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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter IV
Next morning, mount college girls' hostel, 6:00am
Piya was fast asleep and Aleena was also sitting in the bed next to piya. Suddenly, piya woke up and was very surprised as she found herself in the hostel. Aleena told her about last night' but piya was still in her two minds about last night. She could remember that last night she was in jungle, rain and she rolled down to the road where she was about to hit by car but a mysterious person saved her and she remembered those two electric blue hypnotic eyes and those strong arms where she was easily fitting. His chiseled face and strong built body was still imprinted in her mind and soul forever. She decided not to talk about the person because she thought that aleena would think that she has lost it.
Piya: where I am' who took me here' my head is aching so badly' oh god'
Aleena: last night' I found you laying near the main road' you were unconscious' so I checked your back-pack and found your details and took you here' you were so weak' I think you hadn't eaten properly from last morning' I will ask the warden to arrange the breakfast in your room only... dear'and by the way, I am Aleena'Aleena raichand'
Piya: thanks'thanks a lot Aleena'it is so sweet of you that you took me here' agar tum nahi hoti toh pata nahi main kis halat me hoti' ok Aleena I will talk to you after I freshen up' thanks once again'
Aleena: oh piya' it's ok' tum itni sweet aur innocent ho ki agar wahan main na hoti toh zaroor koi aur tumhari help kar deta' hum baad Mei baat karenge pehle tum fresh ho jao'
After piya gets freshen up, she asks Aleena to freshen up and use her belongings. When both Aleena and piya got freshen up, they decided to talk, as there was still at least 2 hours to kill.
Aleena: so piya tell me something about you' I think you are my types and we can share a good friendship'
Piya: what to tell you about me' I was brought up by my aunt Martha as my mother died about 9 yrs ago after my dad left both of us' then I got scholarship and now I am sitting before you' ok now Aleena tell me something about you'
Suddenly, aleena's mobile rings and she took the call' it was misha's.
Misha: where are you Aleena, dude'? I was waiting for your call'
Aleena: mish' shut up your mouth and listen me' I have a surprise for you' come straight to the mount college girls' hostel' do you get that' come as soon as possible' bye'
Misha: ok... I am on the way I will reach there in just few minutes'bye...
After talking to misha, Aleena tells piya about misha'
Piya: who was that Aleena'?
Aleena: she was my friend'piya' just like you and I am sure you will like her and she will like you'
Piya stretches her hand towards Aleena: so friends????
Aleena shakes hands with piya: friends forever' for sure'
Then misha enters the hostel room all of a sudden like a storm.
Misha: where the surprise Aleena' is it a new adventure trip or what' Hey, who is this girl sitting beside you'
Aleena: this is your surprise'chipmunk' meet her'she is piya'piya jaiswal'remember her'whom you were talking about last night'and piya, this is the monkey of our college, misha'misha dobriyal'
Misha: hey' piya' I am misha'misha dobriyal' and for your kind information Aleena, your brother is the donkey of the college' and by the way where is he'
Piya: nice to meet you misha' I will like to be friends with you too' and you did not tell about your brother Aleena' I would like to meet him too' he must be sweet just like you'
Suddenly, aleena's mobile rings again and this time it was abhay's call' she leaves piya and misha talking to receive the call.
Misha: lo naam liya aur shaitaan haazir' us kharoos ka naam hi liya ki uska phone AA Gaya'piya, galti se bhi mat samjhna ki Aleena ka bhai bhi uski tarah hi hoga'
Piya: toh phir tum hi batao ki kaisa hai woh'
Misha: Aleena aur uske bhai ke beech mai zameen asmaan ka farak hai'ek aag toh ek paani' Aleena itni cool aur friendly hai aur uska bhai just opposite'
Piya: but Abhay is a nice name' don't you think so'
Misha: hey' piya' a word of advice' please don't get into boys like him' he is a loner' achcha lets be friends'.
Piya hugs misha: friends'.
Aleena enters in the room and asks misha and piya for leave as Haseena called her back home'
Then misha and piya get ready to leave for the college' piya wears a cute purple top with matching white jeans on it... she left her hairs flowing back... and put two small matching clips on them... she put a fresh coat of lip gloss and left for the college with misha...
At raichand mansion, 7:15am
Aleena entered the mansion with a great speed. Haseena could feel that both Abhay and Aleena were there in their deep thoughts about something. Chand was out of the town for some business purpose, Haseena was standing near the staircase for a quick questionnaire with Aleena, but Aleena wanted to see Abhay as soon as possible.
Haseena: ohh... you are back... I can feel that something is troubling you and Abhay' tell me Aleena as he is not going to open up so easily'and Aleena' where were you all-night' I can feel something fishy going in between you and Abhay'tell me fast'
Aleena: mom' yesterday night I had a vision about zaara's rebirth that she was heading towards dehradun as a scholarship student and she would reach here by night' zaara's rebirth' piya'piya jaiswal has reached the town and I was with her all-night'
Haseena: what was so urgent that you had to stay with her all-night'imagine if she had developed some suspicions on you' and'what have you both planned for now to save her from that bitch'?
