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NidhaA

@NidhaA

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Patah nahi tum Par kya kya phekne ka mann kar raha hain😡

Par chaddo...Life mein har jagah happy ending tho nahin milthi na😭

And well its a beautiful piece of writing nevertheless

Loved it as usual...

You have etched Maaneet's pain very well

Khuda na kare kisi ke saath kabhi aisa ho😭

Kudos for this brilliant

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-Sangs-

@-Sangs-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Bloody hell Miss Shikha... Let me find my juttis, with big heels ..

It was...well...hmm..should i say awesome or should i say i am completely choked.. Why did you do this to them...

Aww..my Maan and Geet...So sad yaar...but lovely piece of work..

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Parisa

@XSilentPrayersX

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

YOu know What Miss Shika...If i didnt got a Sequel of this OS with Maaneet Reunion i am going to MURDER you ...Mujhe saath khoon maaf hai aur un mai se pehla pphe ka hoga 😳 HAAN!!!!😎

Meraa MAAN 🤗...

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Maaneet4eve

@Maaneet4eve

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Please give us a second update for this OS... It was beautiful but Maaneet are meant to be united as known by everyone in GF... Please

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hopehot

@hopehot

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

why??????????????????

no its ok..i'll spare my jutis this time ..but can we plz see maaneet reunion plzzz...that or u need a giant umbrella to protect ur self from every body's jutis

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hamini_yash

@hamini_yash

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

very touchy story, but WHY ON EARTH DID YOU SEPERATE THEM?

Keep writing

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mchopra

@mchopra

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

anybody to kill her...pls do..

hello i hope there is another update..otherwise u just hope i dont find u online anytime soon..

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

ok i am not throwing any jutis... bcoz maaneet r still on!!!!!!!!

atleast for now!!!

want other part whihc will give fullfeldged maaneet with out dev bet...

u know wht i am asking a gr8 cinematic end not ekta crap...

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

ahhh,that was sad . did really geet married to dev . i hope next part is their .awesome and painful.

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516645

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: mchopra

anybody to kill her...pls do..
hello i hope there is another update..otherwise u just hope i dont find u online anytime soon..

wow! Wat am i seeing *rubbs eyes* one who writes tragedies cribbing about one..WOW! Muhahahaha

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