FF-pati ya vampire updated {the end, page-117}

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heena mehta

@heena_mehta

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Posted: 14 years ago

#461

oh!! dat was an emotional part kajal, bt still well written...

i m aving mixed feeling regarding abhay's behaviour...😕

bt felt reli bad for pia...dat was heart wrenching d way he beahved wid her...

i reli hope dat metri n guruma wl die soon🤢😡

continue soon n thanx for d pm

luv

heena😊

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sweety_crazed

@sweety_crazed

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Posted: 14 years ago

#462

the update was fantastic👏.👏... ...today u made me 😭yaar i was really crying can't stop.it was tooo touchy n emotional ...u really know wat the readers want 🤗..🤗scenes were awesome.👍🏼..u r superb ...luved it totally😊, do update soon i'm waiting eagerly..😊.😊 n thnx 4 pm..

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Ki fark Painda hai

@Courageous_Leo

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Posted: 14 years ago

#463

Hey Kajal...Love ur ff yaar...Sry I hav nt commented till now...Reason...vry simple ...Im a lazy girl...😆😆😆...The story is simply amazing yaar...Wow...Now feeling bad 4 Abhiya..Metri shld b killed...N tht guruma also...Waiting 4 the story 2 move ahead..Really looking 4rd 2 it...pls continue soon...😛😛😛...

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rosamale

@rosamale

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Posted: 14 years ago

#464

that was awesome !!!! bechari piya...well... abhay is also bechara

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..SchnellBus..

@..SchnellBus..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#465

aww u made abhay cry in ur FF💔DO not be so zalim with My ABHAY😭
Well ur IF was quite interesting.U know wat whenever i read any FF,the first thing i always think is..why do we have to imagine/ write this separation,tears and rona dhonaa.we can write FF according to how we want them to be in reality.Like u did this time ...abhay and piya both are sad😭😭.Why cant u just ignore all this and make a full toos Romantic story?🤣Like the scenes ,we actually wantt to watch on them..kissing,hugging and supporting each other.Btw apart of all this rona dhoona Ur FF rocks thnx for the PM.
i am reading from the First chapter...will edit soon
*RES*

Edited by pRIYA_kINSHU - 14 years ago

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#466

Its a really emotional chapter kajal... poor Piya and actually i feel pity for Abhay as well...his hands r tied in a way...thrs nothinghe can do...i hope someone teach some lessons to Metri...ufff 🤢

carry on please and thanks for the PM 😊

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Resh

@SheDevil

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Posted: 14 years ago

#467

Ohh such a sad part I was literally in tears😭.I really feel bad 4 Pia & Abhay too & I really wnt 2 kill metri dyan, b***h tht bloody guruma & vampy superiors.I thought ki u'll make pia pregnant ahahaha.plzz continue.Abhay toh vampy hai I guess use kuch nahi hoga😊