Abhay comes downstairs: mom' I have decided to leave the town today and shift to a different place, Aleena will be there for saving her from other dangers', and I am not going to change my decision for anyone'
Haseena: I do not think Abhay that this is a nice plan as that b***h is always one-step ahead from you' I think we must do something else'and what if zaara knows that she has reborn this time' what will you do then'
Abhay: for now'this is my plan and I will need to change it then I will change it accordingly'and I want you to convince dad about my plan, as he will not listen me'
Aleena: don't worry mom' she doesn't know anything about her past and' actually she nearly escaped a fatal accident and got unconscious so I had to take her to the hostel and so I had to stay with her' and she has not even have suspicions on me'
Then Abhay rushes to his room and leaving Aleena and Haseena behind. Downstairs, Aleena asks Haseena to support Abhay in his plan otherwise; he will definitely break this time if he will not be able to make her safe.
Then Aleena rushes to abhay's bedroom upstairs where Abhay was waiting for her eagerly.
Abhay: how is she now' does she know about her past birth or not'did she ask about me' tell something Aleena'? I am waiting for an answer'
Aleena: bro' chill' she is fine now' and I think she has no idea about her past as zaara' but I think if you are thinking to leave the town then do so as fast as possible' I guess she doesn't remember about last night also'
Abhay: yeah' you are right' I think mussorie will be the best place to shift for me and I will easily get an admission there in the college'
Aleena: yeah bhai' phir agar aapki jaroorat padegi then you can reach us easily as its near to dehradun' that's a nice idea' by the way'when are you leaving'
Abhay: as soon as possible' by the way' how is piya'
Aleena: she is very friendly and innocent' I have made her my friend and misha also has developed a friendship with her'
Abhay: oh, that is nice' achcha get ready for the college' you are getting late...
Aleena: yups' I know'
Aleena leaves abhay's room and rushes in her room to get ready for the college. Abhay also packs his belongings to leave for mussorie.
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Edited by swatiluvsabhiya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter V
Dehradun, mount college, corridors, 7:30am
All the corridors of the college were filled with students. Freshers were arriving and some seniors were busy in ragging them. T and her bimbo chamchis were also ragging the freshers with their useless ideas.
Piya and misha arrived to the college and unfortunately, t saw piya with misha…
T: Oh, see someone has a behenji with her… umm…if I am not wrong then she is the so-called piya jaiswal… poor charity case…
Misha: t… you must better step out of our way either you will not find yourself in one piece after this moment…
T: misha… I am talking to this charity case… since she is a fresher so she has to do what I ask her and you will not be able to save her from me…
Misha: ok… t... do whatever you want… piya is not coward like you and your chamchis so… piya show them what you are…
T: fine… charity case… go and give a tight slap to the boy sitting over that bench with his friends all around him…
Misha: what are you saying… you want piya to slap Kabir that to in front of his friends… you are taking revenge from Kabir in this way… you are so cheap you b***h…
Piya: leave it… I'll manage… and t just wait and watch… I'll show you that what I am made up of…
After this piya went to Kabir with an innocent face and slapped him tightly. She used her innocent face and charms to cool Kabir down. Kabir started fuming with anger but after seeing innocent face of piya, he forgot about his anger.
Piya: please… I am so sorry…dear… do not take this to your heart… this is just part of my ragging so I had to do this…
Kabir: oh... no problem… I know who is behind this cheap act…and by the way… I am always ready to be slapped from a beautiful woman like you…you are such sweet…
Misha came and introduced both of them. And the trio headed towards the college main corridor.
Aleena was standing near and seeing all this drama (to herself): this chick is sure a firecracker… quite changed but one thing is still intact is her purity and innocence… I wish I could make your and abhay's life easier… but for now your safety is my priority and duty… this is for you bro… just for you…
Then, Aleena came to the group and met them warm-heartedly.
Principal asked everyone to assemble in the assembly ground after their first lectures; panchi who had already passed out the college came to meet misha and Kabir. She welcomed piya warm-heartedly and asked her to feel herself as a part of the dobriyal family. Everyone headed towards his or her classes. First day of the class was all about introduction of new students and their assignments. Teachers and other students asked aleena about Abhay but she made excuses.
Dehradun, at raichand mansion, 10:45am
Abhay was about to leave for mussorie and Haseena came to bid him goodbye. She asked him to take care about his identity and Abhay in return asked Haseena to take care of aleena and piya in his absence.
Dehradun, mount college, assembly ground, 11:00am
After the first lectures, everyone assembled in the assembly ground. Principal announce that he is going to organize a adventurous trip for all the students to mussorie so that they can be able to know each other very well and asked them to take further information from panchi as she was the organizer of the camp. Everyone was very excited about the trip.
Panchi: piya this will be your first trip from the college… hope you enjoy it… if you want to ask for anything don't hesitate and surely come to me…
Piya: sure…panchi… there is no doubt about it… and I am looking forward toward it…
Misha: wow… panchi mujhe nahi pata tha ki tumhare paas itna brain hai ki tum ek adventure trip plan karo… tumne bourn vita piya yaa phir boost… kyonki complan peene se toh height badti hai…
Panchi: mish… you are so irritating sometimes….
