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Posted: 14 years ago
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"When has he called u up there????"…..Christine asked Arya who was sitting quietly on one side of the bed…

"Koi faayedaa nai hai…. Its 6 already….till they arrange security for u …I'll have to be with u ….Boss has ordered me"

"Oh!!!! …but what if u take me with u to that night club!!!!"

Arya jumped at the very idea….wow!!!! …but……….

"ur a celebrity u noe…..how wud I arrange security for u over there….really Bad idea!!!!…n I don't even have d time to get ready….n this is not d dress I'm wearing to d night club…..Forget it!!!"……she became sad again…..

Suddenly her cell rung….Arya thought …must be Ryan….

"Hello!!!"

"hey Arya!!!!….shekhar this side…."

"Bol"

I'm reaching d hotel with d security arrangements in jus 10 minutes….."

Arya jumped happily…..

"GREAT……I love u!!!…..jaldi aa yaar…. Have to go!!!"

"I noe !!!!! kaash meri kismat mein bhi tere jaisi Girlfriend hoti…"

"Bakwaas band kar …n come soon …I'm waiting…."

Christine was constantly looking at Arya…

"What happened???"…..asked Christine

"Arrangements ho gaye hain…they'll b here by 10 minutes….wow….I can go now….yesss…..but"……Arya's voice faded …n so did her excitement…

"But!!!!"…..Christine raised her brows….

"I don't have a nice dress for the evning"…..said a crest fallen Arya….

"that is nt d trouble…I've many evening gowns with me….choose one for urself…come!!!"…..Christine solved the problem in a nanosecond…..

There were many beautiful dresses …Arya hadn't seen anywhere…except the ones donned by the Hollywood actresses on the red carpet….she liked all the gowns Christined showed her …she cudnt think which one of them was better….Christine guessed her confusion….

"U noe …d best dress of all is still inside the luggage!!!"

"Really!!!!"

"How u like this one??????"

Arya's eyes transformed into two big buttons…..seriously…this one was the best of the lot…this white ever flowing exquisite gown was out of imagination….the dress itself looked angelic…..Arya jus cudnt look away….she was imagining herself wearing that…n even the feeling itself of donning such a beautiful outfit was awesome …what wud happen if she'll wear it……woohooo!!!

"this one is my favorite dress…… its very old…. But I've kept it very carefully…u noe …I wore it on my very first date with Raj…."

"wow!!!!"

" Its priceless for me….."…..Christine's eyes became sad once again

Arya saw this…

"I'll wear something else from the lot….I don't have the right to wear it u noe…"

"No !!!…No!!! …its perfectly fine…Ryan will adore u in this dress!!! "

Arya took d dress frm her n went inside the washroom to change….all the time she jus thought of one thing….how beautiful Christine must have looed like …when she wore this Dress for her first date…

Christine dint say…but she was kinda restless ….she cudnt have let anybody touch that priceless dress …but she made Arya wear it without a second thought….the only reason was her boyfriend shared his name with her son…her beloved son ..whom she dint see for past 20 years….she dint noe but there was d deepest urge to see the guy who was cuming to meet Arya at the city night club….its okay if the guy wasn't her son…but if he was……. No!!!!! she wont let this moment go ….she too will go to the night club …to get a glimpse of….this RYAN D'SOUSA….

Christine was still lost in thoughts that Arya came draped in dat amazing dress….Christine went back in those memories …..the way Raj looked at her wen he first saw herthis way …..he died for those killer looks…..n while dancing he slipped his hands on her tiny waist n drew her closer…..n she tasted him ….. forgetting everything inside those soft lips….

"How am I looking?????"

Christine came out of those thoughts…..

"Gorgeous "

"What bout my hair????"…asked a confused Arya….

"Let 'em loose!!!!!"



Suddenly the doorbell rang….Christine went to open the door… Shekhar was standing there…. First he saw Christine n then Arya….

"oh!!! …badhiyaa yaar …tu to jhakaas lag rai hai!!!!"

"Shut up!!!! …ab to tu aa gya hai na!!! …me already late….will have to rush!!!! "

"Take care!!!! "

"sure!!!!"…

She smiled n made her way to the city night club……

In India……

Meenal had noticed the change in Jaanvi's behaviour…obviously she knew the truth behind it…..that day when Jaanvi came back….she told her everything thing that was true…. His name wasn't Ishaan ….he wasn't her college friend n all that …how he kidnapped her …n then blackmailed her …Meenal knew it all…After knowing all this it was Meenal's plan to go to India …to Jaanvi's uncle's place in delhi who loved Jaanvi a lot…… becoz he was the only one who wud utaaro this marriage phobia from her parent's head…. But what happens when a going to be bride runs awy…..yup ….Insults…..her mom-dad had lost all contacts with her …she wasn't even on talking terms with them…. In all this …what kept her going was Meenal's new found Friendship …. N her new found LOVE…..

