Opposite shores of a sea LAST Prt & EPILOGUE Pg 91 - Page 20

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Posted: 14 years ago
this was awesome...the way maan was being worried about geet...loved it...thnxxx for the pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updates!!!
i am really gonna to miss you and your FF..
enjoy yourself...Take Care!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update
was really painful ...both are in pain.
awesome part
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi...Jazz...thanx for pm...I was busy in shifting my home so not online...I read all parts of this FF now and they are fantastic and very emotional...what is the reason Maan has to become a criminal ?

I read u have written that this is last part before going and then in one post one reader has written about ur grandma's health...where are u going and what happen with ur grandma...I will definately pray for her good health.

When she is ok and u get time please continue ur FF. take care of ur self.
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Posted: 13 years ago
just read all the parts!
awesomeee!!!!
plzzz continue soon!
thnx 4 the pms!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey guys so here's next part.. I'm sorry it is very short as I don't get much time to write these days n moreover it was way to hard to type it on phones little screen but I thought smthing is better than nothing. N I will send pms on Saturday ...

Part 5

Maan jerks his eyes open and pushes Geet away in a jerk and said determinedly "I don't love you Geet, aren't you getting it?!" he said while faking anger.

But Geet was not gonna take these lies anymore. She looked into his eyes determinedly and said

"Really Maan? Then why you care if I'm hurt? Why I see the pain in your eyes that's in my eyes?"

"You are mistaken Geet! I don't care if you are hurt or not! I just need you alive because I need your fianc to do my bidding!!" he said the word fianc with a disgust. He wanted to hurt Geet by taking Dev's name in between them, and also to divert her attention from the other topic.

But Geet was not gonna get diverted so easily. She has waited 5 years patiently for her answers. Nothing could stop her from getting her answers now. Not even Maan.

"So you don't care if I'm hurt or not right?" she asked him casually.

Maan was not liking the way she was talking. There was definitely something going on in her mind. But he didn't let the cold faade slip and just looked at her expressionlessly.

She takes off the poorly done bandage from her arm in one go. Before Maan could realize what she was doing, she scratched her wound harshly with her nails making it worse. She closed her eyes in pain and Maan's eyes widened in shock.

He ran towards her and shouted while holding her arm "Are you crazy Geet? Have you lost your mind??"

And he takes out his handkerchief from his pocket and tries to wrap it around her wound.

Geet snatched her hand away from his hands and stepped back, smiling knowingly at him.

Maan looked at her unbelievably.

Geet picks her hand up to show the blood dripping down from her hand and said coldly "Don't worry, I wont die! Not at least until you are in front of my eyes!! You need me alive right? Till dev does whatever you want! I promise I wont let anything happen to me till then."

Maan's mind has stopped working by looking at Geet's blood. He didn't know if he was dead or alive!!

Geet continued "But I also promise something more. The moment you'll set me free from here, that would be the last day of my life!!" she said with a taunting smile. She knew she wasn't being fair to him! She knew he cant see her hurt like this!! But he has left no other option with her! she would leave no stone unturned this time to get him back!!!!

Maan gained his senses and runs towards Geet again and holds her arm lovingly.

"Why are you doing this Geet?" he asked in pain.

"That's exactly what's my question is Maan. Why are you doing this?" she said with tears in her eyes.

And Maan realized what she has asked him and that he cant tell her that. He puts on the cold face again and said angrily

"Miss Geet Handa! If you think I'll melt with your blood, then you are wrong!! I have seen a lot of bloodshed in last 5 years. Your blood is not affecting me! But till you are here, your well-being is my responsibility!! So if you don't want me to tie you up like animals, then stop behaving like a child and hurting yourself!!!"

Maan again holds her hand and ties the hanky a little rudely but still carefully.

"And if you don't stop this nonsense, I'm afraid your little sister has to pay the price for your mistakes!!!" he was desperate to do anything to make sure that Geet wont hurt herself again.

Geet gets scared for a second at the mention of Pinky's name. "Pinky?"

Maan smirks coldly and said "Yes Pinky!! I need you alive not her!! So remember if you do something stupid, I wouldn't think twice before killing your little sister!!"

"Let Pinky stay out of this Maan! You know she has nothing to do with this... its between you and me!! Just leave her alone!!!"

"Don't worry Geet! I wont touch her until you behave like a mature person and stop hurting yourself!!" he has to make sure that she wont do anything reckless.

Maan didn't know that it was too late for his cold behavior. Geet has already seen through him enough to tell her that he still cares for her and loves her.

Maan was about to leave and he was at the door when Geet said in a challenging tone "Did I ever tell you Maan?" he stops in his steps "Ke tum jhooth bohat bura bolte ho!! Tum shayad bhool rahe ho Maan, ke tum kabhi mujhse jhooth bol hi nahin sakte. Because I can see through every lie of yours." She started walking towards him.

"And I promise you Maan, ke tum sach khud kabool karoge. I don't know whats going in your mind and why you are doing this" she stands facing him "but I promise you Maan ke agle ek hafte ke andar, tum khud mujhse kahoge ke tum mujhse kitna pyar karte ho!!"

"I will never say that because I don't---" he tried to say but Geet stops him in between and said "Tsk Tsk! You don't have to accept it today!! But you will!!! And that's a challenge!!"

"Keep on dreaming Geet because its just gonna hurt you in the end. Because I don't love you!!"

"We'll see about that!!!" she said in a challenging voice.

"You can sit and see whatever you want to, but I honestly don't give it a damn!" he said coldly and leaves.

Plz guys do hit the like button n do comment... 😊


Part 6
Edited by jazz07_dh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yayyy me first!!!!!

thank u for updating...even if it was short😳

OH EM GEEE what a challenge!!!!

me feeling sorry for both!

me very excited now...can't wait for next update!
Edited by zeynab111 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update.. bravo geet👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWESOME
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part
wow geet challenge maan
loved it

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