O Re Piya- AR FF Part 5 updt

Kiara_angel thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#1

Hey guys my name is Kiara m a big fan of Armaan & Riddhima aka KAJEN'..this is my first ff on IF.. I had written this ff long back'.but got the courage to post it now'''hav also read all the lovely ff on this forum hats off awsum...

Note- This story starts when Riddhima decides to stay wid Sid'

(Guyss plss don't bash''. pls stay away if ur not an AR fan)

-Sid is very happy that riddhima chose him nt armaan he just cant believe his luck'''..Armaa is sitting @ d basketball court

lifeless cryin @ his faith thinking'' why why always does it happens to him whoever he loves goes far away from him' he looks up questioning god wid his eyes & then suddenly it starts raining as if even angels were crying wid him

Riddhima was in her cabin thinking abt her decision & deciding that she will try to work her marriage''still in her thoughts.

She sees it started raining, she goes & stands near the window admiring the beautiful rain'eyes wander here & there & d sight which she sees leaves her shattered & a small cry leaves her mouth- " Armaan" seeing armaan in this state she feels a sharp pain in her heart'.. tears make their way out.

Nxt moment she starts running towards the basketball court'..the staff looks in amazement @ riddhima even sid see's her but was busy wid a patient thinking will talk to her later''..Riddhima stand in front of Armaan almost out of breath''armaan's eyes were still closed he feels her presensc & opens his eyes

R- Armaan kya kar rahe ho'.

A- basket tum yahan se chali jaoo

R- tumhari tabiyat kharab ho jaayegi

A- tum meri chinta mat kao'.

R- main toh bas

A- tumne apna faisla kar diya pls mujhe mere haal par chod do'leave me alone(shouting)

The pain in his voice echoed in riddhima's ears''slowly she leaves frm there ''.. all this is seen by Sidd.

So guys pls tell me how it ws any improvement do let me know waiting for ur comments

Edited by Kiara_angel - 14 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

25

Views

5.5k

Users

16

Likes

80

Frequent Posters

Kiara_angel thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#2

Hey guys here is the second part there's a surprise guests for u…………

Part - 2

Next day in sanjeevani

Everything was normal in the hospital….except only two souls were disturbed wid the ongoing turbulence in their life…....

Thinking will they ever get the happiness they craved for living a normal life with loads of love frm ur partner…….both shaking their heads as thou they r asking too much from life…………Armaan & Riddhima got duties in d children ward,, both were trying hard to ignore each other & concentrate on their work.. suddenly

There's an announcement-"Dr Armaan & Dr Riddhima kindly report to Dr Keerti's cabin

Keerti- Docs aapko ek important case handle karma hai saath main… ye kaafi delicate case hai.Patient ko brain tumor hai…. Yeh rahi unki file

A- Mam patient admit hui hai

K- haan aaj hi

A-mam patient ki information

K- patient ek ladki hai just got married & she's jus 24yrs old

A & R both were shocked

K- Aur ek baat patient ka naam Arohi Khanna hai aur unke husband hai Arjun Khanna………. yes ye wohi hai famous choreographer celebrities……so docs ur'll can leave now & meet the patient , any help do discuss wid me..

All the best

Both Armaan & riddhima were walking silently together wondering hw destiny plays a dirty game wid people.

They both entered the room & they see a girl looking weak but there's sparkle in her eyes & the husband tiredness & sadness showing on his handsome face

Arm- Hi Arohi….i m Dr Armaan & she is Dr Riddhima Gup …. realizing wat he said… Dr Riddhima Modi.

Ridd- hello Arohi hw ru doing & ur very beautiful

Aro- m good…u too dr riddhima r very very beautiful (smiling) by the way he is my darling husband mr. arjun khanna (jokingly)

Arjun jus shook his head & smiled

Arj- hello doctors ( shakes hand wid both of them)……dr armaan can I hav a word wid u…

Aro- Arjun…..ab mujhe sab maloom hai toh mere saamne baat kijiye

Hearing this arjun becomes sad & has tears in his eyes

Aro- Jaanu….kyun ro rahe ho…abhi toh main zinda hoon na(she says jokingly)…. Hearing this arjun jus goes & hugs her.

