FF(Maneet):Dil mil gaye Thrd 2 Upd prt 34 pg 140 - Page 54

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Awesome VM
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amazing vm..thanks piya n roopali
wish u a very very Happy Birthday Roopali
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Awesome Vm... luved the song...
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So sweet of maan love him amazing update plz continue soon and add me in ur pm list thnx

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awesome vm
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hey wen r u going to update next part

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Thank you dear friends for your encouragement and love. Here is the next part i hope u like it
PART 32

Geet was surprised 'this thing was actually a wax statue of Geet and that too in a bridal outfit

Geet ki aakhon mein khushi ke aasu jhilmilane lagte hai

Maan comes and stands besides her

Geet: Maan'ye sab aapne

Maan places his finger on her lips

Maan: Kuch mat kaho geet'kuch mat kaho

He removes his finger and places his hand on her shoulders

Maan: Jaanti ho geet ye saari cheeze jo maine aaj tumhare liye kiye hai wo unn saari khushyion se kaafi kum hai jo ke tumne mujhe diye hai

Geet: Nahi Maan aisa nahi hai'

Maan: Aisa hi hai geet jaanti ho jab maine ye ghar khareda tab ye sirf ek char deewarowala makan tha'phir maine socha ke agar isse sahi maayine mein meri mishty ka dream house banana hai toh phir mujhe iss makan mein har uss cheez ko laana hoga jo ke tumhari roshni iss ghar mein bekher sakhe

Geet looks lovingly at Maan

Maan: Shuruwat maine iss statue se ki'

Maan: Maine iss statue mein tumhari har wo kashish har wo ada sametna chaha jiski tum ek lauti maalikin ho' uss rab ne bus duniya mein ek hi anmol heera khud apne haatho se tarasha hai aur wo meri mishty hai'

Maan: Magar main iss koshish main nakamiyaab ho gaya aur aaj jab tum iss statue ke saamne khadi ho tab maine jaana k ye statue tumhari parchayi ka bhi mukabla nahi kar sakthi

Geet had tears in her eyes

Maan dheere se unhe poch detha hai

Maan geet ka haath thamkar usse ghar ke dusare hisse mein le jaata hai

He opens the door of a room

The room was full of Geet's favourite things

Maan had given a special touch to this room which made geet feel that she always belonged here

Maan: Geet iss room mein tumhe tumhari har wo pasanditha cheez milegi jo k tumhare zindagi se judaa hua hai

Geet: Maan ye curtains'

Maan: Tumhe iss pattern k curtains behet pasand hai na' toh maine thik waise hi curtains iss room mein lagadiye...inhe jab kabhi bhi dekhta tha mujhe tumhare gehre palko ki yaad aa jaati thi jiska saaya inn pardo se bhi lakh guna dilkash aur gehra hai

Maan pardo ko hatatha hai

Geet is astonished to see the magical sight that greeted her eyes

There was a garden full of her favourite flowers mainly red roses

Geet: Maan ye aapne kabse'

Maan: Ye plants maine uss din se lagane shuru kiye jis dinse mere dil par dheere dheere tumne apni mauhar lagani shuru ki

Geet: Maan itne khoobsurat phool maine aaj tak nahi dekhe'

Maan: Main ye baat kabhi nahi maan saktha' haan ye sach hai k ye phool wakai mein khoobsurat hai magar duniya ke kisi bhi bageeche mein tumare jaisa gulab nahi hai geet ye main dave se keh saktha hoon

Maan: Wo chand dekhrahi ho geet' jab kabhi bhi tum iss kamre se usse dekha karogi tab bhale hi wo badalo se dhira pada hoga tab bhi wo kisi na kisi tarah se uss gheere ko paar karta hua tumhare chehre ko salami dene ke liye bahar zaroor aayega

Maan: Meri Mishty ka jaduu hai hi aisa'

Maan takes her inside'

Geet: maan ye toh mera favourite teddy hai...

She goes and hugs the teddy

Maan: kaash meri bhi kismat iss teddy ki tarah hoti'

Geet feels shy

Geet: Maan iss cupboard mein kya hai?

Maan: Nahi geet usme kuch khaas nahi hai'chalo chalte hai

Geet: nahi mujhe dekhna hai aur main ye dekhkar hi rahungi

Maan: Geet sunona'

Geet: Maan'aap wahi kahde rahiye

Geet opens the cupboard

The cupboard was full of letters and gifts

Geet: Maan ye kya hai'

Maan does not reply

Geet removes a letter and realizes that it was actually a love letter addressed to her

Geet: Maan ye saare khat aapne like aur ye saare gifts'

Maan: Haan geet ye saare letters aur gift maine tumhare liye hi liye the'par har baar tumhe dene ki himmat main juta nahi paata tha issliye inn sabko tumhari yaad samajkar apne paas hi rakh liya socha tha k agar tum meri zindagi mein nahi rehti toh phir bhi inn cheezo ko tumhari yaad samajkar humesha apne seene se lagakar apni zindagi guzaar detha

