New FF: Simply Irrestible (Part 6 Page 27)

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Hey dear!!

I love the start to your FF!!! Its very different and interesting!!!

I found it really funny that he called her a 'bag lady'...😆

Also love the use of the name Barun...😃

Please PM me when you update hun!!!

😊

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Amina

@-Ammie-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

wow yaar that is a brilliant start...m already loving it..!!

Shyam is an idiot he cheated on Khushi just cause she read books...well that's sane..!!

anyways yaar its great...keep writing more..really looking forward to it!!

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Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Great start! Loving our feisty Khushi, add me to the pm list if there is one please :)

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

This was simply beautiful !! Very very well-written. And i loved it how you created another Barun.😃 awesome work. Please do continue with this and please can you add me to your PM list? Would love to get hold of the next part.😳 take care.🤗

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Khushi

@Happy_Khushi

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Sabina_Ansari
I just loved it...
plz continue soon m quite eager to read further...

plzzz continue pretty soon...

add me to ur pm list if u have any...

- Sabina

Thanks!!!!😳

I will surely add you to my Pm List (as soon as I learn to work it)😆

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Khushi

@Happy_Khushi

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: -Ammie-
wow yaar that is a brilliant start...m already loving it..!!
Shyam is an idiot he cheated on Khushi just cause she read books...well that's sane..!!

anyways yaar its great...keep writing more..really looking forward to it!!

Thank you😳

I was actually worried that people woudn't like that I made Shyam khushi's Fiancee.😊

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aamirkhanfan

@aamirkhanfan

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

interesting part...waiting for u to update...

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Flame.

@Flame.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Your FF is really nice, So different. I got Confused between Arnav and Barun 😆 If u have a PM list the do add me to it 😊

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curiousbookworm

@curiousbookworm

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

wow i caught the harry potter scene too!! will you pm me please when you write the nxt part (as good ff get lost in the sea of this huge forum ) and if you dont mind will you send me a link of the previous one that you wrote ? plz plz ? :)0

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Khushi

@Happy_Khushi

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: curiousbookworm
wow i caught the harry potter scene too!! will you pm me please when you write the nxt part (as good ff get lost in the sea of this huge forum ) and if you dont mind will you send me a link of the previous one that you wrote ? plz plz ? :)0

I will be more careful next time with the editing!! i'll pm you when I post the next part (as soon as I figure how to make a PM list)