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Posted: 14 years ago
#91
waiting for the update ... well, Fire, if u don't then who else know ?? ... 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Waiting 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Immoral WORLD
Part 17



sometime open, with maans influence yet closes her self instantly when he shows his anger... Always wondering what's playing in his mind.

She laid there silent. Unaware about the storm it's about to hit. The howling wind crashed against the windows. She jumped. Somewhere her back gently touched maan. He did not wake up. He was in deep sleep. She sat up, trying to ignore the wolf noise. But nothing seems to work. She took few pillows from the side and left it on her left side and maan on her right. She felt protected for some reason, even though maan was there, whose mind could change any moment of time. His hand slides round her waist and firmly brings her close. She dare not breath in fear of waking him up. God knows how els he will behave. It took her time to slowly lay down next to him... She observed his curious face for a moment. She really did wonder what's different about him, sometime she fears her, sometime she completely takes her to 7th haven... And Sometime... She was not sure...

She woke up early. Maan is still sleeping. Silently, calm. She wanted to crease his cheek but feared. What if he shouts! She slowly slides off. Then walks in to the washroom. Making minimal noise as possible. Geet her self wondered was she doing this for not to wake him up in love or doing it because of the fear. She did not want to make him upset. Either way, she could not disturb him at all. She quickly rushes out towards the kitchen to make his coffee. Chamily sat there, cutting vegetable.
Chamily "you are very early!"
Geet "ha! Oh actually!"
Chamily "coffee is ready!"
Geet "thank you!"
Chamily "have you asked him about your new sir name?" geet bites her tongue. She have completely forgot!
Geet "I am scared he will shout!"
Chamily "what do you mean?"
Geet "he have restricted told me not to ask any question!"
Chamily "so! It's your haqe to ask him question! You are his wife!"
Geet "but, what if he.. S..." she couldn't say the word. She obviously did not want to say how her husband behaves.
Chamily "yes! What is it?
Geet "what If he shouts?"
Chamily "what? But why would he?... And you should..." chamily couldn't finish when maan calls geet. He was standing few step way. She shivered again. Smiled.
Maan "I need my coffee now."
Geet "it's ready." she flowed maan to there bedroom. She steps in and he locks the door. Geet left the coffee on the table and was about to leave but maans hand blocks her. She jumps Successfully avoided his touch.
Geet "hame bohot kam hi!"
Maan "what were you saying to chamily?" she looks at maans eyes. Which somewhere was in between calm and anger!"
Geet "no-t!"
Maan "don't you dare lie!"
Geet "why you behaving like this?" she makes a pleading voice. Not understanding what exactly going on. She cried, and somewhere was very scared.
Maan "why are you crying? Have I told you anything?" ... Geet nodes a no! "then? Why you telling chamily our private conversation?" last few words came as concern and care tone then demanding tone. His face color changed from anger to concern... He portrayed a disbelieving face. Disgraced at geets attitude. "geet..." his voice softens. He softly holds her Arm flowed by some few gentle stroke. Closing the gap between there body... "geet... What ever we do in between this 4 wall, it's our. It's not to share with someone... It's not to be told like a story. It's our life." she staid quit,almost lost in his seductive voice. "you know we have ups and down but that's not mean you should go around telling everyone." geet went in thoughtful mood. "do you ever tell them when we love one another?" geet blushed and looked down! "exactly, if you just tell them when we argue, then of course they will worry about us for no reason. Like now we are perfectly fine but chamily will be worrying about you." she looks at maan in concern. He was correct.




Geet "maan... Hame mafe kar di jiye! I really never thought about it!" maan gives her a another disbelieve smile. He wipes her tears way, and shows her the coffee which turned cold...
Geet "I will get you a another one." maan nodes and smiles.

Soon was she walked out he punched the wall hard.. How dare she tells someone els about them! How dare she? The thought he did not have the control over her with his anger made him violent... But the thought if chamily knows anything about them she will tell someone els, and there will be suspicion! And god knows what he have told geet in his drunk state!... This girl, he needs to do something before she opens her mouth again...

Geet walks back in to the kitchen... Chamily looked at her in concern... "is everything alright?
Geet "ha! Ha!" she gives her a uncomfortable smile!
Chamily "no you are nit alright! What happen? Have maan sabe told you something?"
Geet "no! No! Why would he say anything?"
Chamily smiled yet she could Clearly see her fake smile... She leaves the grocery at the sight and picks her self up and walks towards geet... "you can tell me!" she looks at her in concern... But suddenly she snaps...
Geet "there are nothing to say! What would you like to here?" that was the first time she actually raised her voice... Chamily looked at her in shock... This is not her geet... The baby geet...

Chamily "geet... Are you alright?

Geet "why what have happen to me?"

Chamily "this is this is the first time I have seen you shouting... What happen?" she asked in a worry voice. Very concern. This is not her geet...

Geet "I am perfectly fine... Nothing is wrong with me... Why you asking me so many question... You know whatever happens between me and maan its our private talk." chamily was certain she have changed now... There wasn't a single day that geet never have told her secret... In everything... Even when she was upset...

Chamily "geet.."

Geet "this coffee getting cold again..." she spoke rather in rude manner and walked off...

Chamily stood there in surprise. She was not sure exactly how to react... What have happened to her?

Maan stood in his room, almost ready to leave for brij job he have suggested , at the same time he maybe able to ask few question about his brother dev. He is going no where, and this only making him more frustrated day by day. He have no idea what exactly to do now... And at the same time he have put him self in a big mess...


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Posted: 14 years ago
#94
me first for the first time🥳

sorry for commenting late as there was power faliure coming to the update awesome dear the story is becoming more and more interesting and though maan loves geet he supress his love only because he has to find out about dev
Edited by abinash079 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95
awesome part...👏👏
love it...


Edited by butterfly.tanu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96

CAn this maan be any cruel? she just made her one good friend against her..
he is manipulating her… omg idk what to say.
you are mind blowing. love the way you have presented this.
but pls maan don't do this.
its so crul.
i am crying.
its hurting me.
this ff making me insane.


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Edited by Maansexi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97
plz sweety don't want to se more of remorse
plz clear relation between maan n geet
all the parts r good
wanting too see rano n brij being punished by maan
geet is pregenent
maan should accept the child
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98
i hate this maan 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡 feeling pity for geet😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
#99
nice update
maan is being so manipulative with geet
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Posted: 14 years ago
"puppy" ..Maan
I wish Brij Shoot Him Too..
Brij rano cheating Geet OK, after all they need money ..BUT Maan ..when he clearly knows how innocent
Geet is ..and Brijs plan against her still he treating ..ohk if he dont like, treat her like that ... he can shout ..i can understand ..but this cunning cheating attitude that makes me bring my Dear cat again sorry Fire ...
This Maan Is
ole



Edited by an.anit - 14 years ago

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