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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: .rumki.

awesome update
feeling bad 4 pia
con soon
do pm me


thaanks dear please accept my frnd req and u can read my second ff- ek ajnbee
i will do pm till then enjoy and tc
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

Ohh such a sad part I was literally in tears😭.I really feel bad 4 Pia & Abhay too & I really wnt 2 kill metri dyan, b***h tht bloody guruma & vampy superiors.I thought ki u'll make pia pregnant ahahaha.plzz continue.Abhay toh vampy hai I guess use kuch nahi hoga😊



oh dear dont be sad and it happens in story i will update today
so enjoy and take care..thnks fr the comment dear
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zoozoo123

Hey Kajal...Love ur ff yaar...Sry I hav nt commented till now...Reason...vry simple ...Im a lazy girl...😆😆😆...The story is simply amazing yaar...Wow...Now feeling bad 4 Abhiya..Metri shld b killed...N tht guruma also...Waiting 4 the story 2 move ahead..Really looking 4rd 2 it...pls continue soon...😛😛😛...



hey thank u dear so much and you can read my new ff ek ajnabeee
i will send u pm enjoy and take care...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: princess_xeelan

Its a really emotional chapter kajal... poor Piya and actually i feel pity for Abhay as well...his hands r tied in a way...thrs nothinghe can do...i hope someone teach some lessons to Metri...ufff 🤢

carry on please and thanks for the PM 😊



yes dear but this is story and it contains all the emotions
thanks dear i will update soon...till then enjoy and take care
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pallavisarkar

it was gr8t 👏👏but i felt very bad for both abhay n piya i will kill both metri n guruma together

do updt soon dear



thanks dear and dont be sad
i will cont soon ok enjoy and take care
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey kajal. .i'm waiting. . U promised to update today!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey friends thank you all for the support and love and you know i am so happy to see that you people are loving my ff...so here i update the next part...


Part-16

piya was sleeping and shouts "abhayyy"
abhay car jumps from a clip and it shows a big blast...😲
misha comes running to piya and hugs her...

misha: piya kya hua are you okay?
piya: {breathing heavily}": misha abhay ko kuch hua hai mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai mujhe abhay sey milna hai..mey abhay ko call karti hu...

piya dials abhay number but it was coming out of netwrok...piya again dials a number..again she listens the same..she looks at misha...

piya: yeh abhay ka number out of raech kyu ja raha hai...

misha try too calm down and give her a glass of water to drink...

misha: piya just relax piya abhay ko kuch nahi hua network ka problem hogaya hai isliye shayad number nahi mil raha hoga

piya: lakin misha aisa kabhi nahi hua hai merey sath...mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai...
misha: try to sleep piya kal subah abhay ko call kar lena baby...now sleep


here misha geta a call and she was shocked to listen and suddenly stands up and tears drop from her eyes and she was looking at piya and then she goes runing outside from room...she goes to aranb and madhu room...she knocks the door madhu opens it...she sees misha...misha hugs her tightly and starts crying very badly...misha was crying very loudly...

madhu: misha kya hua {he voice was shaking}
misha was not sayingg anything and crying very badly and loudly...
madhu shakes misha again...aranb comes and sees misha like this...

arnab: misha betey kya hua tum aisey kyu ro rahi hi..ho batao mujhe...

misha hugs his papa and she starts crying...aranb consoles her...he makes her sits and give her a glass of water but misha was crying and crying...

aranb: misha bachey kya hua mujhe batao i am your dad na bolo kya hua
misha: {looks at arnab} papa woh
madhu: ha beta bolo kya hua... meri jaan nikali ja rahi hai...
misha: papa woh
aranb: ha betey bolo
misha: papa abhay ab is duniya mey nahi raha {misha hugs her dad and start crying}


arnab was shocked and madhu turns misha and give her a tight slap on her face...

madhu: agar yeh mazak hai toh bahut hi bura mazak hai...
misha: {cries}: mumma yeh sach hai abhi police comissioner uncle ka phone aaya tha unhoney mujhe bataya ki abhay ki gaadi ka pahadi sey nichey jakar girney sey blast hogaya hai...
madhu: nahi tum jhooth bol rahi ho...
misha: yeh sach hai mumma...mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai piya yeh sab kaisey bardashat karegi...

arnab sits down in shock and sees on the floor like a dumb person... madhu was crying and misha also...piya comes there and sees her arnab, misha and arnab like this...


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vedh, abeer and chand was standing their and talking to police comissioner...chand was not able to believe that abhay is no more and abeer was in tears so as vedh...vedh was not crying because he was controlling himself...

police constables brought a dead body...chand was about to fall {though he was a vampire but he loved a abhay so much, though he was harsh on him but abhay was his pride}...abeer kneels down and hugs the dead body..vedh makes abeer stand up and hugs him both brothers {vedh and abeer} have a flashback of abhay...

flashback:

when vedh and abeer use to fight with each other ki kaun abhay ki terha hai...

vedh: mey abhay da ki terha hu..tu chup kar mey bad hu toh mey abhay da ki terha hu...tu chota bankar reh...
abeer: well da kehne sey koi abhay da nahi ban jaata...
vedh: oh really tu kuch keh nahi raha toh that means you consider yourself to be abhay da...haathi ke daant dikhaney ke aur khane ke kuch aur
abeer: vedh bhai bander jaaney adrak ka sawaad...
vedh: kya tuney mujhe bander bola...

vedh runs behind abeer to hit him and here abhay comes and abeer hides behind him...

vedh: aaj nahi chodhunga tujhe abeer ke bachey...
abhay: arey ek min ek min arey hua kya hai...koi batayega..
abeer: bhai paagal ho gaye hai...
vedh: kya now you are saying me paagal...

abhay bich sey hath jaata hai..
abhay: lets have a fight now...lets see who will win...yeah comeon...

vedh and abeer sees each other then abhay...
abhay: kya hua lets have fight... ruk kyu gaye...
abeer: da aap bi na hum toh bas aisey hi aap hi bata dijye hum mey sey kaun aapki terha hai...
abhay smiles...
abhay: stupid...u bot are like me...and there is no need to make comparison...if one day i will be not there people will look in you my shadow...


my shadow, my shadow, my shadow abhay voice drift...

vedh and abeer comes were in tears seeing deadbody and comes to there senses...


