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hmm ab kya mere sorry bolnw se koi mujhe maaf karega
to lo ab to kaan bhi pakad liye main shotiii
well kya kahu kitna engrossing sa part tha ye ki mujhe padne ke pure 3 din baad hi samjh aaya ki cmmnt bhi kar deni chahiye mujhe
well to ab hamare ryan ek army officer hone wale hai kya well isme bhi abhi tak kuch samjh nai aaya pehle ye tha ki ryan with meek possibilty ki wo hamari jhanvi se milega inspite of him attracted towards er but ab to y eaur jhol ki ryan ab arya se bhi milega ya nai ab aisa hi raha to kahi hamara hero kuwara na reh jaye
well bahut achi ja rahi hai fc and arya sach main kafi deepely pyar karti hai ryan ko but yaar khanvi n ryan is wat i want to see together aur har baad isi ummed ke saath story pad leti hoon ha i knw u r brilliant isliye baaki sab chijo pe apne cmmnt nai karti as thy r no doubt brillian hai the concept n the way u r writnig hatsoff but pls der romance ke liye khud jagha rakhna is fic mainas jhanvi n ryan ekdum dhasu couple hai aur romance to rapchik hona banta hai hehee
ab ha re reda nai kar rahi main apni cmmnt itni interesting jo nai as compare to part so its ur headache nw😛
ha waise sab characters ek dum apt hai is fic ke liye aisa day1 se hi lagta hai mujhe sachii
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