OS-Mere bina adhoore hai Maan: Geet Part 4 Pg20

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Well I was thinking about the new Maaneet scenes; this scene just occurred to me! I hope you will all like!😳

Love You All!🤗
Aap mere bina adhoore hai Maan: Geet Singh Khurana
She stood there; the earth beneath her crumbling; she stood there; clutching her heart; that can't happen. Maan can never forget his Geet. Never!
She barged in their room to see Maan still sleeping. She went next to him. Running her fingers through his hair; she pulled him closer; trying to be in his arms for the last night. To be besides him; to be with him the last time. The thought was killing her; but she all she has now is only his memories. Their memories; and I shall live my whole life with them. She placed a gentle kiss on his head and ran to the Gurudwara.
Geet: "Babaji; yeh kya kiya aapne? Mujhse meri hi duniya cheen li? Maanti hoon ki yeh zindagi aapne di thi; par mujhse maan ko yoon aap le nahi sakte. Main maan ko waapas paa kar hi rohoongi. Aur yh vaada hai aapki beti geet ka."
She ran from there and was back at the Khurana Mansion. She was about to step in when she saw Dadi sitting all alone in the garden. Geet got a shawl along with her and gently wrapped Dadi in the blanket along with her hug! This woman was the one who mattered the most to Geet after Maan. After all she was more of a mother figure to her rather than her mother in law.
Dadi: "Dadi aap kab aayi? Geet bete kya faisla liya hai aapne? Aapka job hi faisla hoga; main aapke saath hoon. Agar aap yahan rehana chahti hai; ya phir?"
Geet: "Phir? Yeh kya sawaal hai Dadi maa? Geet aur Maan ka rishta to saat janmon ka haina? To sirf ek mushkil ke karan; aapko lagta hai ki main maan ko chod ke jaoongi? Nahi Dadi maa; Geet Maan ki Jeevan Ardhangini hai; aur main maan ko kabhi akele nahi chod ke jaoongi. Aur aaj to Maan ko sabse jyaada zaroorat to meri hai. Aur is mushkil ghadi main Geet Singh Khurana unka saath dengi. Unki taakad banegi. Main waada karti hoon Dadi ma; main aapko kabhi chodke nahi jaoongi."
Dadi just cupped her face; and Geet lowered and Dadi placed a kiss on her forehead. She knew that with Geet besides Maan; she didn't have to worry about Maan.
Dadi: "Geet bete; pata nahi humne pichle janam main kya punya ka kaam kiya tha jo aaj aap hamari ghar ki bahu ban kar aayi hai? Aur use pehle meri beti bankar."
Dadi hugged Geet tight. Geet and dadi left the garden and went back to Dadi's room. Now it was Geet's room too. She just sneaked out and went to their bedroom.
When she entered she saw an unimaginable sight. Maan was sleeping with their marriage photo. She rushed to him and sat besides him. She covered him with a blanket and was about to leave; when she wanted to confess to him again. To be near him. She just entangled his fingers with hers and said good night.
We are a couple blessed by destiny and she can't take away my life so easily. I will fight no matter how difficult it is to save Maan and bring back his memory
With a ray of hope; she left!
So guys how were it? I hope I have lived up to the standards of all the Maaneet fans! So if you want me to continue; please do let me know.
Positive criticism is always welcome!
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Love And Luck Always!
Mayuuu
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Mayu🤗
it's relly beautiful dear..m touched...
loved it...u hav written beautifully...👏
hope u'll continue😉

Edited by aiswaryaaa - 14 years ago
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Mayuuu..
AH-MA-ZINGG OS👏👏👏👏
loved it..very well written yaar .love the way you described everythingg
Beautiful onee
love it
do write more
Love
Shreya

Edited by maangeetcrazy - 14 years ago
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wow beautifully written.. luved it..
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A fantastic one...😃😃😃...though heart wrneching...😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely OS
Beautifully written x
Gr8 dialogues...
Hope ther'z a second part!!
Thx 4 the Pm
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Originally posted by: maangeetcrazy

Mayuuu..
AH-MA-ZINGG OS👏
loved it..very well written yaar .love the way you described everythingg
Beautiful onee
love it
do write more
Love
Shreya


Shreyuuu🤗

Thanks so much!

Off course going to write more😳

Love
Mithai
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: swetha10

wow beautifully written.. luved it..


Thanks Swetha🤗

Love
Mayuuu
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Originally posted by: 9staroneserials

A fantastic one...😃😃😃...though heart wrneching...😭


Heyyaaa🤗

Thanks!

I love heart wrenching stuff😳

Love
Mayuuu
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Originally posted by: MaaneetLuverr

Lovely OS
Beautifully written x
Gr8 dialogues...
Hope ther'z a second part!!
Thx 4 the Pm


Thanks so much!🤗

Yup there is a second part!😃

Love
Mayuuu

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