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piya sees arnab and madhu, ,misha like this...piya comes to misha...

piya: mishu kya hua tum sab kyu ro rahey ho...

{actually friends after listening abhay words in raichand mansion piya was gone out of mind...she is behaving like a mad girl so dont be confuses}

misha looks at piya and huga her...

piya: mishu tum ro mat abhay aayega na toh mey usey kahungi ki jisney mishu ko rulaya hai usey maarey phir hum khub majaa karengey...

mishu hugs piya tightly and cry...

piya: dont cry baby dont cry abhay bas aata hi hoga...

madhu comes and slaps piya...piya looks with teary eyes to madhu..madhu cries...

madhu: abhay ab wapas nahi aayega piya...abhay tumhey hamesha ki liye chodh kar ja chuka hai...woh ab humarey bich nahi raha piya...

piya was stunned listening this and she sits down...

madhu: bolo piya kuch toh bolo, abhay jo tumhey apni zindgai sey bi jayad pyar karta tha aaj tumari zindagi hanesha ke liye viraan karke ja chuka hai...

piya looks at madhu with teary eyes...madhu hugs piya

piya: mumma abhay aayega woh mujhe chodhkar nahi ja sakta mumma..usney mujhe promise kiya tha mumma...

madhu: nahi merey bachey, abhay ka accident hua hai ab tak toh uski deadbody ghar pahunch gayi hogi...

piya: {shouts}: no mumma...aisa nahi ho sakta...
piya runs from there...madhu shouts "piya piya}

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all of them siting in white clothes {all though they are vampire but they have to predict as humans in front of all so they are following human culture}...aarzoo is crying, metri is silent and gurumaa is also silent vedh and abeer was seeing abhay pic...haseena was in tears and chand was in great shock...

someone opens the door...all of them looks up... it was none other then piya...she looks at people..she starts walking...

piya: aap log mujhe aisey kyu dekh rahey hai...{piya looks in front} aur yeh kaun hai...hmm abhay hai {she smiles}... zarur koi naya trick hai...

aarzoo and vedh, abeer, hasseena and chand was shocked to piya like this...

piya: vedh da dekho abhay mujhe kaisey tang kar raha hai...
vedh was silent and in tears.. piya sits down and sees abhay...
piya: masti bahut hogayi abhay chalo utho i am waiting...
piya looks at abhay...abhay deadbody was covered with white cloth...
piya: abhay chalo utho na dekho mujhe tang mat karo...agar tum abhai nahi uthey na toh mey naraaz ho jaungi...
haseena: piya beta
piya: dekhiye na mom abhay uth kyu nahi raha...
aarzoo comes to piya and make her stands up...piya sees aarzoo...
piya: hmm aarzoo tum hi bolo apney pyar aur fav da ko..he always listens too you...
aarzoo: {starts crying} bhabi da ab kabhi nahi sunegey and she runs to abeer and hugs him and crys...
piya: aap sab log kyu ro rahey hai...

one pandit come and tells chand that we have to take dead body for funerial...chand nodes his head...piya listens this and hugs abhay dead body...

piya: nahi mera abhay kahi nahi jaayega...koi usey chuega nahi
vedh comes and trys to make her stand...but piya doesnt...
piya: nahi merey abhay ko koi nahi chu sakta...woh bas abhi uth jaayega..
piya looks at abhay.
piya: abhay mujhe inke saamney sharminda mat karo abhay...
people comes and trys to take abhay deadbody..piya hugs abhay...
piya: i love you abhay {hides her face in his body} mey tumhey nahi janey dungi... u cant go... abhay

abeer was crying literally... haseena comes and takes piya with her...people take abhay with them...abeer and vedh also goes with them...
piya sees abhay going...

piya: chalegaye mujhe chodh kar...{looks at haseena} mumma abhay chal gaya... kyu gaya mujhe chodhkar {haseena dont have ans}

piya feels dizzy...and she fells down...


here i end this part hope u will like it











Edited by stary_kajal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesum update!
Poor pia. .i'm feeling so bad for her. .
But isnt abhay a vampire. .so how can he die? I'm lil bit confused . .
But i'm 100% sure that the body is not of abhay & he is alive & he is going to cum back for his pia. .
Plz. . Kajal . .jaldi se abhiya ko milado. .i can't wait anymore!
Thanks for pm. .continue soon
tc
Edited by missglam - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
end the story, what do u mean by that. 😲 u mean ending this chapter na 😲 dont u dare end this FF like this. update it soon.

I wonder whose dead body was it? how can abhay die? he cannot die na. 😲
Edited by abhayfan_dishu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: missglam

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awesum update!
Poor pia. .i'm feeling so bad for her. .
But isnt abhay a vampire. .so how can he die? I'm lil bit confused . .
But i'm 100% sure that the body is not of abhay & he is alive & he is going to cum back for his pia. .
Plz. . Kajal . .jaldi se abhiya ko milado. .i can't wait anymore!
Thanks for pm. .continue soon
tc



thank you so much but abhay is dead...
i will continue soon dear...yes vampire can die due to hot flames.. i have read somewhere in a book...
and as i have mentioned that abhay has a car blast so u can imagine dear
i will update soon dear...till then enjoy and take care dear

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