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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bellaaa

awsome fab update meera
lovely scene of fighting & when piya see worried in abhay eyes too loved this yar
finally abhya saved piya yupieee
so abhay cares alot of piya...
now piya doubt on abhay yyy how he runs so fast...
who is tht creepy old ma..he is a vampire...
hope abhay always saved piya...
and accept his love 4 her...
u r awsome writer...really yar
cont soon
waiting 4 it...😊


thank you!!yeah he does kya karen yeh isq chupaye nai chupta abhay se😆thanks agn!
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Posted: 13 years ago
@arunsunita_gm > hav to wait n watch!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pkyekfanclub

amazing Meeru phew Abhay came just on right time n saved Pia n who was d guy who wanted Pia he was a vampy for sure but was he someone impotant in this ff ?



thank u😃he wasn't a guy he was a budha😆only abhiya r imp😉oh!oh and me too🤣ok abhina bhi😈

Originally posted by: priya.1

awesome update meera...

abhay the bodyguard again 😉
who is dat old person? 😕
continue soon dr...


thanks...u'll know soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Haila i am late,sorry meera for my late latif entry... but nice update. love the fight specially, abhiya is nice in update. waited for more abhiya scene... awesome mast , rocking update , aur ye itne sare words to likh diye maine next time thoda aur jyada likhungi ok...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: DonIsback

Haila i am late,sorry meera for my late latif entry... but nice update. love the fight specially, abhiya is nice in update. waited for more abhiya scene... awesome mast , rocking update , aur ye itne sare words to likh diye maine next time thoda aur jyada likhungi ok...


thanku...chalega😆my agent2!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey it was awesome but short
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Posted: 13 years ago
mujhe chodkar tu ne sab ko rply kiya btw when wil u update again 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: peehu24

mujhe chodkar tu ne sab ko rply kiya btw when wil u update again 😆


o teri!!!sholly maine sabko nai kiya na ...coz mujhe thodi der hi net milta hai!!!!!update jaldi milegi
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey frnd so sorry 4 late cmnt actually i m busy with my xamz thats y...😔
btw thank u sooo much 4 ur pm n ur ff is asusual awsome😛 ireally like it...cntinue it soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

18-broken!!

prev-"sshhh" he says as he walks so fast again like they were floating, she asks him "Abhay what's going on? How can you run so fast? Who was that man?"

"I will explain everything later, now we have to get back"he says and puts his lips on pia's lips before she drifts off.
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The night flew and as pia woke up she found herself in her room...
"goodmorning sunshine!"a grinning misha greeted her.

pia-Mish!!!(hugs her excitedly)when did u come??

mish-today early morning...You are well dressed up?went somewhere?

With this pia remembers all that happened last night,blushing remembering the part when abhay touched her lips with his.'But how did she came back?is..is abhay fine,usse toh kal chot lagi thi!!' she thought but pretended to be calm infront of misha.

pia-(to mish)haan woh ron ki...
before she can complete mish interrupted-oh!shit...i forgot wait i'll just wish him now.

And she leaves pia's mob. rings,its a message from Als asking to come to college soon she has a surprise.Pia quickly left for college and started to find abhay panicking devastatingly,tears rolling from her eyes remembering the fight and thinking if something happened to abhay.Just then she heard Als calling and turned in a jiffy.

Als asked shocked seeing pia's tears,forgets about the surprise-pia!!what happened??

Pia tires to stop her tears but unable to control herself-Als,kal ...kal raat!..(stammers sobbing)how did i came ...in my room.Abh...

Als interrupts her between-why,when i came back u were sleeping in my car and i left u at hostel!shh...(hugs her)stop crying!

pia-a..abhay kahan hai,he was...(sobs)there na!he was hurt.
Als steps back and lowers here eyes-a...abhay wasn't there.you...you must be dreaming...he's,in the fine i s..saw him in the morning.i'll catch u later...bye!!(and she ran from there)

To the answer of this pia was about to reply but keeps quiet confused at Als's sudden change of behavior and turns her heals toward cafeteria only to be met by a shock.
He stood there with tina all over him,kissing his neck!'a..abhay 'she said in her mind remembering last night...'we need to talk'she thought in her mind and started walking backwards,then ran.
"She's more than hurt"said tina backing off from abhay and continues -"I'm afraid of the consequence"
but abhay left from there brushing a hand in his hair...Pia sat on the bench at the backyard with closed eyes,remembering when abhay brought her here while showing university, trying hard not to cry.As she opens her eyes she saw abhay passing from there and remembers that he was hurt in the fight and despite of her pain she decided to ask him about it .

