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Posted: 14 years ago
wow.. that'd be awsome.. waiting for the update..
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Posted: 14 years ago
done chechi👍🏼...will be waitinggg...
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PART 12


13.The Dance

Maan felt comforted that Geet was back with Daadi, as he joined them. He knew it wudn'it be long before dinner was served because Sam had gone to check the arrangement. He moved to sit next to Geet. As the drinks tray passed, he took a drink from it and saw Geet's eyes cloud over. She moved a bit closer to Daadi, away from him, casting an accusing look at the glass he was holding. He put the glass down and asked her softly so that Daadi wouldn't hear, "Don't you want me to drink?"

She gave him a quick glance, then lowered her head and shook her head in negation.

"Then dance with me!"

"I...I don't know how to..."

"You were dancing with Aryan, then why not with me?"

"Oh, that... Aryan tried to teach me, but I kept missing steps or stepping on his toes...so finally we decided it was better to do most of the others were doing...swaying with the music. I can't dance the way you do...the way Sam danced with you."

" That's okay...if I can't lead you, then we can always revert to your style." When he held out his hand with a naughty smile, she couldn't resist placing hers in his.

Maan was a good dancer and made it easy for Geet to follow his moves. Within a few minutes she stopped hearing the music with her ears alone...she heard it in the quick pressure of his hand on her back, the grip of his fingers on hers and the whirl of her own body. As the song came towards an end, he spun her out to an arms length and whipped her back. They finished with her arms hooked smoothly around her neck, her body fit to his. He was reluctant to let her go...the band announced the last song as dinner was served and just a few couples remained on the dance floor. When Geet started to move away, he whispered, "one more...this time your way!" The lights dimmed as the romance filled the air, one of her favourites of Sonu Nigam.

Hey zu Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm
hey hey hey hey hey hey

Ab mujhe raat din tumhara hi khayal hain

Ab mujhe raat din tumhara hi khayal hain
kya kahu pyaar mein
deewano jaisa haal hain

deewano jaisa haal hain
tumhara hi khayal hain

Ho ho aa ha ha ha la la la la la la


Ab mujhe raat din tumhara hi khayal hain
kya kahu pyaar mein deewano jaisa haal hain
Tum ko dekhe beena
chain milta nahi
dil pe ab to koi zor chalta nahi
jaadu hain kaisa dil ki lagi mein
dub gaya hu is bekhudi mein
Ho ho aa ha ha ha la la la la la la

Ab mujhe raat din tumhara hi khayal hain
kya kahu pyaar mein deewano jaisa haal hain
Har pal dhunde nazar tum ko hi jaaneman
had se badhne laga mera deewanapan
dil mein basa lu apna bana lu
ya phir nazar mein tumko chupa lu
Ho ho aa ha ha ha la la la la la la

Ab mujhe raat din tumhara hi khayal hain

kya kahu pyaar mein deewano jaisa haal hain

deewano jaisa haal hain
tumhara hi khayal hain
Ho ho aa ha ha ha la la la la la la
Ho ho aa ha ha ha la la la la la la

His hands on her back tightened ever so slightly, bringing her closer and closer until she was leaning into him. Maan brought the hand he was holding in his to place it on his heart. Her other hand was curved behind his neck and her head resting on his shoulder felt so natural. As the song progressed, Maan started crooning along with the singer, thinking how perfectly the lyrics suited him. As the lights dimmed further when the song ended, Geet was still in trance. Maan looked down to see that her eyes were closed. With a gentle chuckle he whispered, his breath tickling her forehead, "Come on Mishty, let's have something to eat before heading home."

ok haven't checked the spelling errors...giving u as much as i typed...will update the rest of this chapter, later as dinner beckons ...so happy? i gave Maneet 2 dances... can u imagine Maan croning the song...it's so melodious that u can't resist joining in😉

PMs with the finished chapter...


part 13b. The Party Ends on pg 34

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Edited by bangalores - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Tht ws beautiful part
Loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh this was such a short part...but really amazing...loved it...

Maan is really very naughty...
Now waiting for more...so updt soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome update but too short..
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Originally posted by: mrk_1

awsome update but too short..



yeah i knw ...the chapter doesn't end here but wanted to leave sweet memories for a bit...next part of the chapter...ummm...it may repeat the impact of the first night of Recycled Destiny...so those who want sweet thoughts please stay away from the next till 2morrow
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: bangalores



yeah i knw ...the chapter doesn't end here but wanted to leave sweet memories for a bit...next part of the chapter...ummm...it may repeat the impact of the first night of Recycled Destiny...so those who want sweet thoughts please stay away from the next till 2morrow

hey wat happen in dat ???😕😕😕😕😕😕
will u brush up my memo lv...plzzz
but u hv to update long one 2mrw...
lv u
chao
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Posted: 14 years ago
Very sweet part.
Maan was despo to be close to her
Guess he wouldnt let her have another dance with anybody
So obviously he had her all for himself.
Both the dances were beautiful.
Geet too doesnt want to be away from his protection.
She was defo enjoying his proximity while naughty Maan disturbed her for dinner 😃
Waiting for the next p[art.
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow loved the update...
loved their dance...so finally we got our maaneet dance...
wat more v want...
geet feeling comfortable with maan and he is losing himself to her...
will he able to make her come out of her shell and love her...
pl cont soon

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