Maaneet FF-Love is nothing but pain-part 23-update - Page 6

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Geet was scared as she put her feet across the threshold of KM'.it had been 5 years since she had entered this house but she had to come to meet the 2 people who had trusted her even after she had left:

**Flashback**

'Geet,beta humari baat suno'you and maan should work it out'.i know its just a misunderstanding'

'Haan,muski it's a misunderstanding come on'.work it out na'.maan bhai abi ghussa mein hai''

G-Dadima and Vicky nahi'this misunderstanding is too big to be cleared'.Maan doesn't trust me how can I trust him now?...im sorry I will always remember you all but for me MSK is dead'.Dadima don't worry I'll stay in touch with you and you too Vicky!

She touched dadima's feet,took her blessing's and left'.she was devastated to leave dadi and Vicky but she had too'..she couldn't bare to stay where Maan was'.the person she had trusted more then herself he had betrayed her trust'.tears overtook her eyes'.but dadi and Vicky were not at fault she would not break her ties with them but Arjun he had sided with Maan'so now two important people in her life were dead'.

**Flashback ends**

She entered the house and started searching for dadi and Vicky she called out:'Dadi'vicky..'

When all of a sudden someone comes and covers her eyes'..and says:'Guess?'..

G-Vicky,can I ever not know its you?

V-Arey,Geet you always know its me how?

G-I know you very well!

She turned around and hugged him'.and parted from the hug'gave him a check and said:'You've lost weight?'I haven't seen you for 6 months and this is what has become of you?'

V-Arey,now you're here na'.toh take care of me..

G-I will'where's dadi?

V-Woh toh 2 hafto ke liye London gaye hai for an old friends daughter's wedding'

G-Oh'.her face fell she had come to KM just to meet dadi'she could have easily called Vicky to her place or somewhere out but she knew dadi she had to meet her at KM but she wasn't here'so she Better leave she didn't want to encounter any other house member'

G-Acha toh Vicky you either come with me or we'll meet some place else coz I don't want to stay here any longer'

When they heard someone shout:'What the hell are you doing here?'

They both turned around to see who it was but Geet already knew who it was'Maan had come home early today!

Arjun didn't know what was going to happen now bro had come home'.a disaster was sure to take place now'.he stood there thinking why did this lady return wasn't everything going fine?...why did she return after 5 years?...couldn't she let them stay in peace'when he saw 2 people entering the mansion'one of them he recognized as Arohi that girl and the guy with her was the one she had gone and hugged'he felt the urge to kill that guy'.when he noticed their hands were intertwined his eyes blazed with anger'he didn't know why he felt the urge to go and take that hand in his but he controlled'

He saw her talking with Vicky just a few moments ago she had acted like she didn't know him and now she dared to stand in his house'how dare she?

She and Sid walked in she was nervous what the hell was di doing in KM and why had she called them?

She knew that this house held terrible memories for Di'.and she also knew this house had given her Di nightmares but then what was she doing here?...she went in and saw that guy from the airport and the beach what was he doing here?

But before she could think about anything else she noticed Maan standing there'.she thought:' If he's here then why was Di here?...was she in her right mind?...What was happening?...When she saw Vicky standing next to di and she forgot everything else'.it had been 5 years since she had seen him and with no control over her emotions she went a hugged him and said:'Vicks'

Arjun was all confused at what was happening one minute this girl is holding hands with that guy and one minute she hugs Vicky?

What was wrong with her?...

She saw Arohi running to hug Vicky she knew she had missed him they had been best friends before all that had happened'.that day had not only destroyed her life but also the lives of her loved one's'..tears wanted to fall out of her eyes looking at the reunion of two best friends'.these two were like 2 parts of a single heart'.but she also knew Arohi had left him just for Geet's happiness'.but Geet couldn't do that she couldn't keep them away'.when she herself had been in contact with him all these years'..then she looked up to glance at Maan and his glare was enough to tell her she had to face a tantrum from him now'she started preparing herself for all the words he would utter'..she had to face him after all she was in his house!

