~RISHTEY~(Maaneet FF)Part 7 pg 104 UPDATED - Page 59

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Posted: 13 years ago
Fabulous update...u wr8 damn cool...waitng 4 d nxt
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Posted: 13 years ago
brilliant do continue soon
luved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
WAITING FOR AN UPDATE DI..!!
CONT SOON PLZ..!! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely FF... waiting for the next now... and I'm sure the hands are not Maan's..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey Guys... so sorry for going missing yet again...Since I couldn't finish the update, I bring you a teaser for the next part...

~Teaser~
He grabbed her by the shoulders, his fingers digging into her soft skin, making her wince in pain. He wanted to hurt her as she had hurt him. He pushed her back until her hips collided with the table. "You destroyed everything. You killed everything with your hands. You----" he choked unable to bring himself to say the words. He couldn't even say it out aloud. She looked at him, he was hurting and she could see it. She never thought he was remorseful over what happened. Infact he had been spiteful over it. It wasn't her fault. It was nobody's fault. But yet he had made her feel guilty. Told her she was to blame. His eyes bore into hers and she saw it.
Please don't come any closer, her heart screamed. He slowly touched the loose tendril of her hair and wrapped it over his finger instead of putting it behind her ear. His eyes drifted towards his finger and his eyes softened a bit. "I loved you." The words were barely heard over the pounding of their hearts but the pain behind them shouted out at her.
Geet's heart thudded loudly in her chest. He had said Loved, past tense, making her doubts clearer by the second. It was all in the past. She mentally chided herself for keeping any hope for them until now. He had been in love with her. "Had" being the imperative word here.
"I loved you so damn much and you broke my trust, Geet. You broke me. Why?" he whispered into the air. His voice was shaky and laced with emotion. She closed her eyes as tears fell.
So how was it??? I plomish to update soon... Can't wait to read your views...
Much Love
Jia ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hayyyeee...hayyeee...and this is not the dreamy hayee i usually do in dreams...this is the sad sad hayeee Maaneet so sad in the present...and all...for what...a misunderstanding...a misunderstanding i bet someone else created 😡...
and ur MSK is such a badass liar...he says he 'loved' her...he is still bloody in love with her...😳..
awesome teaser...so i bet the update will be even more awesome 😃

muahhh🤗
Edited by maankigeet4ever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Waiting for the "Past" to change to "Future Perfect"😃

And I am clearly not talking about tenses.😉

Jia, do you want another of my lovely threats to update this one?😆

Just let me know, I have many.😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting for update after teaser is taking a toll
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Posted: 13 years ago
Jia...mmm since ur mommy is there we give u two days warna mana can we have the porcupine pls..haha
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mchopra

Jia...mmm since ur mommy is there we give u two days warna mana can we have the porcupine pls..haha



porcupine was for Dreams.😉

For this I have snakes and earthworms.😆

Just wait and watch.😉

My next target is Soni, till she updates RA and Kalirein.😆

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