Arj- Agar tumhe kuch ho jayega toh main bhi jee nahin pauunga.. tum meri zindagi ho, mere jeene ka maksud ho……nahin aise kabhi mat kehana main marjaaoonga started crying bitterly hearing this even arohi too stats crying…

Armaan & Riddhima jus looked towards each other very well knowing the pain these people are goin thru….

Arohi wiped her tears & cums out of the hug holding arjun's hand..

Arohi- ohh hello…..aise kaise main tumhe itni jaldi chhod ke jaane waali nahi hoon samjhe Mr patidev tum chahoge toh bhi nahin, aur waise bhi itne good looking docs aur acchhe docs hai mujhe theek kardenge………apni shakal dekho kaise ro ro ke Bandar jaise ho gayi hai(started laughing loudly)😃…seeing her all smiled

arjun very well knwing his wife nautanki to making him smile

Ridd- Arjun mai aapko bharosa de sakti hoon ki Dr Armaan itne acchhe doctor hai ke who aapki arohi ko bikul theek kardenge….i have full faith in him…

Hearing this armaan got shocked cudnt believe his ears& started staring @ her….riddhima jus looked down…

Aro- Ahem…ahem…dr Armaaan (armaan realized wat he ws doin& immediately averted his eyes)

Arjun & Arohi sensed that sumthing is there between them.

Arm- So arohi u take rest..tom will do sum rest tests…will meet u tomm

Ridd-Bye arohi tk cre

Aro & Arjun- Bye….


Thats it guys tell me hw it ws do comment & press teh like button😊
Kiara_angel thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#3

Part 3

A week had passed but Armaan & Riddhima's life were still the same all surrounded wid loneliness, sadness….

Riddhima & sid's relation was still the same with no love just a formality to stay together for their loved ones sake.

Sid was getting frustrated with ridd behavior towards him…..he decides he has to talk to her asap clearing all the mess in their life...

Armaan & Riddhima both used to regularly check up arohi & monitor her health……they both had become extremely fond of Arohi & Arjun in a way this couple always reminded them about their past love (or present) their fights, their love & to stand 4 each other against all odds…. alas this has all changed. For arohi & arjun riddhima & armaan had becum their long lost friends found in the form of their doctors..

Nxt day in sanjeevani…..A & R enter arohi's room

Arm- Hi beautiful….how ru doin

Aro- Hey handsome looking good in blue….

Arj- Ahem…ahem wats happening guys getting a bit jealous.

Aro- Jus harmless flirting yaar aur waise bhi itne handsome doctor roz thodi dekhne milta hain…..kyun koi problem hai mr. patidev said in fake anger

Arj- Nahin…..mujhe kya problem ho sakti hai

Aro- Good Armann & Riddhima both smiled

Ridd- Toh chalein tests karwane…..don't get scared arohi m with u …u'll be alright said seeing arohi's scared face.

Arm- and wen I am here u don't have to fear baby right na

Aro- right

She hugged Arjun & left wid Riddhima….Armaan kept a hand on Arjun's shoulder- "don't worry we r there with her"

Arjun very well knew that these tests & its results will decide his arohi's life...

A & R in Dr. Keerti's cabin

K- So docs arohi ke reports kab aayenge

A- Mam kal afternoon 12

R- Hope who tumor cancerous na ho (getting worried)

K- Dr Riddhima pls don't be too attached with ur patient

Armaan very well knowing riddhima's caring & loving nature knew now that riddhima wud take arohi as her younger sister……

R- yes mam

K- so doctors you may leave now as as reports come discuss it with me.

A & R- okay mam

Riddhima was nervously pacing in her cabin to & fro & was anxiously waiting for the reports to arrive…

R- 12.30 ho gaye Reports toh abhi aayi hogi na ye armaan kyun nahi aaya reports leke

Armaan was in his cabin & had just received arohi's reports, he thought will open with riddhima & discuss it with her……so he leaves to go to riddhima's cabin…..he knocks no reply??? Again he knocks no reply???? After knocking for 5 times he decides to enter her cabin & there he dashes with riddhima who bcoz of her impatience to see the reports decides to go to armaan's cabin…

A & R – SORRY (they said together) gazing @ each other's eyes & getting drowned into oceans of love for each other breaking the eye contact….

