Maan & Geet - Midnight Sun ~2~ (Epilogue page 36)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#211

Hey dat was such a nice and happy ending and tayji apologise to her dat was so good and thanks for such a wonderful story loved maaneet and pls do update soon the epilogue

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abina03

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Posted: 14 years ago

#212

awesome update

emotional

but you gave a beautiful end

thank you sooo much

love you

waiting for epilogue

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Posted: 14 years ago

#213

heyyy Mrz Biljani how yh dowin

REs xx xx

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Danina

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Posted: 14 years ago

#214

Ahhh an amazing end to an amazing FF...thank God u gave Maaneet their happy ending:)

will be waiting for an epilogue...but just loved ur whole,FF and cant wait for u to update ur other FF...loved it...

thankyou for such an amazing ff:)

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MsMovielover

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Posted: 14 years ago

#215

yaaay so glad you gave us a happy ending...
so happy maaneet are together..
cant wait for the epilogue

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Posted: 14 years ago

#216

Fozii I'm continuing my long comment here on all the other chapters (:

Chapter 15 - Optimism
Awwhh I really loved this chapter. The conversation between Maan and Geet was juust amazing. So tense and emotional (: I feel really sorry for poor Geet, she doesn't understand that she's getting used by her eviiil family =/ Awhh and Maans starting to feel more and more love for Geet, he want's to give her happiness awwwh. And the ending :O Nooo Geeet can't married to that guy whoever it is =( Geet is only Maans =P Very well written chapter, how the heck do you do it Fozi? Eeeks. Amaziing. Can't wait to read next chapter! Your such a damn good writer! I'm jealous (;

Chapter 16 - Pillar
I would say I love this chapter but I kind of hate it too. Well I hate the first part but love the second half if that makes sense. I don't like the first half because poor Geet is getting forced into a relationship she doesn't want to go into =( And her family are sooo fakeee =/ Haha see this is how good of a writer you are that you get me worked about something that isn't even really happening. Haha second half is fuuunny. Amazing waay of getting the signatures (; Where do you get all these ideas from? I thought you can't think, you liar LOOL =) And awwhh the ending yaaay atleast Maan knows now he stop this from happening somehow. Awesome chapter (:

Chapter 17 - Nothing But Despair
This chapter was beyond amazing! :O I looved loved loved it sooo muuuch! It was soo damn perfect. Awwhh at the beginning felt so sorry for Geet. Ahhh that Tayyi-ji is so darn annoying =/ Stupid woman. But whooo Maan to the rescueee! Awhh Rajji is tooo cuteee am glad Geet has got her (: EEKS. Maan Geet hugged. Yaaay. Loved that part sooo muuch. Ohh nooo Dadi-ma is ill :( I hope Maan and Geet manage to escapeee. I really want Geet away from that stupid family of hers. This chapter was soo beautifuully written =) I loved it a lot. It was perfect. Awwhh bless you had to keep deleting and rewriting - well it all paid of because this chapter was way more thaan perfect (: Keep it uppp (: EEKKS. I want to read next chapter right nooww :)

Chapter 18 - The Longed Escape
OH MY GOD. This chapter :O So intense =P First of all I'm happy Maan and Geet managed to escapee whooo! Party timeee. Okaii wait I shouldn't get too happy right nooow. LOL. This is random but I just realised your last chapter is chapter 26. What the heck. How many updates did I miss like 18 :O So baad of mee I feel really guilty noow :( But I'm going to comment on all of theeem. Okaii coming back to this chapter - eeeks it was soo freaking awesomeee! Haayee the drivee. Maan and Geet sitting next to each other lost in each others thoughts (: I was loving this chapter till that 'figure' appeared =| He spoilt everything :'( Hmmm I wonder who it is, I'm really curious. I'm going to guess Brij? But then I don't knoow because Brij is so obvious to be the figure I think you might have a little surprise for us hehe. Yaaay I don't have to wait for the next chapter I can just do read it which is what I'm going to go doo nooow...eeeks can't wait =P

Chapter 19 - Bitter Truths
Eeeks. This chapter was action-packed! (: OMG it was Brij so I was right, although I did think you would do something different. Hehe but I'm kind of glad it was Brij - it makes perfect sense to make him the 'figure'. Eeeks loved the waay you wrote this chapter! (: Just so damn amazing (: AHHH. Shaaamee on Brij he so deserved those beats stupid guy. OMG Geet's parents got murdered :O Haaw, Geet should go slap the guy =/ Stupid weirdo freak Brij (: Haha Brij tried to mess with the Maan and what did he get beats hehe he should have seen them coming (; Awwh I feel so sorry for poor Geet. But yaaay she has managed to get away with Maan - so hopefully she'll get the happiness that she deserves (: Whooo can't wait to read next chapter. By the waay love the waay you wrote it - I love the waay you describe (:

Chapter 20 - Shelter
Awwhh. This chapter was soo awesomeee. Loved the way Maan and Geet managed to escape yet again from those eviiil people. See they got God's blessings (; Buut awhh poor Geet is going through soo muuch pain and she's so hurt. She deserves loadsa happiness noow. Awwh. Yaaay, they both admitted todaay that they're in love with each other whooohooo this calls for a party (; And I loovedd this romantic update (: And shutup you are soo good at writing these kind of scences, I don't know what your talking about that you can't. Hayee I am soo in love with your FF I can't believe in 6 chapters it'll be finished :( I want to read more and moree. Anywayss I want to goo read the next chapter nooow (:

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Posted: 14 years ago

#217

-Reserved-

*For Final Chapter*

WHOO. I'm 55th 🥳

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mandymore

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Posted: 14 years ago

#218

Beautiful story,awsome description n brilliant updates.luvd it all
add epi soon n make sure to make it long so we can alwaz cherish dis story in our heart,me really luvd dis geet n maan ,their life n luv.u hav superb writng skills,god bless u