Dilon key rastay dil se dil tak part 13 on pg 1

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😉 hi friend this is one of my ff here is the old link
dilon kay rasatay dil se dil tak
and today part and a gift 4 u all :

Sorry friends updating my ffs after a really long time but this is a valentine gift 4 u all hope u all like it and plz do leave ur comments I will be honured

topic index:

part 12 :page 1

part 13 : page 1😉

Part 11:

Nupur is wearing blue saree nt full and heavily dressed like a bridal but she was like simple but beautiful bride .she was standing at the window looking at the birds sitting at the tree infront of the window ,the birds were sitting together and singing in their own sweet voice which was some feeling in nupur but why was this happeing she hate man then why fews lines said by mayank were making so big imoact on her but then she heard a knock on the door and she moved maynk love thoughts away and opned the door and saw pritha standing with a breakfast tary in her hand with a smile .

Nupur let her in the room ,pritha puttes the tray on the table and hugged nupur tightly .nupur gt confused but smiled simply .pritha relised nupur from the hugs and say" thanks nupur 4 coming into our life and secially mayank life , he is so simple and caring person .juts takecare of him he has only u and his brother only never let him fall apart "

Nupur just moved his head in yes but she didn't knew why she was saying yes to pritha 4 a promise she is never going to meant?

Pritha leaves the room by saying come down in half because she has to go a pag paiary ki rasam at her mayaka .

Nupur was lost again why she is this man effecting her , is he true or same bloody crap of men cast ?

But then mayank came from the washroom wearing casual trouser with a t shirt and he saw nupur standing at the window .he was about to moved toward her but then he saw a proper suit 4 him layed ob the bed and her shoes on the floor and he smiled to himself that nupur is already started her wife duties and started caring 4 him .mayank moved toward nupur and stood behind her but saw nupur lost somewhere and he puts his hand on nupur shoulder and she turns like she got sacred but the turn made mayank sad because he saw tears rolling on nupur cheeks .nupur saw mayank standing behind her and looking at her tears and she tried to remived the tears by her hand but in the middle mayan hand were on her cheeks and he took the tears in his hand and looked at nupur and nupur saw the same tears in his eyes and was just staring at mayank.

"yeh ansu kyun nupur , tum tik hona yahan"says mayank

"who '.who '''mein '''..mama"says nupur she couldn't complete the sentence

"tum royo mat pur hum abhi jayin gayi mama kay pass .mein ik ansu bhi nahi daik sakta in chand si palkon mein"says mayank

"who bhabi nasta day kar gayi hian who ap karain phir pad pairon kay liyay humein mama kay pass jana hai aur who apka suit bhi nikal diya hai meinay par agar apko pasand''.."saying nupuy but mayank putted a hand on her lips and says"tumhey jo pasnad hain who meri pasand hai kyun ki meri pasand tum ho aur meri sundar si princess ki pasand bhi sundar hi hai right,princess"

Nupur cheek goes red and she look here and there which didn't go unnoticed by mayank and to relief the enviriment 4 nupur he says" waisay aj nasta bhabhi ne apki pasand ka banay hai "and nupur simply smiles

They get dressed and mayank is waiting nuupur downstair meanwhile he has areday given order to everyone specially samar and pritha not to him and not infront of nupur u see newly married~@

They all are waiting 4 nupur and then heard payal sound coming from staires wearin red saree wit matching jewellery and he was just starring nupur and was admiring her beauty

NUPUR DRESS:

She came downstairs and mayank was still staring at her and nupur was looking down because everyone was looking at them and mayank recives a elboe from samar and samar say"sharam kar behsharam teri hi biwi hai sab jay samney gurna band kar aur nuour ko shraminda mat kar bechari sharam se lal ho rahi hai romeo"

And mayank looks at nupur who is red and mayank says"ouch ' and nupur moves toward maynk but stops herself as it was a joke but mayank notice her feeling but to not further emabris her more they moves toward the cars and leaves 4 nupur house.

NUPUR HOUSE:

Everyone is realyy hapy 4 the pag pairey ki rasam and specilly he mother but someone is nt in deep tension and that person is gunjun and she wants to see hr di now and then they geard car horn and gunjun and their mother goses towards the door and saw mayank and nupur standing at the door .Nupur see gunjun face whixh is totally balnked as she knew this was the next phase of her plan to convince hr own her sister 4 the dangerous plan

What are the plan of the Nupur to test the marriage?gunun is ready to end some one dreams to make her sister feel satified? Nupur having affect of mayank is true or just pretending by nupur to move the plan at next level?is mayank going to know about nupur plan?

hope u all will like it

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Part 13:

Nupur and Mayank bakshi are standing on the airport for their departure to Mumbai ,then nupur saw gunjun and runs and hugs and starts crying .gunjun make her sister quite after several trys.mayank came back from the canteen and is holding two drinks in his hand and he saws nupur tears in her eyes while standing next to gunjun and he came says hi to gunjun and tells her they don't need to worry 4 nupur she will be perfectly ok and happy with him .after few min they sit in the plan ,he is talking to nuour to make her feel happy but nupur is acting weird ,she turns her face around here and there and closes her eyes and sleeps.mayank thinks about her behaviour and feel may be she is going away from her family and relax not known of what nupur bakshi has planned 4 him.

