Mayur FF - It so happened...Part 36 Page143 - Page 45

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow simply lovely
just loving it 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww... payal!
such an cute update!!!
soo finally its confirmed MN wud get married!
i sooo luvd MN!❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
this so heartwarming payal...!! the whole scenario,the emotions,hesitations everything can b effortlessly envisaged by the readers through ur extraordinary calibre of flawlessly penning it down...beautifully written...not only mayank,even nupur is falling head over heels 4 mayank...just not accepting it,or better to say she is in a subconscious state of mind ❤️...!! cant wait 4 their marriage ☺️
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey Pallu
wow it was fabulous udate
BY GOD mayu kitna ahsani se shaadi ki baat kehdiya
poor nups-behcari kibolti he bandh hogayi. she was too much shocked... she also like mayank and she has fear-maynk would love her back or not..
r a buddhu maynk also love you and thats why he said YES for marriage...LOL LOL
as usual loved caring and lovng side ofamynk
amazing update- aprke dil khush hogayi
keep it up dear


Payal-15 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you all for bearing with my randomness and predictable updates😆
Adding an update more to it😊
Payal-15 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
@Anchal dear, u reserved even before me...😆
@all...Here goes nothing😆
Part 17 :

At doctor's declaration, Mayank and Nupur shared an uncomfortable glance, kind of a first time both of them, but it only suggested a start. Nupur didn't know how to react and withdrew her hand from his while he smiled inwardly at that. He couldn't believe he loved this reaction of hers so much, if only she understood! But who was he blaming to, as if he was in complete understanding of the situation?

He looked at doctor with seriousness and asked, "Kya chot bahut jyada gehri hai doctor?"

Doctor replied, "Nahi, jyada gehri toh nahi hai. Main abhi dressing kar deta hoon aur phir do din baad aakar phir dressing change karwa lena"

Mayank noticed positivity while all Nupur did was look at him. Why did she feel so nice with him talking in her concern?

She felt too many thins at once and couldn't decide what exactly did that mean?

She was already feeling dizzy on her own and with the effect of him adding it to her, it felt way more out of this world or too much in herself, where all her thoughts flew without any restrictions.

She realized that she didn't know when the dressing of her wound was done too. She was busy in her own thoughts.

Mayank held her elbow to support her to get down from the bed she was sitting on and she didn't know why exactly now did he support her so much because his touch felt more than it should, definitly more.

During exit, she wanted to reach out for her handbag to pay up for the fees but she realized that she had lost track of her handbag and cell phone long ago. Then there she saw it. It was lying on the seat opposite to the doctor and Mayank was already paying up to the doctor. Again she had landed herself in a similar situation where he had came as her rescuer. She was lost in thoughts again.

While they left doctor's clinic, she didn't know where to start...to try to pay up for her doctor's visit first, or to thank him first or to say what she wanted to now. Slowly as her dizziness started to fade, her nervousness and tension started to grow.

Mayank asked her to sit in Doctor's clinic while he brought back his bike and also asked if she was fine enough to go by bike and her hand won't strain
much, she replied positively.
She looked up at Mayank and he looked back and smiled not knowing what was she thinking and what did her face ask for. Nupur noted that smile was apt to be pictured and framed. And her tension grew more.
In a while, while they walked outside towards Mayank's bike, he asked, "Jyada pain hai kya?"
She said what he wanted to hear, "Nahi, ab theek hai" Although her head was still paining and she felt her hand pain a little too, but she actually felt a little fresh and fine as she replied that to him.

She put forward her thankfullness, "Thanks Mayank, Thanks a lot"

Mayank replied in a simple, "No problem"

Though he was still upset over the fact that Nupur had very conviniently brought about a bush to say a 'No' to him, but he did not want to bring it up in front of her. Guess, he had got used to it, being distant to people mostly had become his fate, even those he cared about. He was just blessed to have his mother by his side always.

But, he was confused a little at her withdrawal of her hands from his, at the doctor's clinic. Was it what he saw or was it plainly since she did not want any such connections with him? He had never thought of things like these before but right now, he just wanted to hold onto the moment a little more. Atleast as long as she was in front of him, he could mourn later over his feelings or even better - would let it be as he always did, being 'seemingly cold' guy that he was. He knew he could easily cope up with this nothingness between them, he was confident that he must be good at it.

Now was the time for him to say what he didn't want to, "Nupur, Bauji se sab sach batane mein deri nahi karni chahiye. Aur confusion nahi badhna chahiye. Ye tumhare aur unke relation ko bhi affect kar sakta hai.Tum batao kab chalna hai unse baat karne, main aa jaounga"

Nupur looked nervously at him, biting he lower lip, taking a deep breath , forgetting all her pain, releiving her head ache and not feeling herself she asked, "Mayank, tum mujhse shadi karoge kya?"

