Opposite shores of a sea LAST Prt & EPILOGUE Pg 91 - Page 16

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Posted: 14 years ago
loved this ff...
maan a criminal...well still love him that way bcoz he still loves his geet and she him...
how ever he can act to make her hate him but i am sure she will get to know his true feelings...
i know u r off on vacation but will wait for ur updates...
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Posted: 14 years ago
AMazing dear, Hope you soon come back .
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update dear. We will miss u and will wait for ur nxt updates. Come back soon dear.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi thanks for a wonderful update...will miss ya n ur updates...loved the update...what is Maan upto...Poor geet! Maan loves her bt will make her hate him!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
such a cliffhanger n we even dnt knw for how longgg... i will die wid curiosity plxxx update atleast 1more part😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hiii
Awesome update
Loved it
Loved maaneet
Poor feet
Sooo sad
Maan can never hurt hid geet
Can't wait 4 more
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm

All da best 4 ur trip
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update dear
loved it...
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
luved d update
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey i have been requested by many to update 1 more part of it before leaving. i have completed the next part early just for you guys. my last gift before going. so enjoy...😊😊

Part 4

Geet realized what he has just said understanding the meaning of his words.

Her mind was screaming at her that he is not her Maan anymore. Her Maan would never say such cheap thing to her. He wanted her in his 'room'! she felt disgusted at the thought.

The love that was so pure for her, the love that was her entire life, the love which was giving her power to keep breathing in every moment; he has just scrambled that love under his feet with his words.

But still her heart was unable to hate him. Still there was something in her heart that told her that he still loves her, that he still cares for her.

Maan's men holds Geet to take her inside. Geet didn't even try to protest. She was numb with his words.

Pinky tries to save Geet but guys were stronger than pinky and they pushed her away and took Geet with them.

They pushes Geet into the room and closes the door from outside.

Meanwhile, Maan went outside to control himself. He hated himself for behaving like this with Geet.

He has promised her to always keep her happy, and what he has given her in real' tears and pain. He wished to die''..

He thinks determinedly that even dying is not gonna help right now. He can give his life to see the smile on Geet's face. But even if he dies, its only gonna give her tears.

So the only option remaining with him was to make her hate him. He was wrong when he has decided to vanish from her life thinking that one day she would forget him. He should have taken this step 5 years ago, maybe then Geet's life would have been different now.

Better now than never. If he couldn't do it 5 years ago, he will do it now.

He will stoop so low, that Geet would have no choice than hate him. He will do all those things that she has never even imagined in her dreams.

He says to himself with pain in his voice "Mujhe maaf kar dena Geet. Tum se door jaana meri majburi hai! Jitne dard aur takleef se tum guzri ho, us se kahin zyada dard se main guzra hoon Geet. Aur yeh dard, marte dam tak mere saath rahega. Lekin main tumhein dard mein nahin dekh sakta. Tumhein mujhe bhoolna hi hoga Geet"

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And he closes his eyes in pain.

Mujhe yun hi kar ke khabon se juda

Jaane kahaan chhup ke baitha hai khuda

Jaanu na main kab hua khud se gumshuda

Kaise jiyun rooh bhi mujhse hai juda

The tears started flowing from his eyes. His whole life flashbacked in front of his eyes.

Kiyun meri raahein

Mujhse poochhe ghar kahaan hai

Kiyun mujhse aake

Dastak poochhe dar kahaan hai

He remembered the first time he saw Geet, their first fight, their first date, their first expression of love, their first gift, their first kiss, their first big fight, their first separation when Geet went to US, and he remembered that phone call when he heard her voice for the last time'.

Raahein aise jinki manzil hi nahin

Dhoondho mujhe ab main rehta hoon wahin

Dil hai kahin aur dhadkan hai kahin

Saansein hai magar kiyun zinda main nahin

He has killed the reason of his life 5 years ago. He has made himself go away from Geet's life

Now the Life has no meaning, no aim. He was just breathing, but his life has finished 5 years ago.