It wasn't like that she stopped talking …but yeah she remained somewhat saddy saddy….ab mummy papa to sabko pyaare hote hain na…So to keep up her Spirit …Meenal had started a creative thing…which lifted Jaanvi in Seventh heaven….she became really ecstasic …..u noe what that creative thing was…. Imagination of Jaanvi's second meeting with Ryan….cool na!!!!

Jaanvi listened to her story with her heart n mind in it… sometimes it wud be like meeting him at the TAJ MAHAL ….sometimes at the coffee shop….n sumtimes in RAIN….wow!!!!! …she listened to all the stories like a sweet child n never know when slept imagining herself in Ryan's strong shoulders…..

But today …she dint noe ….what made her awake…she jus cudnt sleep …. Her desperation had reached heights…after all it was all an imagination ….nothing that she cud call real….. she dint even noe ..will she ever be able to meet him again…..

In Amsterdam…….

"Shekhar …..actually …I'm thinking to go on an outing!!!!"…..Christine said dis to Shekhar in her usual soft voice….

"No problem maam!!!! …but where?????"

" what bout the City night club????…I've heard that it's the most happening places of Amsterdam"….Christine jus cudnt hide her anxious state of mind….

"Okkay maam!!!….I'll arrange for u ….but it'll take sumtime"

"how much????"……she became all the more restless

"10 minutes only"…..shekhar said smiling n went out to make arrangements….

Within half an hour ..they were ready to go to the night club….

In city night club…..

Ryan was drinking….he dint noe why ..but yeah ..he was drinking…it was already 6 shots ….. n he wasn't in his senses…..

"Ryan!!!!!"…..he heard a voice frm behind…..he turned back to look at her……n kept staring like he had seen an angel…..She is jus so angelic…..so pretty….

"Jaanvi!!!! U look gorgeous!!!!"

"Jaanvi???? Wat happened Ryan??? …RYAN!!! "

Ryan concentrated on her face again…..n losing his balance fell down frm the chair…..

Arya helped him stand up …n made him sit on the chair again…

"Kitne shots le chuke ho…"…she asked sternly…

"bas itna sa…bas …n haan tum to bohot achhi lag rai ho….per pataa nai aajkal kya ho gayaa hai….jahaan dekho bas wo Jaanvi hi dikhti hai ..haan pata nai kyun… sachhi haan…."

"Achha !!!…kyun chedte ho mujhe tum Ryan …mujhe pata hai mere ilaawaa koi nahi tumhaari life mein…koi bhi nahi!!!!"

Only then enterd Christine in the night club….. since she was a very famous n well known celebrity ..people recognized her immediately …n ran towards her for the autograph….. Arya suddenly looked in christine's direction to see why people were running in dat particular direction…

"Hey Ryan!!!…See CHRISTINE D' SOUSA…ur also her fan na….after seeing her I noe why u guys go weak in knees to see her …she is so beautiful….."

Arya kept on telling him bout Christine without noticing the horror in his expressions…..after 20 years he had faced her again….he had again seen the woman who killed his dad…… who snatched away a normal life from him forever……that trauma had come back after 20 years …he cudnt speak …it was like he got paralyzed…he was shivering ….he was mad …..his brain seemed to break into several million pieces….. but suddenly he felt strength in his arms ….yes!!!! …what he wasn't able to do 20 years ago..he'll do it now ….he'll kill her ….shoot her in her head …yes….

He moved in Christine's direction …slowly…

"Ryan!!! …where u goin… ryan"…..screamed Arya

But he cudnt listen ……the world had become mute for him….his eyes were red …blood red …he came in front of her …..n Christine forgot herself in the luv for her son…he was standing in front of her ….how cud she forget this face ….she lived her 20 years for ….she knew it in a moment that it was Ryan….. coz of his uncanny resemblance to his father …… but suddenly he took out the gun…..that day had repeated itself again…only this time it wasn't her 8 year old small son….seeing the gun in his hands …the crowd got mad …… it began to run out of the night club…..When Arya saw the scene …she was shocked …she screamed..

"Ryan…PAAGAL HO GAYE HO KYA…. WAT THE HELL IS THIS PUT THE GUN DOWN…."

But he jus cudnt listen ….his hatred

had reached such height for his mother ..that he jus cudnt listen….the security ran towards him….

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Arya took out her 75 mm pistol….