They both reaches home and nupur enter the house traditionally and nupur goes into her room and jumps on her bed and starts talking like a kid she says"this is my bed I will only sleep here hehe"

Mayank says"not yours its our bed we both r going to sleep here"

Nupur says"no no no its mine only mine "and turns her face away thinking about his reaction and mayank is getting shocks from his dear wife

In evening mayank prepare the food and they both starts eating food suddenly nupur throws a plate on the floor and mayank gets shocked again and asks her what happen

Nupur says"I don't like the food I am not eating I want mama food now now"

Mayank says"kiya hoga hai tumhein nupur why r u behaving so weird since we came back to Mumbai r u feeling ok na"

Nupur says "I am k u r good mama says u will do as I says but u r not listning to me u r very bad bad bad"

Mayank says " nupur why r u talking like a child u r a grown up girl stop this this is not a time 4 a joke"

Nupur says" what joke mein kuch nahi kiya mein to aisi hi hoon mama ney bataya hi nahi kiya "

Mayank says"what"with open mouth he didn't moved 4 few mins and think this cannt happen to me ,no way nupur is mentally ill , she is ok mayank then he stops him self and says to himself if she is k then why behaving like this and goes to his room ,nupur saw him going and text gunjun as next step is in her hand .

In delhi gunjun made her mother sleep early today as she knew whats going to come and suddenly her phone ring and mayank jiju name flashes on her screen and she is getting the courage to face his jiju and after few min she picks up the phone and says"hello"

On the other says "gunjun tumho"says mayank

"ji jiju ap kaisey hain di ab tik haina "says gunjun while crushing her teeths

"ab tik hai ka matlab gunjun I want to ask u something and plz dnt lie to me today why is nupur acting weird I meant like a child like she is mentally ill , r u all hiding something from me "says mayank all in one go

"jiju who '''.who'''.."says gunjun

"plz gunjun bolo I will die this "says mayank

"jiju plz dnt say like this this baat yeh hai key nupur ko bachpan mein brain hamrig hua tha aur uskey baad di start behaving like a child and doctors told if she get married she will be normal again and we got her married par it might take some time 4 her to be normal again "says gunjun

"what? There is a long silence from both sides and then mayank speaks again "kaun kaun janta tha is baraye mein samrat aur pratha bhi ya sirf tum log"in anger

"sirf hum jiju samrat bhaya aur pratha di ko to pata bhi nahi ,plz jiju ap agar pyar se di to treat karain gay to she will be ok ''"before gunjun could have said further mayank hang up the phone and goes to his room and lock himself up in the room meanwhile nupur goes in her room next to mayank one and closes the door and text gunjun "kiya hua"

A text flashes on nupur phone and its says "ap ne jo kaha meinay wahi kiya di but I am hating myself 4 this today I hurted a honest and lovely person and I will not be able to forgive myself ever 4 this I hate my self di "

Nupur reply backs " I am sorry gunjun I made u do this but plz 4 me few more days act this I am sorry "

Next morning mayank comes into nupur room after thinking all night that he is being tested by luck again and if he able to make nupur normal again ,I love her from bottom of my heart I will anything to make her normal again ,in one of the vows if the wedding I promised her to protect and keep her happy and I will die ding this and may be my god will listen to me , love is the biggest cure 4 anything and he will let anyone hurt his love and he will one day get the love he is giving and smile while see nupur sleeping and come and sits beside and thinks how a person is honest and happy in her sleep ,dnt know what she had beared her in her life but he will keep her happy and smiling again and that's a promise of mayank bakshi and I don't break my promise jaan.

He trys to wake nupur and in her sleep she says"soney do na mama plz muje nahi jana hai mandir ap jayo and she cover her face with the blanket

Mayank smile and u r so cute princess and says "come on nupur ab utho its morning now I am making your breakfast and I want you there in 10 mins k "

Mwanwhile nupur thinks it's a dream after yesterday he wont be doing this and then she hears a voice from kitchen utho jayo nupur I am coming and she gets up in shock and says " by god yeh kiya hogaya hai yeh mayank ka bacha to mujhe hi shock treatment dey raha hai oye nupur bakshi uskey bachey kahan heuy hain he didn't even touch u yet and bache chatho is baton ko nupur who araha hai tu gayi kaam door bathroom mein warna pata chalay who hi tujey bath dey raha hai "and she runs

Mayank enters the room with a tray of break fast and says "kaha ho princess "

And then nupur comes from the washroom wear this dress:

And mayank is just starring at nupur and nupur is looking at mayank

Precap:

What mayank is going to get his love back ?will nupur plan will failed against mayank efforts? Will love blossom in between them ?

This is it 4 today friends hoep u all like it and do leave ur comments I will ove to see them

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome updates...!
very curious to know wats gonna happen further,,,
pl continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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superb update dear...am happy dt nupur's plan failed...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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fantastic update dear
loved it so much
now i m eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: mjhtnupurmayank

Awesome updates...!

very curious to know wats gonna happen further,,,
pl continue soon...

thanks dear😉
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Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome updates.
loved them
continue soon

thanks di 😉
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Originally posted by: achoose

superb update dear...am happy dt nupur's plan failed...

thanks dear agreed nupur failed this but hwo know her future plans and mayanks 😊
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thanks dear😊
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Originally posted by: -Faria-

fantastic update dear
loved it so much
now i m eagerly waiting for next part

thanks dear 😊

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