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Posted: 14 years ago

This is such an intriguing story...great build-up!!! Have to say, you write brilliantly. This story is very different from the other FFs here and I am enjoying it immensly. Continue soon...

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Posted: 14 years ago
simply awesome ...

this story is getting more twisted with every update ...

cant wait to read more

love
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Posted: 14 years ago
After reading this i couldn't help myself but just had to make an account! i absolutely LOVE your story and the way you write.
in my opinion i don't think the killer is Geet because i read back to the first chapter and when anjali talks to the killer one of her conversations is about how hard working her roommate is and her roommate happens to be Geet. but then again anything can happen, so looking fwd to your next update. i pray that Geet is not the killer😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
Suspecting someone at this point now is not in my control. I'm never a mystery solver...but I do read keenly...The meeting with the parents should reveal some lights. Let see whats next.

A lot of the fun lies in trying to penetrate the mystery; and this is best done by saying over the lines to yourself again and again, till they pass through the stage of sounding like nonsense, and finally return to a full sense that had at first escaped notice.
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Posted: 14 years ago
another brilliant update ⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago

Must say you are a brilliant writer Sookie...can imagine Mal to be the killer, due to her protective/possessive nature towards Geet and the fact that they referred themselves to be childhood freinds which they didn't discussed further, but then again you never know...looking forward to Maan's meeting with Geet's parents

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Posted: 14 years ago
I knew it!!...lol...ok eagerly waiting for the next part! Thanks!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Really when it seems one tangle in case is solved another tangle appears which further entangles the story😃 Sorry for tongue twister reply but everytime I read an update of yours the mystery deepens and the motive of the killer changes pattern like a kaleidoscope and with more suspects like Vikram etc entering the scene gives place for more probable theories
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But I agree with the Maan that killer knows all the victims' weaknesses though it is debatable if he is avenging a personal motive or not.
Suddenly I think the killer might not be Geet's erstwhile & probably deceased stalker ,coz he seems to be killing those with dark pasts like:Sasha's poor temper ending up in a girl's suicide , Anjali's double crossing , Geet with scare of a stalker who was ready to kill others for her sake & now probably Mal too
Somewhere all have linked association too so it raises suspicion though their cases involve other suspects too
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... loved part 9 ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
AWESOME Story telling as always!

Will post more later...But can't help wondering the missing urgency in Maan and Sathya when they are examining the photo angle of the pictures, especially when Sathya points out that 'they didn't forget to close the curtains"

And indeed if its Geet's room, then I presume they know where they have to start looking for.

Highly possible that there could still be more clues there...people who might have seen him lease the place...or rather the apartment was the killer's stakeout for a long time.
Or one step further...His shrine for Geet...where he could watch his 'angel'. Such Obsessive kinds wouldn't want to contaminate and carry out their day to day routine in a revered place. Another reason, he doesn't live near Geet (speculating of course)

Another point in the poem that makes me feel he is close. He sure does hear her...
I know the voices dying with a dying fall
Beneath the music from a farther room.
So how should I presume?

So it doesn't seem like the meticulous Maan/Sathiya to settle for the next big thing to be interviewing Geet's parents...Atleast a team would have to be sent there Sooks...what say?

I'm also curious, why they haven't dissected the line, after Emily gives them the Facebook posting by the stalker?

Another thing about Vic's observation, is the petechiae he mentions from asphyxiation. This is common in strangulation, but all reports I have read of so far are for victims who are aware of what was happening to the consciously, in other words, the last image in their eyes as their breath left them was the killer. In this case Anjali was subdued with a drug, so I'm not sure if Anjali's wide eyes is something to be taken for a clue.

The real stalker seems to have faked his own death through a decoy. Very well another man from Geet's college who became a scape goat for no reason at all, or the real stalker found out that the poor guy had a crush on her. He simply used him to cover his tracks or rather there was a higher purpose in doing so...He wanted to reinvent himself.

Reference from the poem:
To prepare a face to meet the faces that you meet;
There will be time to murder and create,

I almost feel the previous three deaths have been shut and go cases, the eve-teaser, the lady and child in phuket (may be this is not the stalker, but the fact that the husband called the girls Angels is very suspicious) and 'presumed' stalker, which would not have settled well with the real stalker's need for recognition of his work (at least he would want Geet to know it, it not the world for his immaculate work). Since the cases were never given the 'due' attention, owing to their own reasons and starting from re-inventing himself ever since Geet's confrontation, beginning with Shaha's murder he is leaving clues...Trying to play God in Geet's life, in deciding whom he wants to linger close to her. In fact, my theory he is slowly beginning to enjoy the killing itself. Going from seconds(to chopping off hands to GSW to the head), he has moved onto asphyxiation and the stabbing. This all tells me his need for control and confirmation he thrives for after the kill.

Couple of things that's to be noted
1) One cannot entirely tell the murderer doesn't possess guilt. However gruesome the killings are, the killer seems to be drugging first to have them unconscious...almost like sleeping, or another notch higher, that they are already dead to him. He probably thinks he is only killing someone who is already dead or 'should' be dead, to reduce his own sense of guilt. Something tells me he can't handle the same actions, with them being alive. Although I can't tell in which way his pathology will progress.
2)So we have one kill for lust and another for wrath (anger), the eve-teaser guy for sloth perhaps? the decoy stalker for greed? I don't have explanations for the mother...But this concept is cliche...you wouldn't go for it. He he
3) Your photo of the killer, with your note saying that you like the guy in the picture...he he. I guess its a decoy for us.
4) Interesting mention of 'the person' and 'artist' in the Interlude chapter. Clever ambiguity. Again from the poem: There will be time to murder and create,
5) Mal is being left out and the reasons are not clear to me yet.
6) Is it possible the stalker is a split personality? The one with the most in-difference towards Geet normally, turns the other way around, when the other personality takes over. (This is a speculation, not an observation)

Last but not the least, the poem by Eliot himself. The poem has so many clues, if I start writing everything that is running in my head, I will beat your updates length. So I will let it be and save it for another day.

Real long one Sooks...Deal with it. After all my eyes only saw what it wanted to see.
GREAT WRITING and STORY NARRATION! Hats off Gurl.

Hasini

Edited by 6thElement - 14 years ago

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