Maan looked at Arohi hugging Vicky'his anger was getting out of control the nerve geet had to come here after ignoring him like that'and then her sister was hugging Vicky?

What the heck was happening?

But he felt happy seeing Arohi after so long they had been really close she was his small sister and he was her bro but that one day and broken all relations.

**Flashback**

M-Arey,Arohi where are you?

A-Jiju'mein yaha hoon'

Maan turned around to look at her'.

M-I was looking for you,where were you?

A-In the bathroom jiju u worry too much!

M-Arey'leave all that'..how are your studies?

A-They're going great!

M-Acha,toh where's your sis

A-Di must be in her room sleeping aur kya?

M-She's sleeping till now

A-Haan jiju'

M-Well,what are you waiting for?...go bring that water jug'.

A-One water jug coming right up!

They hi5-ied each other'.when they heard geet:'Acha'arohi you're betraying me you're my sister but working against me?

A-What to do di?...Jiju is my bro toh bro comes first!

M-Haan'we're a team'you can do whatever you want!

V-Acha phir me and Geet are a team!

M-Vicky tum mera bhai ho but side uski?

G-Yes,we're a team Vicky!

**Flashback ends**

His heart longed for those days but he composed himself and said:'Ms.Geet Handa how dare you enter my house?'

She knew this had to happen'

So composing herself she said:'Mr.Khurana there is no need to raise your voice'.i have not come to meet you'.i have come to meet someone else'and I have met them I will leave now..'

G-Arohi,chalo

A-But di'hum abhi toh

G-Arohi abhi!

V-Arohi you go'I'll come to meet you later'.you go now!

A-But vicks'.i miss you!

V-Arey baba I miss you too!

They both were crying and they hugged once more and then Vicky started wiping her tears away and Arohi pecked his cheek'

A-I love you

V-I love you more'

And unknowingly a genuine smile formed on Geet's lips she was so happy today!

Arjun then realized so this girl was Geet's sister the one I had heard about'.oh'she used to go to the hostel when I was here'.and then I went abroad when she returned that's why I never saw her'.but I did once'.she has really changed since then but whats her relation with Vicky?

And if she and Vicky are something who's that guy?

But why the heck is he so worried he doesn't give a damn'.seeing Geet had just messed up his feelings he just needed to be calm that's it!

But before that'.he needed his bro to calm down!

Maan was blazing with anger'.geet still had the courage to stamd in his house and scream at him'he would teach her a lesson'.this was MSK house and no one came without his permission!

Geet knew that she had to go right now she didn't want to create a scene so she knew it was best to leave now'

G-Arohi,we are going now!

A-Okay,Di'bye vicks!

V-Bye Aru..Bye Geet'

G-Vicky here you go

And she handed him a card'Vicky gave one look to it and understood and gave a nod'

Geet took Arohi's hand since she knew Arohi didn't want to leave Vicky they had met after such a long time but what could she do Maan was here right now and she knew she couldn't stay here one moment'and she started walking towards the door

What the hell did she think of herself?...She would come in MSK's house and leave without answering him? Hell,no''..She would have to answer all his questions'why was she here?...And when a few moments ago she pretended not to know him and now she had the guts to stand in his house!...she was leaving when he pulled her back by holding her hand and with such force she lost her balance and slipped and automatically Maan grabbed her waist and held onto her'.whilst Geet just pushed him and said:'Mr Khurana don't you dare touch me!'

He was shocked he had saved her from falling and on top of that she was giving him attitude?

M-What are you doing here?

G-I don't have to answer you!

M-Yes you have to you are standing in my house and I want to know why you're here?

G-I don't care'Arohi lets go!

M-Ms.Handa stop running away like a coward and answer me!

G-What right do you have to question me like that?

M-What right do you have to stand in my house?

G-I came here to meet dadi and Vicky'

M-What relation do you have with them Ms.Handa?

