MG[SS]-Just a Dream or Two Behind You [IMP Note - Pg1 & Pg71] - Page 52

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jazzerette


Lolz...enjoy your freedom!

Glad to know this story made such a connect with you. I don't know about writing...but I feel the same about my paintings. Every new painting makes me realize the mistakes I made in the previous one.

But sometimes...just sometimes...a sketch, a painting, a drawing...comes out just right.

Perfection is not subservient to technique. Perfection is a state of mind. One moment maybe perfect and another not. I think the moment I had conceived the idea of this story must have been one such perfect moment...because the consequent result is something I have come to love dearly. And to know that it means much more to someone else too...it gets all warm and cozy inside.

Thank you :)


lolz thank you 😆
I agree with that whole heartedly...even though I am not a painter I know about the feeling you get when u do a painting as my sister is one...can feel the amount of happiness she gets when she completes something...it is reflected in those godly eyes of hers...but I get that feeling when I write something...somewhere, you are never satisfied with what you write because after you actually write something you come up with better words or better ideas that you think you could have executed...you write another and the same feeling courses in your mind again...it is a never ending thought process but yes perfection is a state of mind...but I dont want to be perfect because it snatches away the chance of exploring more as you get a feeling of nothing more is required 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
FABulous FF...dunno why you say u arent an author coz i find your way with words to be extremely interesting. its like a flowing river...slow but steady with bouts of strong waves crashing on the shores...completely sucks the reader in...
i love your pother 2 stories-YDOEJ and MPGD...and would love to see your sketches..is the one in the montage for "yellow dot of ..." made by you? its very evocative.
are you on FB too..?? can u PM ur id to me...wud love to connect with you there as well.
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Posted: 13 years ago
i'm surprised i came across this story so late... i'm bad with words and nothing i say will do justice to how wonderful i think this story is... however i had to atleast let u know that i loved ur writing... and really u should write more... hope to read more of ur work... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kunataanya

i'm surprised i came across this story so late... i'm bad with words and nothing i say will do justice to how wonderful i think this story is... however i had to atleast let u know that i loved ur writing... and really u should write more... hope to read more of ur work... 😊


Whatever you have said is more than enough! So glad that you found the story and liked it too :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

one of d beautifull ss ever read...

its a masterpiece by u dear...

i was lost while reading...

well its quite difficult for me to understand...

but d way u describe...its beautifull

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

one of d beautifull ss ever read...

its a masterpiece by u dear...

i was lost while reading...

well its quite difficult for me to understand...

but d way u describe...its beautifull



Thank you so much! I still find it hard to believe when you guys praise it in such a way. Glad you enjoyed reading this story :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
till epilogue
Jazzy dear so lovely...
enjoyed reading this...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Your writing is absolutely beautiful. I simply can't express it in words how wonderful your writing is. I think this is my favorite Maan and Geet story. I'm so glad that I happened to come across it. The epilogue was I think my favorite chapter. The way you began it with the progression of the important steps that occurred between them for their relationship to grow and leading up to the end where Geet is ready for something more concrete.
"For every dream you have stood behind, I lost a part to you, of what was mine. And for every dream that you will stand along, only to you shall I forever belong."
Oh my lord! There couldn't possibly be a more perfect ending to such a wonderful story. You really have a way with words that I admire. I really want to read more of your work. Have you written anything else? Though a short story you have captured me with your words and I am eager to read more of your work. Simply superb! 👏 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sodapop313

Your writing is absolutely beautiful. I simply can't express it in words how wonderful your writing is. I think this is my favorite Maan and Geet story. I'm so glad that I happened to come across it. The epilogue was I think my favorite chapter. The way you began it with the progression of the important steps that occurred between them for their relationship to grow and leading up to the end where Geet is ready for something more concrete.
"For every dream you have stood behind, I lost a part to you, of what was mine. And for every dream that you will stand along, only to you shall I forever belong."
Oh my lord! There couldn't possibly be a more perfect ending to such a wonderful story. You really have a way with words that I admire. I really want to read more of your work. Have you written anything else? Though a short story you have captured me with your words and I am eager to read more of your work. Simply superb! 👏 😃


Heyya...sorry for the late reply. I am working in a different city now and don't often come to IF anymore.

It makes me very happy to see someone appreciating JDTBY even after such a while. It was my first foray into IF and it is something I would never be able to recreate again. I have written a little more though...another short story and an on-going FF. If you wish you could this used ID ...jazerettePMs ...and I would PM you further on. Though I should warn you...it may not be as good as this.😆😳

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