"STOP IT!!!! …GOD DAMN IT ….. PUT THE GUN DOWN… BLOODY HELL RYAN ….. DROP IT NOW….OR I'LL SHOOT"

seeing that the situation was goin out of hand ….. the security ran towards him …n grabbed him…. N then they started snatching the pistol from his hands….Arya ran towards Christine n took her out of the club….

As soon as they came out ….there was a gun shot……. Arya n Christine ran inside to see …..seeing the scene inside Christine fainted n Arya froze…..

Ryan was shot down coz of his snatching of gun by the security……blood was oozing out of his stomach…….He was immediately rushed towards the hospital where he was declared "BROUGHT DEAD!!!!!!"

Shekhar called up Arya!!!!

"wat happened !!!!! …tell me god damn it"

"He is dead!!!!…..the body has been sent for post mortem!!!"



Arya was calm …as if she knew that this was goin to happen….She called up sumbody…..

"Sir….it worked!!!! My mission is complete now"

In answer came reply frm somebody with a very deep n manly voice….

"Not yet Arya!!!! ….Its only half of it….n u noe what u have to do next…."

"Yes sir…..I'll report to u as soon as everything is well turned out!!!"

"That's what I expect frm u my child….God bless u!!!!"

Saying this Arya switched off her cellphone n went to Christine who was still not conscious…..

"It will be alright now…I promise u …it will be"…saying this she caressed Christine's forehead n got inside the washroom to change….

She came out wearing a blue tight jeans n a tube top n paired it up with a black denim jacket…(I noe u feel like killing me …for describing her dress..hehe)….n then checking herself out in the mirror …she switched on the TV…..n the main headlines was …u very well noe….yes murder attempt on Christine D'sousa …n yes what they were saying was only half d truth , becoz the media itself dint noe that the one who tried to murder her was her very own son….but they knew the rest of the story …as they had almost mobbed the security officials by then……pity that they weren't able to reach Christine in any case….

The news they were showing was thet the guy died before reaching the hospital …n he was may be some contract killer hired by sumone (police is trying to find out)…..but suddenly came the BREAKING NEWS….

"I noe u people will be shocked to hear this news …but yes …the body hasn't reached for the post mortem yet…when we called up the security officials ….n according to them its high time that the dead body dint reach here….. we will try to update u bout the latest events here only …so keep watching CNN … lisa knighthood… reporter CNN with cameraman albert , thanks for watching"

Arya smiled …

"Post mortem ke liye dead body ka hona zaruri hai …per jab koi maraa hi nahi hai …to post mortem kaise ho sakta hai"

But …bang came a thought ..n arya almost felt numb bout the idea….She called up sumbody again…..

"Abhimanyu!!!!"

"bol raha hun!!! "

"Tu ponhonch gaya na !!!! "

"Yes!!! …..its been jus 10 minutes…. "

"n Ryan!!!!! ….. I was always very scared bout this part of the plan!!!"

"I noe!!!…u were completely against it…but u dun worry….kuchh nahi hoga usko …I made sure to reach here in time…n humaara maksad Ryan ko maarna kabhi nahi tha"

" I noe…. How is he!!!!"……her voice became eager

"In the operation theater ….all the arrangements were already done much before I reached here …there are the best doctors doing their best …..I'm sure he'll come out fit n kicking"

" yes I trust Rizwaan sir….nothing can be wrong if he is there….chal … bye"….this time she was on the verge of sobbing

"hey stop it haan….. he is alive ..nt that what they r showing in the news out there"

I noe…u take care"

"Bye"

This side there was someone who dint think of it as merely a coincidence …. None other than Ryan's sweetest enemy Robert…

"They think I'm fool"….said he …to one of his chelas

"wat do u think sir "

"u noe …what it means by no dead body"

"Wat????"

"Ryan is alive …I'm sure…this must be a plan by Samuels to protect him frm the police after what he did in the night club…. This guy has guts …tried to shoot Christine D'sousa !!!!!"

On samuels's side……

"This cant be true…..Ryan cant be dead"….samuels's voice was heavy

"but sir…… he was declared dead in the hospital only….its another matter altogether that his body is missing"

"that bas***d Robert must have done this……if he cudnt get Ryan when he was alive …why nt take himwhen he is dead….Robert is sick….but still I cant believe it….Ryan cant be dead!!!!….he was my ace ….. nobody can be like him…..nobody!!!!"