"Abhay how are u now?..
"I am fine" he says in a cold tune, and then walks away!, she feels so annoyed W*H! why is he behaving like this with me like nothing happened yesterday!

After the college she waits out side for him, soon he comes out he looks at her and walks away she calls his name, he turns around and she says" I want to talk to you" , he says " there is nothing to talk about", she stands in front of him with a challenge in her eyes!

but then he says " or...I think there is", to her surprise he agrees and says "ok I will wait for you in the car"
Abhay drives the car with a blank expressionless face, Piya looks at him and wonders, what is going on inside your head Abhay?!, how could you be so cold and act so indifferent with me?!, I don't understand!!

After he drives for like half an hour, both in silent mode, he finally parks the car near the river bank, he gives her a cold glance and then jumps out of the car, Piya follows him, both stand near the beautiful river that divides the whole area into two spectacular natural resorts! she looks up the sky, the sun was about to set down and the river looked so calm

He turns around to face her and says" talk!" in a cold tune.


She didn't know how to start and she feels hesitant she licks her dry lips and gathers all her courage and says shaking her head" I don't understand ! Why are you playing games with me?"
"Games?" he says it more of a question
"Yes games!, Sometimes you come so close to me, and sometimes you behave so badly with me and build this huge wall between us that makes me feel that you are doing all this in purpose just to keep me away from you, why...isn't this some kind of game of yours?" She says her voice almost breaking and full of emotion.

He looks at her with a sarcastic smile in his face" don't give your self so much importance !, you don't mean any thing to me, so I am not trying to play any games with you ,so don't try to meddle in MY LIFE" he snaps.

She continues "really! Are you sure? ...Then explain me in the middle of the night u come out of nowhere drag me to the woods almost giving me a heart attack,fight from a freak i never saw and who was again and again asking for me like i was his damn personal property!...Mr.Abhay raichand you owe me my answers !,were u following me?"she completes glaring at him sarcastically.

"i don't NEED to follow a piece of crap like u! tum apne aap ko kuch zada hi importance deti ho!!You are not that much pretty!or even if u were...abhay raichand doesn't follow any girl,girls drool over him!!"
hurt by his each word pia's heart clenches but she fights back-"Don't...don't even for a sec think that i am one of those like ur tina who run after u and ur bloody pride! "

"oh really!!then why are you here,aren't u following me!!why u wanna talk to me hun!!why!!!"he says now holding her arms tightly ,hurting her but for her the pain in her heart now is much bigger than this one.

She says in trance as she looks in his eyes"i don't know ...there's a..a bond..that pulls me towards u everytime!"
"NO!!!there's nothing...There is nothing between us!, and there will never be anything ever!, do you understand?!!!!"roars in anger pushing her with full force.
"is it so?...Then from where did u come last night?why u saved me?why didn't u let me be in the dirty hands of that man last night huh!!?"

"It was a coincidence! that's all..."he says looking straight in her eyes"I saw that man approach u and i knew he didn't have any good intention,if there was any other random girl i would have done the same for her,and if it was some other guy he would have also saved you in such situation. "he snaps.

She looks at him helplessly feeling hurt an thought, 'yeah anyone would have helped but I wouldn't have felt the same feelings and trust on any other guy! and i am sure neither would you!,' but she was unable to blurt the words out!, she just stood there frozen, feeling so hurt by all that he had said,
His harsh words echoing in her mind and she blurts out in anger:" so tell me what did happen last night, why did you kis.." he looks at her abruptly and she stops, biting her lips oh God! why did I say that, she thought, feeling more uneasy now!.

His sarcastic look and that smug smile on his face made the matters even worst!, he raises an eye brow and says:" i did what?!, and what did happen last night exactly?! that makes you feel that things have changed between us?!, listen! I wasn't interested in you before and am still not!that was just a gesture to console you as you were scared from the sudden outburst...nothing more and nothing less, beside why do you girls always try to see more into a boy's kind gesture then what it really is?!" he pauses, shakes his head in disbelieve.

Piya feels so humiliated by what he was saying his harsh words were like slap after a slap on her pretty face, she fought back her urge to kick him hard, and slap him, but mostly she was trying very hard to stop her self from breaking down and crying!, and stop her frozen tears from rolling down her cheeks, she feels a sharp pain in her throat, I won't give you the satisfaction of knowing how hurt I am Abhay, she thought.

He turns his head towards her and continues his verbal abuse, without giving a damn about the pain that was so visibly clear on her face now!, no matter how hard she was trying to cover it!, he didn't care to see her tearful eyes, she was very tensed now, all she wanted is to scream and ask him to stop hurting her like this!, but instead all she did was stand there silently near the cold river bank staring at his cold eyes and sarcastic smile as the cold breeze stroked her flushed face gently ,she twiches her lips in disgust as he continues.