Finally she had said it, not knowing why but she had done it already. She was stuck between 'why' and 'why not' at the moment. Besides, she had to admit, she could see a tinge of something towards Mayank. It was hard to calculate how it would materialise since it took two to tango but who did she knew of better than Mayank too. There was no one else and it was even more hard to picturise anyone else too now.

Mayank was stunned and speechless. A total surprise for him. Did she just say that or did he hear it on his own? Whatever it was, it sounded a lot like music, he forgot to react.

Nupur looked at him expectantly and he did not say anything. After a small talk of their clear and contented eyes, Mayank finally spoke up, "Haan'kyun nahi, sure!" he replied with a rather awkward casualness. He tried hard not to smile but couldn't control his joyous tone. He was being such a guy!, getting happy like that. But hey, she just proposed to him. He didn't know it had mattered to him to this extent. He wanted to hug her now and thank her too for giving him the feeling that she had just blessed him with. He wondered if people thanked on such occasions or not?

When he tried to analyse her face, it looked like it was just a plain 'decision making' decision for her because she did not seem her cheerful self but looked serious.

Nupur was perplexed at his answer 'Haan...kyun nahi...sure''now what is that supposed to mean. Fine his attitude looked promising enough but who would say that to a proposal? That brought back the feeling to her that she had just proposed to him for marriage. She had never thought, she would do that to anyone in special but owing to present situation, she found it was easy. Had she given in to her father's plea or did she take a chance for herself, well whatever it was, Mayank may not be realizing enough how important it had become for her from a few moments, surely he must not - having answered it so casually. It made her marvel at her own decision.

It was so hard to imagine them as a married couple, though she had one support from her growing feelings for him coz she more than appreciated him for various reasons but still she couldn't picturize that.

She closed her brain for a second along with her eyes trying to believe in the moment along with its seriousness when Mayank suddenly asked her, "Are you sure?"

It was still new to the both of them to review each other's expressions and words clearly. Fighting with self for this decision was taking most of their attention that took away the chance for them to understand the other with clarity.

Nupur opened her eyes when she thought she had packed her box of varied thoughts for now and opening her eyes she said, "Haan!"

Now Mayank got all serious and said, "Phir bhi hamein Bauji ko sab sach batana hoga Nupur'iss tarah jhoot bolke unki disrespect karna theek nahi hai"

Nupur nodded unsure and said, "Theek hai" after collecting some courage. Though she knew telling the truth to Bauji technically defied their decision for marriage completely but now the decision was made. He wouldn't rest and wait either. And she didn't know if she wanted to let go of marrying to Mayank and wait for someone else now. It was just so complex.

They both wanted to avoid looking in each other's eyes for now. It was easy to talk on serious topics than to let the stupid heart speak to them of its stupidities.

Mayank replied, "Okay then, main tumhe tumhare ghar chod doon?"

Nupur replied, "Hmm"

Today, suddenly there was enough trust and courage in a small moment that she kept her hands on his shoulders for the whole journey and he did not mind it too. Not that they were way too comfortable, but something told them its fine, get used to it now!

When Mayank was leaving after Nupur got down near her house, Nupur called him out, "MAYANK!" so loudly that Mayank wanted to compare her varied behavior today. So silent back then and to being herself probably now again.

Nupur walked up to him in a hurried manner and poised gait and asked with a child-like expression on her face, "Mayank...tumhe hamesha pata chalta hai naa ki kya karna chahiye aur kya nahi...Kya sahi hai aur kya galat...toh yeh, yeh decision sahi hai naa?" She wanted to know his opinion, it had started to matter from when she didn't know but she knew he had the 'know-how' of things.

Mayank was speechless for a moment. He did not want to talk her into it. It must be her deciding it and not him making her decision for her and besides, he saw that innocent expression on her face, like the one who did not know who was she supposed to ask it to and she had ultimately asked him, of all people HIM, the one it was related to. It was a defined moment for him, he was completely in awe of her.

He plainly twisted some words, "Agar hum isse sahi banaye toh sahi hai!"

Nupur had got her answer. She smiled. His answer was from both their sides and did not have a 'you' or a 'me'. It had an 'US'.

She nodded slowly and vanished from his sight as soon as she closed the door of her house.

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Sorry for the mistakes, if any😆
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Edited by Payal-15 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i hope after telling everything to bauji it won't create any problem. b/w it was completely Mayurish...loved it. waiting for next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely updt payal
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow it was very very nicely written...it had nothing and yet sooo much though my pick of this update would be this line...
""Nupur had got her answer. She smiled. His answer was from both their sides and did not have a 'you' or a 'me'. It had an 'US'.""
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
its so beautiful yaar,...
you describe their feelings between their coversation so beautifully...
continue soon with the next part...

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