I am fine, Dev."


Silence. "You don't sound fine."


She cleared her throat, shoved her hair back from her face as if it would help clear her mind.


"I..I was sleeping."


Silence. Longer this time. He didn't believe her.


"Dev, do you know what time it is? Why are you calling me at this hour?"


"You are not alone, are you?"


Her eyes flared open. Dev knew. Somehow he knew. Her eyes shot to Maan standing brazenly in front of the open curtains. She thought of the men in the street below watching. That's how he knew.They were Dev's men outside. They were watching her window. Geet's heart bottomed out. He knew she had a man in her room tonight because they called him. It was not his business. He had no right to spy on her like that. But why was he doing it? Why was he having her tailed? How long had she been followed?


"Geet?"


"Dev''. it's really late. I have to be up early. I have to go. I'll call you later." Geet hung up quietly before he could speak again, and she stared numbly at the phone in her hand. She felt truly ill. She didn't want to believe it. But in a small part of her brain, whatever Maan said was making sense. Absurd sense, but sense. Geet couldn't breathe. She couldn't seem to order the information spinning in her head.


"Is that why you are back, Maan? For some kind of revenge?


Maan's face darkened to thunder. "Call it revenge, retribution or call it justice if you want. However it comes, I'm going to take it, Geet. You're damn right on that count" He was really angry now. "I'm here because I have a job to do. I'm here because I know how to get to Dev. Quickly, quietly and efficiently."


"Through me."


"Through you."


"You came back for him, not me." Why Geet said it she didn't know. But it mattered to say. It hurt.


"I... I need a shower." She was shaking so hard she could barely stand. She turned, headed to the bathroom, closed the door behind her, locked it with trembling fingers. She stared at the lock through the tears streaming down her face.


Maan stared at the door. He sat heavily in the chair. Sick. A lifetime wasted. He pinched the bridge of his nose, trying to cut out the pain in his head. He couldn't. He heard the shower go on. He was going to kill the man who'd done this to them. He was going to rip Dev into shreds with his bare hands. He was going to do it before the week was out.


Maan inhaled sharply, squared his shoulders. Maintaining control was imperative for the success of this mission. That was why he was here. Maan walked slowly back to the window and looked into the streets. A pale-gray dawn would soon be leaching into the sky. A new day. And the clock was still ticking. He realised that his focus must stay firmly on the mission.


Maan listened for the water in the bathroom. He could still hear it. Maan wondered how far would Dev go for absolute power? And how far would he go to stop him? He could not allow his love for a woman to cause the downfall of the nation.


to be continued...

Edited by ash08 - 14 years ago
Water. thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago
#44
Me first!!!
Yippieee
Loved the update.
Thanks so much for updating it...
I m scared...for Geet and Maan...

Dev is portrayed with having so much power...
Hope nothing goes wrong...

But the title is renewed ties...so m hopeful...that Maan and Geet's relationship is renewed...😳
serialwatcher16 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#45

Nice update. But I thought Maan was trying to get in touch with geet secretly and get her to help him in bringing down Dev. So he should be knowing that Dev would be tailing her. Then standing in front of the open window and Dev calling Geet and getting him suspicious of Geet only made Geet sure that Dev was not so good but then Maan did not take care of such a situation. Getting Dev suspicious about Geet is not a good strategy.

Now waiting impatiently on how and where they go further.

Thanks
vivacious_gurl thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
#46
Ash wasnt maan trying to get through dev quietly n secretly thru geet? then y did he pull the curtains? what was the point of proving to geet that she was being tailed?
nice update.. will wait for more to unfold
ash08 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#47
Usha, Gouri - Maan had to convince Geet that Dev was bad. He had no other choice. For Maan's plan to work, he needs Geet to trust him... Now Dev will get ultra cautious and make some mistakes... But one thing he will not do is hurt Geet because he loves her... Dev does not know its Maan. Next update might clear up things a bit... Will update in a day... 😊

Thanks for commenting darlings. 🤗

@Water. - Yep, Dev has clout. And Maan and Geet don't have a good future too... 😆 Hopefully your positivity about the title gives some hope... Thanks for commenting sweetie. 🤗

@abinash079 - Thank you. 🤗
Armu4eva thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#48
Moi like Devs potrayal...power packed... <3
Nice update... Poor Geet is always at th crossroads... :(
Thanks for de PM
613528 thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#49
A brilliant update Ash 👏
Poor Geet, the girl has gone through much. First she believed her finace is dead and now that he's returned she finds out, Dev the one who helped them get through it is some maniac!

-Veritaserum- thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
#50
Superb update
Thanx for the PM

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050

10 months ago

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1013 page no 26 Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1013 page no 26

Welcome to the new thread of Ranveer's unsaid feelings. Keep enjoying the world of Ishveer. Their unconditional Love, their friendship, their...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

1 years ago

RiKara SS : Safed (chapter 7 updated)

[NOCOPY] Hello readers! I am Aditi, I have been writing stories here but this is my first short story on RiKara. Alike, you all have been...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: abavi

4 years ago

Arhi FF: Destiny Games T6 (Chapter 23.2 Updated 3rd Mar 2025)

From the author's desk : Welcome to thread 6! I started to write this story years ago when the show was live and now when I look back on what...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: dellzcreationz

3 months ago

Aradhana & Reyaansh SS : Na Jaane Kyun (last chp + epilogue pg 3)

COVER BY AISHWARYA (Mystic_Muse) SUMMARY Suzanne Miller , an Indian Origin Canadian Citizen adopted by the Miller family, who goes on a quest to...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington

1 years ago

⭐Back⭐ Arhi FF | Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon: Chapter 3 - Part 3/3

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".