"oh!puhleze!now don't make that face, i give a darn!or stop giving me looks like i have slept with u or passionately made lov..."before he could complete he gets a tight slap from pia who now had enough of his abuse and slaps him with all of her strength ,shaking like a leaf in anger.

He holds her in rage hurting her"What the hell "he whispers , both were breathing heavily and both were staring at each other with so much intensity as fire of anger blazed in their eyes!

"how dare u...u don't even have a ounce of idea what i am cable of when pushed to verge of uncontrollable anger" he snaps in a threatening voice, to which she retaliates in a matching tune without being one bit afraid of him" how dare you speak to me in this shameless manner! you think you are above me, because your family owns allots of money, you think you belong to some kind of superior race that gives you the right to do whatever you want, and say whatever you like, then think again!" his grip becomes tighter she starts to feel pain in her arms, but it wasn't as hurtful as the deep pain that she was feeling inside her heart!,

"you have no idea how superior I am!" he roars

She twists her body and shrugs her arms trying to cut loose from his grip but in vein!, "don't you try to intimidate me I am not afraid of you Abhay Raichand! and now leave me!, don't you dare to touch me"

His eyes full of threat now he snaps "I would dare to do whatever I want to do!, you say you are not afraid!, well you should be!" his angry gaze shifts to her mouth and then to her eyes and again to her mouth!, and without a further word he bends down his head and kisses her hard on the lips! she gets stunned by his unexpected behavior for a few moments, her eyes open wide in a surprise, but then as his warm lips savor hers, sucking and teasing them, she gets overwhelmed by the emotions that it awakned in her and she closes her eyes, she gets so lost by the feelings that he aroused in her and she responds and kisses him back gently and shyly, she feels so weak that she would have fallen if he wasn't holding her!

His hands leave her arms and grab her waist, pulling her closer, crushing her against his chest and her arms raise up to cling to his neck helplessly, as her fingers dig into his thick soft hair, her reaction makes him kiss her more deeply, his lips now becoming more impatient but more gentle as the anger was vanished, his body scent dazzles her senses and the feel of his wet lips on her own and the feel of his strong arms around her soft body, and his stroking touch on her waist and back send waves of pleasure in her whole being, she shivers in his arms!. he kisses her passionately exploring her tender mouth!,

Then suddenly he breaks the kiss off, but still keep hugging her and then gently parts himself of her but still holds her waist he looks down at her, she opens her eyelids slowly and looks up to him with dreamy eyes, her lips still parted, almost swollen by his passionate kiss, like him she was still breathing heavily , their hearts still beating so fast, as she lifts up her gaze and looked at his cold eyes, she gets stunned as the reality of what had happened strikes her and jolts her to the core, shocked by him and feeling betrayed by her own weakness, she pushes him away with all her strength, feeling that she, to some extent has been violated!, and he backs off!
"How dare you kiss me!, how could you do this?!"

" i don't understand why are you overreacting so dramatically?!, and why are you so upset! It just was a kiss!, and I think it wasn't that bad!, beside i wasn't the only one who enjoyed it, as I recall you enjoyed it too! In fact you didn't want me to stop!" she feels so humiliated! ,

She looks at him with disgust and screams "I hate you Abhay Raichand, I hate you!You ruined my first kiss" she says that then runs away from him wiping her tears that were now uncontrollably pouring down her cheeks, he follows her and grabs her hand.

"you are coming with me!!"he roars.

"no way i am coming with u"

"look don't do all this drama and quietly some,its getting dark.u don't want that beast to attack u again do u?"

She rushes towards him angrily and raises her hand to slap him!, he holds her hand in med air " tusk, tusk! " he shakes his head" you never learn do you?! you did it once! but never again! do you understand, or maybe you want me to start all over again" he twitches his lips and pushes her hand away!, she screams" you are a disgusting pig!" "with this she starts leaving but before she can even move abhay lifts her on his shoulders and makes her sit in his car.She twists and turns trying to free from his grip ,atlast losses the battle " Wow! look at you what a strong man you are!, trying to use your muscles on a weak girl" she snaps angrily

"Trust me!, if I use even one of my muscles!, then you wouldn't be sitting next to me now!, that too in one piece!" softly he says in a threatening voice, looking coldly at her she wipes her face and looks away out side the window as he drives back to the main road.


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guys i have told before too this is someone else's idea as she isn't continuing it i am...

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