So now u see …there is a third party behind it …Samuels thinks its Robert n Robert thinks its Samuels…but yes Robert is right …no dead body means RYAN IS ALIVE……HE JUS CANT DIE SO EASILY……

It was 2 hours that Ryan was in the operation theater ….n this was the time that the doctor came out….. Abhimanyu chauhan (gaurav Chopra)…. Was standing there with a very smart n man of great personality Rizwaan Shah (Nasserruddin shah) were standing there waiting for the doctor to come…Rizwaan sir's expression were at ease……as if doctor was goin to say the things he knew very well….Abhimanyu was a little tensed …but Rizwaan sir was right like always…because the doctor's expressions proved it very wel

The police finally declared to the press that the body went missing…n they r trying to find it out …but this in any case wont serve the purpose …becz the dead body wont say by itself why it tried to kill Christine D'sousa……

On this isde Doctor came out all smiling……

"The patient is fine …..we successfully got the bullet out of his abdomen….but u noe it was the difference of jus 2inches…..had the bullet been hit 2 inches above …..he cudnt have survived "

Abhimanyu looked very very guilty …but Rizwaan Shah put hands on his shoulders…he said curtly …

"But it was 2 inches below right !!!!"

Doctor laughed …..

"sahi mein Rizwaan Sahab ….aapse koi bhi nahi jeet sakta…."

"Main bhi kuch aisa hi sochta tha …jab us ladke (ryan) ka baap zinda tha…"

"I noe…..malhotra sir was the best fighter ever"….Abhimanyu said softly…he continued……

"Kitna sunaa hai maine unke bare mein aapse….subah shaam …. Kitna achha hota agar aaj wo humaare beech hote…."

Rizwaan shah felt very proud to hear such words of honour to his best friend Raj….

Isliye to ye sab kiya……only this man can fill that place Raj left twenty years ago…he has got it…the same spark , the same ability , the same courage….."…he said pointing at the operation theater

"Bas bas sir …ab aap fir se shuru mat hona….kyunki agar ek baar aap shuru ho jaate hain unke bare mein ….then there is no full stop…"…..Abhi said laughing n was soon joined by the doctor n Rizwaan saahab himself…..

"I want to see that boy for once…u noe when he was 4 years old ….I came to visit Raj… he(Ryan) came to open the door for me n wen I asked him what his name was ….what he said u noe…. If u dunno my name…..why u came out here….hahahaha…. he was a very naughty child…Christine bhabhi always complained bout his mis deeds when I went there…."

Saying this he went to see Ryan …who was still inside the operation theater…. He kindly caressed his forehead with luv as he was his own son…..

"ise kehte hain kudrat ka karishma ….. Raj hume bhale hi chodd gaya ho … lekin sath mein chod gaya tumhe …… kyunki iss poori duniya mein agar Raj jaisa ya us se behtar koi ho sakta hai …to wo was tum ho…. Jyaada der mat soye rehna …bohot se adhure kaam poore karne hain tumhe…."

Saying this he again touched his forehead n left …..

This side Arya was trying Abhi's number …but it was switched off….she kept on trying but nothing happened …..finally she tried Rizwaan sir….

"Sir abhi phone kyun nahi utha raha hai ….is everything fine…."

"Yes yes my child…that red light …which freaked all of u has been off for quite a time now!!!!!"

"Which red light!!!"

Abhimanyu snatched the phone from him …..

"The red light on the OT …miss tubelight"

"U bas***d …phone uthaane mein itni problem thi tujhe …ki kameeney saandh tune apna cell swich off rakha "

"Kya karun …tujhe sataane mein to mujhe badaa maza aataa hai"

"aane de mujhe ….dekhti hun tujhe main ….jaise tune ryan ko shoot kiya tha na …waise hi main tujhe shoot karungi …wo bhi tere sar mein"

She cut the phone….Rizwaan sir laughingly said to stop these kinds of childish activities…n went away ….Abhimanyu's guilt returned….Rizwaan sir saw this…

"Humne tumhe bola tha aisa karne ko ….ur nt guilty my boy …n Ryan …wo baap pe gaya hai …aisi maamuli si cheez se usko kuch ho bhi nahi sakta tha"

Abhimanyu hugged him warmly like a small child…..

Now I must clear what exactly happened that night…..