Geet comes and hugs Maan

Geet: Maan aap mujhse itna pyar karte ho'mujhe toh apni kismat par yakeen hi nahi ho raha

They break the hug

Maan: kismat toh mujhpar meherbaan hui hai geet'jaanti ho maine poori koshish ki k iss makaan ko ek ghar bana sakoon magar aaj jab tumhare kadam pehli baar iss ghar mein pade hai tab ye makaan ek jannat ban gaya geet'

Maan: Kaash main apna dil cheerkar tumhe bata pata k tum mere liye kya mayine rakthi ho'main jaanta hoon k maine tumhe koi TajMahal banakar nahi diya' magar iss ghar ki har cheez mein tumhe mera pyar nazar aayega

Maan: Main jaanta hoon k Ye date itni special nahi thi'

But before Maan could complete his sentence Geet silenced him by placing her lips on his

She kissed him with all her love and slowly bit his lips as to convey to him that she had full authority on him and so does he

Maan too responded

She parted her lips to allow him to gain access

It turned to b a passionate one

Finally they ended their kiss

Geet: Dubara aisa mat kahiyega k aapne iss date mein mujhe koi khushi nahi di'iss date k maayine mere liye kya hai ye main shayad hi kabhi aapko samjha paau'

Maan: Agar mere baar baar kehne se mujhe itni achhi gift milti hai toh bhai ye baat toh main baar baar kahunga

Geet: Maan aap bade badmaash ho gaye ho

Maan: Agar tumhe sachhe dil se chahana badmaashi hai toh mujhe ye naam bhi manzoor hai

Geet: Maan mujhe bhook lag rahi hai'

Maan: Par mujhe toh mera sweet dish mil gaya

Geet: Phir se badmaashi jaayiye main aapse baat nahi karungi

Maan: Geet main toh tumhara gulam hoon'chalo chalkar khana khate hai'

Geet: Nahi'mujhe chat par khana khana hai'pehle aap jaakar waha saare arrangements kar dijiye phir main aayoungi

Maan: Geet ye kaisi zidd hai

Geet: Aww'aapne mujhe ziddi kaha..thik hai agar aap isse zidd samajthe hai toh zidd hi sahi'main khana khaungi toh chatpar hi warna nahi

Maan: Jo hokum mallika-e-azam ye banda aapki har khwahish puri karega

Geet: Thik hai toh aap jaakar mere liye ek romantic dinner ka arrangement kijiye tab tak main mere ek lauthe majnu ke love letters padthi hoon

Maan: As u wish geet'

Maan leaves

Geet starts removing the letters'just then
Geet: Ye kya hai' ye toh maan ki diary hai'kya ho saktha hai issmein?

Geet opens the diary. Geet starts reading

"GEET'kitna anokha naam hai ye

Iss naam ke peeche jo chehra hai wo bhi kisi ajoobe se kum nahi hai

Haan'ajooba aur kya naam du main usse'

Pehli baar jab hum dono mile the tab mein aur aaj mein humare rishte ne kitna bada faasla tai kar liya hai

Pehli mulakat mein wo mujhe ek number ki batameez aur batdimaag ladki lagi'zabaan par jaise koi control hi na ho'

Bus bole ja rahi hai'saamnewal sunthe sunthe thak jaaye par wo bolthe bolthe nahi thakthi'Iss liye maine usse Miss Mumbai Express kehna shuru kar diya

Wo bhi kuch kum nahi thi jis Maan Singh khurana se baat karne k liye ladkiyaan line mein khadi ho jaati hai ussi se bina koi darr bina koi hiskichahat nazaro se nazare milaye bejizak dil mein jo kuch bhi aaya ussne usse suna diya

Dhust Danav'ha ha' ye kehkar pukaara tha usne mujhe'

Wo pehla aisa mauka tha jab k main kisi ladki se ulajraha tha'yoon tho main itna boltha nahi magar ladai mein hi sahi uss din maine pehli baar kissi ladki k saath itna waqt guzaara

Hum dono ne kasam kha li k ek dusare ki shakal kabhi bhi dubaara nahi dekhenge

Magar ek anjaan si dor humhe kisi na kisi bahane se jodthi gayi aur hum milthe gaye'

Yash hum dono ka common friend nikla aur ussine humari nafrat ko ek rishte ka naam de diya aur woh hai dosti

Iss naye rishte ki badaulat hum ek dusare ko kareebi se jaan paaye

Maine jaana ke jis ladki ko main batdimaag aur batameez samaj raha tha wo darasal ek masoom sa sapna hai'

Jo k aaj bhi yahi samajthi hai k duniya mein har mod par khushiyoon ki kali bhikari hui hai

Wo humesha mujhse kaha karti hai k Khushiyaan chothe chothe cheezo se hi milthi hai'badi khushi ki talash mein batakne ke bajaaye agar hum inn chothi khushiyoon ko tarashe tho hum zindagi ka sahi luft uttha paayenge

Itna maasoom toh koi dua bhi nahi ho saktha

Pehle uski har baat mujhe kisi atom bomb ke putane ki tarah lagthi thi magar jabse maine usse asal mein jaana tab ye mehsoos hua k uski har baat kitni gehri hai'

