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Posted: 14 years ago
#91
ash - y r u being mean to ur lil sis... moi dont like chotu updates... n haan moi remember ur nanga dance wala OS... i want nanga dance haan on the beach... 😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: vivacious_gurl

ash - y r u being mean to ur lil sis... moi dont like chotu updates... n haan moi remember ur nanga dance wala OS... i want nanga dance haan on the beach... 😆


This is a James Bond story without the Bond Girls!! 😉 So no nanga dances... 😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ash08


This is a James Bond story without the Bond Girls!! 😉 So no nanga dances... 😆😆😆

No ash u had said its a MI story... not fair... i want nanga dance in MI story... ek taraf tha Tom Cruise n dusri taraf hai MSK... i want Nanga dance... demand hai... hamari mange puri karo... 😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey ash loved reading all the parts together ...great n splendid 👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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short but sweet update!
cont soon
thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 7


Dev stared at the cellphone in his hand. His chest was tight, squeezing his lungs like a vice. He was losing control. His assistant had just called to say that the Government had somehow got a heed of his plans. He was told that the Government had managed to enlist someone who was operating out there in the shadows, working against him. He thought of Geet's cousin and wondered if he was involved in some way.He tried to breathe. He had to release the pathogen now. He had no other choice.


Dev walked to his window, still gripping his phone. He had managed to get the entire Khurana family together, except Geet. She was still out there somewhere, out of his grasp. He had no antidote near her, no one to whisk her out of the country. He had to wait.


Dev wondered what would it all be worth if he killed Geet - the person he loved. What kind of a man would that make him? He clenched his jaw thinking.


He turned suddenly, picked up his other phone and started punching in a series of codes that would set off a chain of events that only he personally would be able to halt. He hung up, feeling a resurgence of his power. He had just initiated protocol that would cause the bombs to blow at precisely five minutes past midnight today. He had just bought himself additional bargaining power - insurance - to search for Geet.


He wanted to meet Geet's cousin. He was not very happy about her connection with him. Once he had the chance, he will take him down. He would find a way to explain the man's disappearance to Geet. And she'd get over it, just as she'd gotten over Maan all those months ago.


Dev stilled in mild shock. Why was he even thinking about Maan? It was because of Geet's cousin, thats why. There was something vaguely haunting about the man who called himself her cousin.


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Maan looked at Geet. She was sleeping peacefully. He was driving back. He knew that he had hurt her a year ago when he disappeared. He'd broken her down and her had rebuilt her trust in the last few hours. And now he was going to have to smash it to smithereens. To get Dev, to save the nation, he was going to have to pay the ultimate sacrifice - he was going to have to kill his dream. He was going to have to give up Geet for good.


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Back home, Geet excused herself to take a shower. Maan used this time to make some phone calls. He looked at the sky seeing the sun sinking down tinting the world a shimmering copper. Today was the day. In few hours time it would all be over.


He went through his plan. Geet had talked to Dev and made sure they would meet at 10pm tonight. Maan had conveyed this to his superiors and all his men. There were two teams waiting for instructions, ready for action. The choppers were on standby. They'd be in the air and approaching the target shortly before midnight. His team was also in position, strategically distanced from Dev's office. He picked up the printout and studied the specs for Dev's office again, committing the layout to memory.


Maan put the specs down. Everything was ready. He had a sample of the virus that Dev was planning to use. He had the syringe ready. The antidote was also ready in his pocket. Maan inhaled deeply as he thought about that aspect of the operation. He was supposed to inject Geet with the virus so as to convince Dev that Geet was really in danger and that he should abort the operation and surrender. Once Dev surrendered, he had to inject the antidote into her. The medics would be on standby with the choppers. If necessary, they could get Geet into a hospital within minutes. She'd be safe. But still, he didn't like the idea. Not one bit. For too many reasons to count.


Once the operation was complete, authorities would be notified and the CIA would take over. It would be best to eliminate Dev in the takedown - a man with his power and connections was not easily contained behind bars. It would be simple enough to take him out with a stray bullet, and the world would be a better place and it would be a exact revenge for Dev actions a year ago. But Maan could not do it. He had his conscience. He realised that after tonight a future for him and Geet together might never be possible.


Geet stepped out of the bath and started smiling. She felt alive after a real long time. She remembered spending time with Maan - lying in the sun, talking about everything and anything except about Dev and what was going to happen tonight. It was a time of getting to know each other again, finding out that although time had changed them so much, something hadn't changed at all.


"Its what happens next that matters." Maan's words wove through her mind. But she felt better equipped for what lay ahead now. She was committed to confront Dev and seeing him in prison.


Maan saw her and walked up to her. He came to her side an unfathomable look filling his eyes. He took both her hand in his.


Anxiety rippled through Geet. "What is it, Maan?"


"I wasn't going to say this, not until after, because I am not sure where we'll be after midnight."


Her pulse quickened.


"One year back I wanted to spend the rest of my life with you."His eyes held hers. "I still do. I still want you to marry me, Geet. This is what I want. I never want to lose you. Not again."


"Maan... you're scaring me."


His eyes burned. He grabbed her and kissed her. And when he pulled away, she saw a raw anguish in his features.


"I love you more than anything, Geet," he whispered his voice gravelly with emotion.


"Maan... you're not thinking of going and dying on me now, are you?"


His lip twitched. "Done that already ---- Now I'm thinking of how much living we still have to do, how much time we have to make up."


"Yes we do" replied Geet.


Relief sifted into his eyes and Geet was moved to see it. Her warrior was vulnerable. He cared so much about her that he was afraid. She could not have loved him more than at that moment.


Maan checked his watch and inhaled deeply. "It's time."


to be continued...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#97
Ash... omg.. that was sooo crisp n well paced an update 😛

M sorry i miss out on the updates in between.. but gotta break today. .so reading them.. n loving them.. 🤗

I like a strong n vicious Dev anyday over the Saint... n well fingers crossed for MSK ka operation being successful 👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG Ash that was awesome... very to intriguing ... fast paced and making me curious and a bit scared... waiting for the next part to unfold...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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just back from vacation and read last 4 parts...amazing Girl...just beautiful...loved each and every update and the ebst part is that story is fast and paceful just like MI movies...Oh I love Tom Cruise and MI series...amazing updates
I am really on the edge thinking about what next...time for bomb has changed...Geet with Virus? Oh My God...kind of remind me of MI- II where the girl was injected by Chameira...
Waiting for next update with nails which are all bitten and shortened...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ah yes, things have been set in motion already! I like the way your mind works, Ash. Maan plans to endanger Geet's life to coax Dev out of his ghastly actions and at the same time Dev's contemplating whether he should give up. It would be interesting to watch who wins and also the test of true love of the trio!

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