First Arya meaningfully talked to Christine bout Ryan …Christine became anxious to see Ryan …..then she reached the night club …where abhimanyu dressed as waiter made to drink him 6 shots one by one ….Ryan was now out of senses …then came Arya n got involved in talks with Ryan …..suddenly Christine entered n Ryan cudnt help it coz the mental trauma that existed in him…..he began to move towards Christine with the murdereous eyes….only then the security guards ran towards him to stop him…by this time Abhi had changed into the security guard…..he got hold of him …n even Ryan noticed that …this man started pointing gun into his Abdomen…but by now there were so many guards …n he wasn't even able to move ….Arya took out Christine safely frm the night club …n only then Abhimanyu was successful in shooting Ryan……In the van in which Ryan was taken to the hospital….Abhi made sure that he put the icepack on tha place where Ryan was shot to perevent as much blood loss as he can…he even insisted to go to the nearest nursing home ….. The doctor who came to see Ryan had no choice but to declare him brought dead…because his family was abducted …..The security guards tried to call the police but abhi insisted that …since the guy is dead …..they should wait for the police to cum by themselves….Police never arrived ….The people who arrived dressed as police were Abhimanyu's team mates ……n then they brought him to the Base ……..where preparations were already made for operating him…when Ryan was being carried with them …Abhi made him wear the oxygen mask so that his breath doesn't stop!!!!!




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Posted: 14 years ago
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so guys here goes the story uptill now ...so keep urself updated ...n yeah comments are very much needed
Sincere thanks to u all once again
Love u all
Akanksha
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yipiiee ... Congrats FF restarted 😃😃😃.,... good for us 😛😛... Now we will get double dose of Rajeev from u Vidit 😳😳 & Ryan 😳😳...

thanx for reposting the previous parts & intro...😃😃... memory refresh hogayi 😍...
since i didn't comment that time so for me it gonna be first time 😆😆😆...

firstly love the name Ryan 😳😳... hai hai ... a criminal 😲😲... but since no police record 😛😛... i will also be part of the people who dont know he is a criminal 😆😆😆

aww chotta sa Ryan 😍... he wud be cute 4 sure 😳😳
but had a very emotional & painful childhood 😭😭... seeing his father die 😭😭...& the brain disease ... poor boy 😭😭...

Must say Ryan grew up to be too smart 😛😛... Poor Sid 😆😆... watt lag gayi bechare ki ... I know U are already aware Ryan 😳😳 ,...but still u are good 😳😳 just 2 gud 😳😳... Jack allen & timothy 😆
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Ryan- Arya 😆 😆... meeting in club 😉😉...

Jhanvi 😆😆😆... poor doodhwala 🤣

Ryan the electrician 🤣... wat a job for Ryan 😳😳... will surely wait for such a electrician 😆😆😆

aww Ryan janvi were made for each other 😆😆😆...

aww Rayan ko goli lagi .. but good to know he is fine 😃😃... get well soon Ryan 😳😳


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since 2 heroines 😛😛...with whom Ryan gets finally paired with in the end 😛... it will be worth watching 😍 ... poor guy ... ya toh heroine milti nahi hai...... aur milti hai toh do do 😆😆😆...\by any chance will Ryan Jhanvi will meet again 😉😉

continue soon 😳😳


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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey dear welcome and thanks a lot for restarting the CC ff...
finally...
will read to refresh and then comment...
thanks for the pm...
wonder how many parts...
me very happy...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow cool!!!!
GOOOD JOB aakki👏👏
i didn't read all of the parts yet but i will sure read them all !!!
thanks for the PM!!!
❤️love yah❤️
esha!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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finally finished reading...
sorry it took sometime...
wanted to read at a go...
awesome dear...
all the scenes are refreshed now u better start posting the next parts...
Jhanvi's voice, hindi and ghaalis were so hilarious...
Ryan is suffering from that horrible headache...
hope he understands that his mom loved his dad and loves him also...
Jhanvi is missing Ryan and also Ryan Jhanvi...
hope they meet soon...
good that hes fine now...
cont ASAP dear...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi akki...at last i am done!!!!

awesome story with lots of mysteries!!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️

so janvi is gone!!!...wow janvi n arya's character is awesome👏👏👏...arya is an agent👍🏼

janvi's Hindi is horrible!!!😆😆😆

arya is in love with ryan unknowingly that he is a DON😆😆😆

arya is ryan's GF😳😳😳

janvi misses ryan

i really don't know if its a RN fiction, aur pata to tab chale ga jab tum update karo gi...so plz update soon

love yah

esha




Edited by nainaahsingh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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welcum back again with this superb story
well it really feels gud to see this story moving ad will now get its end too
its so nice of u that u r write all the parts in one go so dat we can again get ourselves updated and with in the flow of the story
well looking forward for the more updates sooner
its feel refreshing again and all those beautiful memories of ryan n jhanvi cum along
thank u so much for the story
pls do pm me further
tc
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Posted: 14 years ago
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So finally I l be updating the story today ...I am nt so pleased by the response though ...I wanted some more comments ...m one greedy person when it cums to the comments
But since its been long n pple have nothing new to read I can understand
Thanks to all who commented ...m very pleased
Today the story actually restarts ... I l be hoping sum more comments this time though

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