A- who main arohi ke reports laya hoon

R- did you checked the reports kya likha hai…

A- no…. do u wanna see the reports first…

R ok..

As armaan ws waiting for riddhima to open the envelope….he see's riddhima & a small smile forms his lips…...Riddhima had her hand joined , eyes were closed praying to god…she was looking so cute & her concern for arohi so genuine…

She opens her eyes & sees armaan staring at her & smiling, she cud see his dimples she feels like kissing them….They both realized what they were doing & thinking

Riddhima opens the envelope & reads the report there is no expression on her face………Armaan gets worried

A- Riddhima kya hai reports main,……..no response

Riddhima just looks at him in a moment engulfs him in a tight hug…..Armaan's heart stops beating he jus goes blank…..the closeness reminds him about his past memories with riddhima he too hugs her… both were transported to their world of love where only they & their love survived…..they stood there for quite sumtime. A knock on the cabin bring them out of their Dreamland….shocked!!!!! they realized what they were doing still in each others arm they moved out not looking at each other eyes….riddhima composed herself

R – come in

Sister- Dr. Riddhima & Dr Armaan aapko Dr Keerti ne bulaya hai urgently.

R- thank u

As the sister left both looked at each other awkwardness showing on their face……armaan left to go to keerti's cabin but riddhima felt as thou her inner most feelings surfaced out……deciding to control her emotions she too leaves to go to keerti's cabin.

That's it guysss… plsss do comment

araja1234 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago
#4
ijust came across your ff. it's really good.
Stupidcupid1234 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#5
Do continue
N add me to ur pm list
Kiara_angel thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#6

Hey guys here's the next update

A & R were in Keerti's cabin…dr keerti was reading the arohi's reports a relief showing on her face.She lookedup at Armaan & riddhima who were very silent when they had entered not uttering a single word

K- Dr armaan the reports have g us a positive sign the tumor is not cancerous but the tumor is rapidly spreading we have to do surgery as early as possible am gonna discuss this case with Dr shashank for his inputs & will inform ur'll about the details..am I clear?

A-Yes mam

K- dr Riddhima have u followed it

Riddhima was not reacting she was in deep thought ,even armaan noticed it

K- Dr riddhima!!! (shouting)

R- Yes mam (starled and scared of keerti's anger)

K- Are u Ok?

R- Yes mam & again starts thinking about sumthing

K- so docs meet me tom will letgive u the information on how to go with case..thik hai ab aap log jaa sakte hai

A & R- ok mam …both leavefrom there not looking at each other straight away go to resume their duties…

AT Nite

Armaan was standing near the window looking @ the sky & remembering his lovely moments he had with basket today & a small smile forms on his lips talking to himself……

A-Does she still feels the same for me. no armaan yeh galat hai who kisi ki patni hai par mujhe uski aankhon main who pyaar kyun dikhta hai..jo pyaar tumhaara tha who kisi aur ka hai abhi

(fresh tears forms in his eyes) staying away from her is the worst pain he is experiencing as if he is living but without his soul coz that's with his basket ..how he wishes she cums back to him and hugs him and say's jaan wht haapened its just a nightmare but alas the reality is different which he wants to forget..

Looking at moon he remembers his moments with riddhima coz these moments are very important for his SurvivalL without these moments he would have been dead ….

Riddhima was standing in her balcony restless of what she has done today & as usual confused what she ws feeling fro Armaan..nahin ye maine kya kiya mujhe aapne feelings par control karna chahiya ..kya main abhi bhi armaan se pyaar ..nahin sidd mera pati hai ( The famous dialogueJ lol) mujhe uske bare main sochna hai naki armaan (a fight was taking place between her Heart & mind) u had chosen sid remember but kya main uss pyaar ko ya uss yaadon ko bhool paaungi joh meri life thi ya hai( very well knowing the answer) she was crying coz neither she can forget Armaan & nor his love nor can she go against her dad wishes..looking towards the sky she said why god I had to go thru this why her life is complicated & painful …I can't Live nor can I Die god plss help me……..Jus then sidd comes towards her

Sidd who had heard everything…(and sid had also seen when riddhima had hugged armaan )

