Trapped in the Past and Present (DMG) UPDATED PG35

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Harjot.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

ah-mazing update di! Poor Ridhimma. rofl.

so, that "guy" i'm betting is Armaan? Woo! Pizza Hut! I love that place. 🤣..actually..no. Taco Bell is better. 🤔 🤣

Anyhow. I loved this chapter! except, the whole.."she won't pick up thing" got a bit confusing for me. I couldn't understand who was calling who. 🤣

Update soon and PM me.

-Jot.

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Supernatural_10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

@Monikaseth- Thanks =)

@Stupidcupid1234- Thanks =)

@Harji- Thanks =) Yh I prefer Pizza Hut... maybe Armaan u gta keep reading to find out... yeah its meant to be confusion... in the next part it will be revealed might do promo 2mrw not sure yet...I will do dw

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Nice update Sis, its going well I like it :) I got a bit confused with the phone calls, its hard to understand whos calling who and all that. Looking forward to reading next part :D

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Supernatural_10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

@Siddi- Thanks =) Yh its meant to confuse you all... hopefully it should be revealed in the next parts...

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Riddhi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

nice start
do prepare index also
continue soon

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Supernatural_10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

@Riddss- Thanks =) Yh I will do

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Sharmin

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

unnii im liiking it especially wen i know wts comin up ;) your doin wicked keep it up and BROO this is ur liifestory ;P xx

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Supernatural_10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

@ Shazy- Thanks =) its not my lifestory

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Laiba

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

really nice part ^^ toaly loved it 😆 i wonder whos the one calling everytime? and who was the last guy? and like why is there so much suspense just telling us who's riya dad or dunno in short the guy who was playing with her ^^

continue soon,

Love, Laiba