Rait bani haathon se yun beh gayi

Takdeer meri bikhri har jagah

Kaise likhun fir se nayi daastaan

Gham ki siyahi dikhti hai kahaan

But he cant give this life to Geet. He lives on the edge of death. He doesn't know on which bullet his name has already been written. He doesn't know how many breaths he have in his life. So how can he ruin Geet's life??!!

Aahein jo chuni thi meri thi razaa

Rehta hoon kiyun fir khud se hi khafa

Aisi bhi hui thi mujhse kya khata

Tune jo mujhe di jeene ki sazaa

He pretended with everyone that he is very tough and strong. But from inside, he was dying in every second. He has been living a life of crime that he has always hated himself. But then the sight of his father's dead body drenched in blood flashed in front of his eyes, and he tried to control his anger. He thought determinedly that he has chosen this life for himself and he will live it.

Bande tere maathe pe hain jo kheenchay

Bas chand lakeeron jitna hai jahaan

Aansu mere mujhko mitate hain rahe

Rab ka hokum na mit ta hai yahaan

His destiny has already decided his fate n he has to live with it. He will take all the pain and give Geet a peaceful life, even if he has to kill himself for it

Raahein aisi jinki manzil hi nahin

Dhoondo mujhe ab main rehta hoon wahin

Dil hai kahin aur dhadkan hai kahin

Saansein hai magar kiyun zinda main nahin

And he moves towards Geet's room with determination on his face'.

Kiyun main jagoon

Aur woh sapne bo raha hai

Kiyun mera rab yun

Aankhein khole so raha hai

Kiyun main jagoon

Geet is in the room. She doesn't know why, but she was very scared.

She loves Maan more than anything, but this is not what she wants.

She can submit herself to him in love' she belongs to him' he has full right on her' but'''. Not like this!!

She was in dilemma. She didn't know what was gonna happen next or how she will react to it

But she cant imagine her love forcing himself on her. But the way he talked to her, looked like he doesn't love her at all. And he can do any bad thing without giving a second thought about it.

She closes her eyes in pain and hurt and she hears the sound of door opening.

She opens her eyes and see Maan entering into the room with an evil smile on his face. Somehow the smile looked out of place. Like it didn't belonged there.

Geet's heartbeats fastened due to fear. She didn't know why she was so scared when somewhere inside she knew that Maan would never do something like this.

But who's gonna reason with her heartbeats that were beating so loudly that she can nearly hear them. When has her heart listened to her that it would listen today??

Maan started moving towards her, she absentmindedly started moving back.

"M-M-Maan stop!" she has intended to say it firmly but her voice quivered due to fear.

Maan didn't stop. It looked like her words haven't reached his ears.

She feels the wall behind her and tries to run away from the side but Maan holds her and pushes her into the wall harshly.

She looks at him scared and with immense pain in her eyes.

Maan's expressions changed for a milli second as he saw the pain in Geet's eyes but then he controlled himself.

He locks her with his both hands on either side of her and started moving his face towards her.

Geet looked into his eyes and begged "Maan please!"

But he didn't listen. He gently touched her lips with his own and kissed her. The moment he touched her lips, an electric current passed through him.

He has forgotten the taste of her lips in the last 5 years. He has missed her so much. He forgot that he has an act to play.

The kiss was not at all out of lust, it was pure passion and love. The way his demanding lips moved on her lips, was enough to tell Geet that he was her same Maan.

And she kissed him back with exact passion and desire. She didn't realized how much she had craved for his touch.

He increased the fervor of the kiss with every second. Geet opened her mouth in front of his passion and let him enter in her mouth.

His tongue explored every part of Geet's mouth and Geet totally responded.

Geet's hands moved onto his neck and she hugged him tight towards her and gently scratched is neck.

Her touch and the sweet pain from her scratch, brought back Maan to reality. He snapped his eyes open and realized what he was doing.