Najaane kab mere dil ka uske dil se ek rishta jud gaya

Iss rishte ko main chahkar bhi koi naam nahi de paaya'shayad ismein bhi mera hi swarth tha'

Haan yahi sach hai' main usse chahne laga hoon magar main ye jaanta k wo bhi mere liye yahi mehsoos karthi hai ya nahi

Main use har haal mein khush dekhna chahatha tha' uski muskurahat mere liye iss duniya ki sabse keemti darhohar hai

Har din main uske liye ek taufa khareedtha tha par kabhi bhi main usse wo de nahi paaya'usse khone ka darr humesha se hi mujhpar haawi hotha raha

Geet ki taareef tho aksar logh kiya karte hai par jitni khoobsurat uski shakal hai usse bhi lakh guna paak uski ruh hai

Itna paak jo k kisi ka bhi dard samet sake' kisi ki bhi khushi dugni kar sake'

Yash k kehne par maine badi himmat karke apne dil k jazbaat uss cassette mein record kar liya'

Main geet ko wo cassette dene hi wala tha k mujhe pata chala k geet kisi aur ko chahthi hai

Sach kahu toh uss waqt mujhe aisa mehsoos hua k kisi ne meri dil par kisi naukili hatiyaar se waar kiya ho'

Par agle hi pal mujhe ye ehsaas hua k geet ki khushi se badkar mere liye toh kuch ho hi nahi saktha

Waise bhi pyar humesha paane ka naam nahi hotha '

Uss din iss situation mein bhi najaane kyun mujhe geet ki aakhon mein apne liye ek alag jazbaat ki pehchaan hui

Aisa laga jaise k inn aakhon mein humesha se hi mera hi naam likha hua hai

Uss din se geet k bartaaw mein kuch nayapan nazar aaya'ek nayi sharaarat ek anokhi mohabaat

Baarish ke mausam ko pyar ka mausam kehthe hai'meri zindagi ki sabse haseen shaam thi wo

Kudrat ne mujhe mere saare sawalo k jawab de diye the'geet ne lakh chupane ki koshish ki magar uski dil ki baat uski aakhon ne mujhe bata di'

Haan main jaan gaya k who bhi mujhe chahthi hai'

Maine bhi usse thoda pareshan karna chaha magar shayad'wo mazak thoda zyaada ho gaya

Jin aakhon mein main nami bardash nahi kar saktha tha aaj unhi aakon mein meri wajah se aasu the'

Geet ko ye laga k meri zindagi mein koi aur hai'

Ek pal tho ye laga k main apne aap ko kis tarah ki saza du'par tab khayal aaya k mujhe saza dene ka haq bhi sirf aur sirf geet ko hi hai

Maine party wale raat geet ko phone par sab batane ki koshish ki magar dubara geet ki bato mein ek alag si taakat mujhe nazar aayi

Main kuch samaj hi nahi paaya magar apne aap ko rokh bhi nahi paaya

Agle din office k bajaye main radio station ki aur bada

Magar iss baar meri Geet ne mujhe dubara chauka diya'isse pehle k main usse kuch keh paata Geet ne radio par saare duniya k saamne apne jazbaato ka khulasa kar diya

Uss waqt main radio station k bahar hi khada tha

Ji mein toh aaya k ussi waqt jaakar apni Geet ko apne seene se laga du par nahi main usse uski life ka sabse khoobsurat shaam gift karna chahtha tha'

Main jaanta hoon' k meri har koshish meri geet k saamne chothi hai..

Aaj se main apni zindagi apni mishty apni geet k naam karta hoon'Rab se yahi dua hai k agar maut bhi aaye toh mujhe meri geet ki baho mein hi aaye'

Main apni mishty ko har haal mein khush rakhunga' apne aakhiri saas tak mera dil bus ek hi naam ko sunkar dhadka karega aur wo hai meri GEET'kudrat ka ek aisa ajooba jo k sirf mere liye bana hai'"

Geet closed the diary
She started heading towards the terrace
PRECAP: "Tujh mein rab dikhtha hai"😳😳😳

PRECAP: aata romance😳😳😳

PRECAP: ye ladki kaun hai😉😉😉

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Love-Piya

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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yipee me first to comment . as usual awesome update actually i was busy with my school home work so i was not able to comment from last few days sorry for that
Edited by palakchopra - 13 years ago
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now that was awesome...out of dis world...kya update tha yar...the diary was superbly written...everything so perfect...piya just tell me itne thoughts aate kaha se hai tumhare dimaag mein yar...too good...hats off to u for that!!! M sure vo dinner bhi ekdum mast hoga...may be sumthing different...
Hmm aata ladai kya geet cooking kar rahi hai...but i know we'll have to wait to know that...

2nd precap thoda confusing hai par may be sum1 from maan's family...daadi to nahi hai...???

Chalo anycase we willl have to wait for it na...but awesome update


loved it to the core...sorry for late comments was busy at office...!!!!
Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update👏 waiting 4 next update
thanx 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update!!!
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
Keep rocking
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