Maaneet.. Eclipse UPDATING - Page 14

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Posted: 14 years ago
yarr boss tujhe nahi lagtaha tu ya precap do update say humay deh rahi hai...😡
ki agli update may plz dinner rakva thay yaar plz..😳
aur there baeray may kya blon mindblowing update asusal...dear samra...
keep rocking...
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Posted: 14 years ago
congrats on new ff...
i guess maan is the owner...
very interesting...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
thankyou all for your support
and yeah i will continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely...

waiting for dinner...

continue soon..

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow awesome luved ittt superbbb
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg thankyou so much for the lovely response
thankyou verymuch for all who liked the update
84 out of 230 i dont know what to say happy as atleast 84 of you liked my work and well rest i leave in your hand
here is the update hope you like it
dont forget to comment

Part 4:

Geet took the elevator to the penthouse, but only because it was glassedso dhe could have a view of outside. Also the presence of the elevator operator encouraged her to take it.

Penthouse suite , the operator announced as doors opened into one of the most magnificent corridors she had ever seen.

Geet stepped out of the elevator and glanced around hesitantly.she took a deep breath and walked slowly towards the door. This part of the hotel looked extremely magnificent and private. She saw a door at the end of hallway

She gave her dress one last look and knocked at the door

She was still looking down at her dress when the door opened.

Feeling better I see.

Geet's head snapped up to meet Maan's chocolate brown eyes. He was dress in formal's. a very expensive suite A sweet masculine smeel of his cologne wafted a greeting

I don't understand.. geet murmered

Maan singh khurrana or MSK as many ppl say . The MD of Khurrana empire. He said with a charming grin.and occasional mainatinance guy.

Come on in now.

She gave him an embarassing smile
As they sat on different couches.

So where is that frnds of yours

Oh well she had to go on some personal matter

Oh well I m glad you came miss .. he puposedly let the sentence in halfway

She smiled

Geet handa

where are your parents why dont you live with them
they are dead
oh i am sorry but hang onmeera told me you were really well off are you by any means the daughter of late handas. The flying icon

Yeah I am .

So now he knows I am rich too…

So what do you do.

Business I guess cant get much time for other things when you are running 12 hotels and 6 resorts all over the coutry

Wow that is amazing..

Not more than you. I told meera I found you curious. So for a change I thought I wd make frnds with you may be more than frnds i can beat around the bush for years but i dont want that i like you and that is as simpla as that. i think you need me in your life as much as i want you in mine

Hold it there Mr khurrana I don't need you or anyone else in my life..

Well you need me that is for sure

She got up no I don't I can manage alone very well

He just smiled she was a sample. So complex

But that's what attracted him towards her

She went towards the door and

He got up too and just stood there arms folded across his chest he just knew it he smiled at what was gonna happen

Why are you smiling ?

And with thud she fell into the small indoor pool

He went near her

No I can manage he holded back his hand

She tried to get up but slipped again and fell

See I told you you need me. He pulled her up and took her to the bedroom. Stay here I will call the ppl down to bring you some dress.

I don't need your dress I can manage with this and she sneezed

Yeah nice management.

He called the staff and within 2 mints dresses came.

Pick whatever you like

I am not changing these clothes

He stepped forward are you changing or should I

What

I m outside you change before you get cold I don't want that frnd of yours to be shouting on me…

PRECAP:
dinner😉
guys from now on i wont update unless i get a good 10 pages or more of comments ,, rule is for all the fictions of mine so you guys decide from now on when you need next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aha that was funny yet cute
plz do add me to your pm list!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Awesome update dear 😊 plz continue soon tis part as intresing as wel as funny dear😊

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wow awesomeee superbbb
maan's direct proposalll superbbb

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