S- Riddhima kya hua kyun ro rahi ho

R- wiping her tears nahin mai theek hoon

S- Really… tum kab tak jhooth bologi apne aapse , mujhse aur armaan se

R- shocked …..tum kya keh rahe ho mujhe kuch nahin sasmajh raha hai

S- ya tum samjhna chahti hi nahin ho sarcastically

R- matlab

S- Riddhima do u love me…..he asked sincerely

R- what sort of question is this

S- it's a simple question do u love me or no & d answer is not that hard for u I think so

Riddhima was quite

S- m waiting riddhima jus ask this question to ur heart u will get the answer

Riddhima's silent & starts weeping ..Sidd very well knows the answer tears start forming in his eyes

S- very softly Riddhima pls he turns her around to face him…riddhima pls don't do this me..finish this hide & seek game m tired of it & accept ur love for armaan… tum mujhse pyaar nahin karti ye main jaanta hoon naahi tum mujhse kabhi pyaar kar paogi( his voice depicting a lot of pain)

She was shocked to hear this from sidd's mouth staring @ him & crying thought.. how stone hearted she has becum for breaking two hearts one of armaan & now of sidd..

S- tum apne parents khushi keliye aur society ke liye you cant ruin my life…meri bhi galti hai riddhima I know par sabse badi galti tumse Shaadi karke yeh jaante hue ki tum kissi aur se pyaar karti thi…but this is enuf I cant live my life without love now I can really understand armaan's situation ….Riddhima you neither gave me love nor did u understood Armaan's Love…..saying he just went from there

Listening to sidd's harsh but true words riddhima just falls on the floor & cries her heart out coz there is nothing else she can do crying at her fate & for her love……

This song very well depicts Armaan & riddhima's pain….

Ishq hota nahin sabhi ke liye

Ishq hota nahin sabhi ke liye

Ye bana hai ye bana hai ye bana hai ye bana hai kisi kisi ke liye

Ishq hota nahin sabhi ke liye

Ishq hota nahin sabhi ke liye

Pyaar ke afsaane pyaar ko kya jaane

Ishq toh karte hai deewane

Ho ho ho ho

Pyaar ke afsaane pyaar ko kya jaane

Ishq toh karte hai deewane

Hai zaroori hai zaroori hai zaroori hai zaroori

Zindagi ke liye

Ishq hota nahin sabhi ke liye

Ishq hota nahin sabhi ke liye

Ishq aisa nagama hai ishq aisa jazba hai

Jabhi andhera badta hai

Ishq aisa nagama hai ishq aisa jazba hai

Jabhi andhera badta hai

Ho ho ho ho

Jalta hai dil jalta hai dil jalta hai dil jalta hai dil

Roshni ke liye

Ishq hota nahin sabhi ke liye

Ishq hota nahin sabhi ke liyeee

Ishq hota nahin sabhi ke liye

Ye bana hai ye bana hai ye bana hai ye bana hai kisi kisi ke liye

Ishq hota nahin sabhi ke liye

Ishq hota nahin sabhi ke liyeee.

So guys how was it do comment & press the like button

Stupidcupid1234 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#7
Loved the update
Continue soon
ksg_ritika thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
#8
nyc part ... even though sid's words wr harsh bt wat he said was completely true ...

thanx 4 d pm n continue soon ...

ritika
ksgforever10 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago
#9
Hey:)
The part was really nice yah! Yeah... The famous dialouge 'Sid mera pati hn' *puking* :P
Awesome update <33 I especially loved the song in the end.. It is one of the most closest songs to my heart :)
Fab Work :)
-Samica<3
Edited by ksgforever10 - 14 years ago
ksg_armaan_dmg thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#10
good ff update soon!! and please add me 2 ur pm list😊
Edited by ksg_armaan_dmg - 14 years ago

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47 · 5 years ago

Kumkum Bhagya: Rishton Ki Ankahi Kahani - Chapter 108 updt on pg 22

Book cover by Prii @SweetButSpicy. Thanks a million Prii for this wonderful book cover.

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: goodkashish · 6 years ago

Kassir Extremes Intro 9pm - London Airport - Christmas Day It was a cold chilly night in the beautiful city of London. We arrive at Heathrow...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".