Maan was frustrated with the fact that she choose to ignore him but came to meet his relatives?

G-That is none of your business..

She turned to leave when he took her wrist in his hand and pulled her with such force she banged in his chest'and when she looked up their eyes met but Geet's eyes had nothing but hatred and anger'.and she screamed:'Mr.Khurana I can file a case against you for harassing a client like this I have warned you before'you dare not touch me again!'

She got out of his grip'.Maan was shell-shocked'where was that timid Geet he had known?...who had held on his hand for support?

Who was this lady who was so bold and confident?

How did Geet change all of a sudden?...

Vicky's voice bought him out of his thoughts

V-Geet'.woh can I take Aru out for dinner tonight?

G-Ofcourse Vicky!

Maan was angry at seeing Geet ignoring him'

He said:'Ms.Handa,don't you dare leave without answering me?'Why have you come back after this long?'..'And how dare you enter my house?'

G-MR.KHURANA I REPEAT AGAIN'.YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO ASK ME ANY QUESTION I HAVE TOLD YOU BEFORE I DON'T MIX PERSONAL AND PROFESSIONAL'.WE ARE WORKING TOGETHER IT WILL STAY LIKE THAT UNDERSTAND?

Arjun was furious how dare this girl talk to his bro like that?And what was with Arohi and Vicky?

But right now he had to take care of that girl'

A-Ms.Handa'.how dare you speak to MY BROTHER LIKE THAT'.YOU HAVE NO RIGHT!

G-Mr.Arjun Singh Khurana'before speaking in someone else's matter think twice'.you have no right to talk in other people's matter'do you get that?...This is a conversation between me and Mr.Maan'you don't have any right to talk in this matter'

A-I have every right'this matter involves my brother'.

G-Did your brother tell you to talk for him'.i believe Mr.Maan knows how to speak'and neither did he ask you to speak for him'so you better keep shut!

How dare this girl speak to him like that'what does she think of herself?...

She and her sister were good for nothing people'.they just knew how to hurt people'.look at her sister'that Arohi she's with that guy one minute next she hugs Vicky who the heck is she?

Maan was getting angry by the minute how dare Geet talk to his brother like that'he would give her a piece of his mind now'.

M-Geet plz stop'

G-With what right are you telling me to stop'

M-For God's sake Geet'

G-Maan'I am not that Geet anymore'the one who loved you is dead'

M-(st)I LOVE YOU GODDAMIT'..

And he snapped out of it'.what the hell was he thinking he and love that too Geet Handa'.he was out of his mind'.he felt nothing but hatred for Geet Handa'

M-Ms.Handa you better get out of my house before I do something I regret'

G-Mr.Khurana'I have no joy in standing in this house even another second'and I better leave before I do something I regret'

Maan closed his eyes in anger'.he was doing all he could to control it'he didn't want to create a scene'he would deal with Ms.Handa later in person'he wasn't going to let her go!

Geet stormed out of the house dragging Arohi and Sid with her'she was doing her best controlling her emotions'this was the house which held the best of memories for her'but now held the worst too'..

She felt tears stinging her eyes'.but she swallowed them'..she had to be strong'.his words couldn't affect her anymore'.

Because only the people you love have the right to hurt you'and Maan Singh Khurana was the person who had lost his rights to love her and hurt her'

Precap-Ms.Handa just wait and watch'.this is not the end of it'.

Mr.Maan the war has just begun'

Hey im Arjun'Can we be friends?

I'll think about it'

Okay guys..so how was the update...guys i didnt mention Vicky and Dadi in the character sketch as they are temporary characters just to bring Maaneet and Arjuhi together...Plz tell me how you liked the story so far?

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I mean for now im only portraying Arjun,Maan,Arohi and Geet's feeligns for now but slowly the other characters feelings will also be there...and yes hope u get an idea of the past...and here Vicky is not their brother but a cousin...so thats why he stays with them...

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