Everybody was delighted and excited with the trip. There was a half day at the college so that students could prepare for the trip. Everyone goes back to their home. Misha, panchi, aleena, piya and tracker decide to go for shopping after the college to buy necessary items for the trip.
After shopping, misha plans to take piya to her house to meet her parents.
Dehradun, dobriyal house, 7:30pm
Finally, after a lot of shopping, all the girls went to their houses to pack their belongings for the trip. Panchi and misha insisted Piya to come to their house to meet their parents. So, piya went to dobriyal house with panchi and misha. Misha introduced piya to her mother, madhu dobriyal. Panchi's father was out of town for some business meeting so piya couldn't meet him. Misha told madhu about piya's past life and madhu sympathized with piya.
Misha: mom … see what I brought for you... another daughter…. Ye piya hai… aapko achhi lagegi kyonki ye panchi ka chota version hai…
Piya: hello… aunty nice to meet you…
Madhu: hello beta tum hame apna parivaar hi samjho and jab bhi tumhe hamari zaroorat hogi we will be there for you beta…
Piya: Thank you, aunty… it's getting late so must leave now…
Madhu: piya tum aaj raat yahi rook jayo aur kal yahi se trip per chali jaana… mujhe achha lagega…
Misha: haan piya tum yahi rook jaao kal saath mein trip ke liye niklenge…
Piya: misha… main yaha kaise rook sakti hoon, mera saara saamaan hostel me hai and phir warden ki permission bhi nahi hai…
Misha: arre...piya do not fear when misha is here… mom permission lelenge… aur rahi baat tumhare saamaan ki toh chalo main tumhare sang hostel chalti hoon aur tum apna saamaan le aanaa…
Piya: theek… hai lekin bas aaj ke liye….
Madhu takes permission from the warden, misha and piya went to hostel to take piya's belongings from the hostel.
Both of them come back, and after taking their dinner, both of them packed their bags for the trip and fell asleep.
Dehradun, dobriyal house, 10:30pm
After taking their dinner, piya, panchi and misha packed their bags for the trip and fell asleep. This is the first time that piya had a different dream. After her mother, sugandh's death, she never had a dream of her mother and this was the first time she had her dream.
Piya's dream
Piya's mother stepped in her dream gracefully with her hands stretched towards piya. She was glowing with pride and content. She was dressed in piya's favorite pink sari which she wore on her last birthday before everything went wrong. Piya went and hugged her mother as tightly as she could. Piya wanted to share a lot with her mother.
Piya: momma… I missed you so much and I love you a lot…
Sugandh: piya…my baby girl… I always wanted that you must reach all the heights of success and achieve everything that I couldn't. When you were small, I used to fear that whether you will be able to live without me or not, but you proved me wrong and lived bravely without me… and piya… there is something that is very important…
Piya: what mom… what is so important…
Sugandh: piya…dear…I always told you that you are the most special child that anyone can have and you have came to change a lot of lives. You don't have any special power other than the power of love. With your power, you will rise the fallen, with your power, you will change the rule of nature, and you are the most special person on the earth.
There is someone important who is going to enter in your life soon. And I will advise you to always listen to your heart because your heart is of gold and will never betray you even if everything is in opposition. Most importantly, never back off in your life as the path you choose at the first place is the noblest path anyone can choose…
Piya: what are you saying mom… I can't figure out anything…
Sugandh: I knew that you will say the same thing but when the right time will come then you will understand everything… till then fight like a brave girl for your life, for yourself. Now I must depart it's getting late. Remember my words and do as your heart says…
Then sugandh's figure blurred in the air and piya stood gazing the place where sugandh was standing. She was still busy in making sense out of what her mother said some time before.
Back into reality
Today, piya slept very peacefully and was very happy with her dream. It was about 8 years that piya never dreamt of her mother but now she was very happy.
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so i guess you all will like my treat and abhay may have left dehradun but he hasnt left piya all helpless...
piya willsurely meet abhay with double the speed he has left her...
abhiya will soon meet and there will be more on abhiya after 2-3 updates...
till then send your feedbacks on these two chappies...
regards...
swati...!!!! 😳
Edited by swatiluvsabhiya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
both updates were really fantastic
they were surely a treat for us😃
misha and pia's friendship is blossoming i m really happy at this
i hope we will get to see abhay pia meeting in coming update
the trip is ought to be very exciting
thanks for the pm and continue giving us treats like this
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
wow yaar loved both ur updates.Destiny planned 2 bring Abhiya 2gether.Pia is going 2 masoorie 2 b wid Abhay.Sugandh was hinting Pia abt Abhay I guess.I m happy the way u r planning out all😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
WOW SWATI AWESOME UPDATE LUV U DEAR
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
really nice updates


thnx 4 t pm
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#77
aww..cute update..liked it :) thanks for the pm..continue soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78

wonderfull update😊


thank xx for pm mee😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
SO Zaara is Abhay's love...
Awesome update..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
Awesome update! I hope Abhiya meet soon! Eagerly looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊

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