Geet was still kissing him while hugging him closer to her. He realized that he cant broke the kiss as that would give his plan away.

So he reached his hands on the front of Geet's jeans and opens the button. The moment he did that, Geet came back into reality.

She broke the kiss and opens her eyes in shock. She holds his hands that were on her jean and looks at him scared.

"What happened Geet? Why are you stopping me? Isn't this what you want too??" he said with lust in his eyes.

Geet cocked her eyebrows at him unable to believe if this is still her Maan.

And he continued "Come on Geet! Didn't you said you loved me? That you want me? Or should I think that you were lying? That you love that ACP!"

Geet was speechless. She couldn't believe he was talking to her like that.

He said without any emotion on his face "Well then prove your love! Take off your clothes!!" he ordered her.

And before he knew, he felt a sharp pain on his cheek. Geet has slapped him tight on his face.

Geet couldn't take it anymore. Her patience broke with his words. He has not only hurted her immensely, but also broked all her dreams that she has holded so gently in her hands for so many years.

She was looking at him with accused tears in her eyes but didn't say anything. She was mum.

Maan looked at her and thought that he would drown in those tears but then he controlled himself.

He clenched his teeth and holds her arm angrily and said "How dare you?"

Geet winces a little at the pain when he hold her arm which was not missed by Maan. It was the same arm on which she had the cut.

Maan's expressions changed as he realized the reason for her wincing. He realized that something was wrong.

He picks her arm in front and slowly takes up the sleeve of her top, thus revealing the bleeding cut on her arm and poorly wrapped a cloth as a bandage.

Maan's eyes widened in pain. He has seen a lot of bloodshed in the last 5 years, but her blood killed him internally.

He looks at Geet with concerned expression which was not missed by Geet.

He asks her "How did this happen?" There was definitely anger building up in his voice. He was fearing that its done by one of his men. He has already started to make plans in his head for the torturous punishment to who ever that was responsible for hurting her.

Geet was always scared of his anger. She knew that he gets angry very soon. And if something is regarding her safety, his anger has no bounds. She knew her Maan cant see his Geet hurt.

Geet forgets for a second what happened between them few seconds ago. She looks at the ground and said while thinking of some excuse. "Woh'. Main'. Um' woh' uh'."

Maan's anger was increasing "Geeet! Tumne suna nahin maine kya kaha? How did this happen?"

Geet knew him. She couldn't tell him that it was pinky's fault. She knew pinky has done it by mistake. She doesn't want that the needle of his anger moves towards pinky. So she made it up

"Woh' actually' kal raat sabzi kaat te waqt lag gaya!"

And he said angrily "Geet, tum apna khayaal nahin rakh sakti ho kya? Do you even see, how badly its bleeding!! Apne bare mein naa sahi, kam se kam mere bare mein hi soch leti. Did you ever think it once, ki mujhpe kya beetegi! Now wait here, I'll get the first aid box!"

He has completely forgotten that he was there for an act. After seeing Geet hurt, he totally forgot everything. Only one thing matters for him at that moment, it was his Geet.

Geet didn't missed his concern and anger for her which told her that he still loves her and a smile came onto her lips.

He started going to get First Aid box when Geet said intensely "Itni si chot dekh kar darr gaye Maan?" he stops in his steps and realizes his actions.

"Us chot ka kya, jo tumne 5 saal pehle mere dil pe di thi?? Woh zakham, jo aaj bhi tazaa hai! Jise sirf tumhara pyaar hi bhar sakta hat"

She walks towards him and hugs him from back. Maan closes his eyes as she continued while crying "Why are you doing this Maan? You say you don't love me anymore, then why are you so concerned about me? Why are you angry at me? Please don't keep me away from you Maan, I cant live without you!! All these years only I knew how I have dragged myself in every day without you. I was just breathing, but wasn't alive. Geet have no existence without her Maan."

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Edited by jazz07_dh - 13 years ago

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