Thread 2: Surrogate Relations part 19 (17/8)

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Mrs.MSKForever

@Mrs.MSKForever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#181

now that was nice..

n I think I know the song ... is it "ab mujhe raat din tumhara hi khayal hai" ??

anyway, I have a very imp. request to make.. I want Geet to react to the endearment "Mishti" used by Maan in a negative way... she should feel like something close to her mom is being unrightfully taken... n it should appear like a setback to the fact that Geet was finally trying to openup to pple around her...

this will make Maan a bit angry at her reaction ;-) ... will make a fun read... I like that headstrong ziddi pagal Maan... the party cant have a happy ending... I know I sound like cruella... but will make a buildup for what next!! ... but all this is just a suggestion... if you can think on those lines that is... super update!!!

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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 14 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: lively-piia

hey wat happen in dat ???😕😕
will u brush up my memo lv...plzzz
but u hv to update long one 2mrw...
lv u
chao

i gave a precap of the next part after the first night and the excitement of it got lost in the precap hwre maan reads a letter written by Geet that she is wants to be alone

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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 14 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: Mrs.MSKForever
now that was nice..

n I think I know the song ... is it "ab mujhe raat din tumhara hi khayal hai" ??

anyway, I have a very imp. request to make.. I want Geet to react to the endearment "Mishti" used by Maan in a negative way... she should feel like something close to her mom is being unrightfully taken... n it should appear like a setback to the fact that Geet was finally trying to openup to pple around her...

this will make Maan a bit angry at her reaction ;-) ... will make a fun read... I like that headstrong ziddi pagal Maan... the party cant have a happy ending... I know I sound like cruella... but will make a buildup for what next!! ... but all this is just a suggestion... if you can think on those lines that is... super update!!!

party doesn't have a happy ending but not the way u imagined...that's why i gave a break in b/w to let u gals enjoy the dance...Geet may not have realized Maan called her Mishty!! she was in dreamworld...head strong Ziddi Pagal Maan sure but this time round Maan is all tenderness towards geet, even his zidd will be loving!😉...knowing her past he will never ever mistreat her

and u guessed the song right👍🏼...very apt for our Maan na? i wonder why no one else mentioned that

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Aatiya

@PaintedSky

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Posted: 14 years ago

#184

Dreamy update :) loved it !

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

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Posted: 14 years ago

#185

awesome n the way u wrote its sooo romantic n i can actually c the scene in front of my eyes

n regarding song is it from deewana album... ab mujhe raat din...
bcoz mentioning sonu nigam only deewana album strike to me...