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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pallavisarkar

thnx for d pm

it was tooo hot to handle
very nicely written



thanks dear hope u liked it
i will upate soon
till then enjy and tc



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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shivanirajput

hey that was really hot to handle😳

abhay pia moments were too good you described them really well 😍
i m still blushing☺️
does abhay really started loving her or is he just using her❓
i m very eager to know the mystery of metri and guru ma
update asap



thanks yaar aapkecomment ke bina toh mera ff pura ho hi nahi
sakta dear,,,,thank u so much for such a lovely compliment..
aapke sarey doubts i will clear dheerey dheerey...
i will update soon dear..dont worry




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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepi20

Awesome update! The Abhiya scene was so romantic! I loved it! Eagerly looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊



thanks dear...yeah they were,,,,i was also feeling shy when i was writing
hope you have enjoyed... i will update soon




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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: karantakiar

waoo dear superb nd luvly part
luv ur ff
plz plz add me to ur pm list plzzz.
plz cnt soon.
luv u
vritika



thanks dear i will update soon..dont worry dear
and its my pleasure u liked it...



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Posted: 14 years ago


Part-9

pia is sleeping on abhay bare chest...piya slowly opens her eyes...sunlight is welcoming piya for her new life...piya smiles at abhay and goes to take shower...abeer and vedh were worried because metri and guru ma is coming...

piya comes after taking shower..

abhay was sitting on a bed when piya comes out of shower with only a towel wrapped around her as she forgot to take her clothes inside! abhay, who was sitting looked up and was mesmerized by her beauty!

She was like an angel indeed. HIS ANGEL!

Her skinny white legs with water dripping from her hair and she had no make-up! he couldnt take his eyes off her! abhay comes to piya.. piya feels shy... he pulls her waist and make her come close to him... piya hairs were wet...

abhay gently careeses her hairs... her fragrance was making abhay crazypiya closes her eyes...abhay comes more close to piya...

piya {slowly whispered}: abhay...
abhay: hmm
piya: let me go i have to get ready...
abhay: no i will not allow you to go...
piya: but
abhay: shhh you kya tum is lamhey mey khona nahi chahti...
piya: abhay tum nahi jantey tumney mujhe zindagi ki kitni badi khushi di hai...
abhay: I love you piya {he kisses on her lips gently}

piya holds abhay shirt... and wrap her hand around abhay neck... after few min abhay leaves piya...piya smiles...piya goes to wardrobe... piya is confused...abhay comes and hold her from ack..

piya: i dont know what to wear...
abhay: then dont tum aisey bahut khubsoorat dikhti ho...
piya: oh common abhay...after wedding its my first day in this house atleast i should wear somting tradtional but what?
abhay: confusion!!! confusion!!!!! confusion!!!!
piya: ya totally
abhay: ok wear this {he gives piya sky blue and golden saree}
piya: wow abhay its baeutiful...but
abhay: but what piya ...
piya: actually {grining her lips} i dont know how to wear saree... {piya turns to abhay}
abhay: very simple...
piya: but abhay...
abhay: shh {abhay makes piya turn} go and wear this {he gives jupon and blouse}

piya goes to washroom and wear saree jupon {petticoat} and blouse...abhay was still standing there in black ganji and his black tracks piya comes out abhay was looking constantly at piya. she goes to mirror and tries to tie the Dhori's... but cant. He smiles and walks towards piya with a naughty expression.

piya still struggling with her dhori didnt notice abhay!

abhay touches piya's back and she gasp!

He tells her how beautiful she is looking. piya looks down and abhay caresses her back & starts tying her dhoris one by one!

After tying all of them he kisses her neck and turn her to him & kisses her lips (i hope no1 fainted yet!, another intimate scene on the way, WATCH OUT girls😉😉😉}

abhay smiles and take the saree and pin it in piya's petticoat touching her waist.. piya smiles shyly but doesnt pull away cause shes loving this feeling (im loving it tooo)...

abhay: pichley janam mainey kuch achey kaam kiye hongey that why i got you?
piya: i feel very lucky to be your wife...
abhay: i love so much, dont ever leave me...
piya: I cnt imagine life without you, i wont ever leave you *tears rolls down*

abhay kisses her tears and goes to the bathroom to take a shower...


Scene shifts:

abeer and vedh were sitting with aarzoo...vedh was reading science ficition book...aarzoo was removing nail paint from her nailsabeer was thinking that how he will make setting of vedh and misha... vedh senses that what abeer was thinking,,,he sees him and then into book... here misha comes... abeer stands up with excitment vedh and aarzoo looks him...

abeer: arey misha ji welcome welcome...sit sit... {he smiles and winks at vedh}

vedh: gives angry looks to vedh and sees misha then again in the book...

misha: dude lagta hai merey aaney sey koi khush nahi hai.. {misha looks at vedh and vedh sees misha}
vedh: excuse me...aapney mujhe kaha...
abeer: offcourse bhai aap itney shant jo rehtey sabko lagta hai ki aap khush nahi ho kyu misha ji...
misha: hey good ha...keep it up...i like it...piya kaha hai...
aazroo {flew on her nails}: unka toh hum bi intezaar kar rahey hai..

here chand comes and abeer smile is gone and he sits quitely and vedh notice abeer...misha stands up and greet chand...haseena also comes sees misha and smiles... chands looks for abhay...

chand: where is abhay?
aazroo: dad da ki shaadi hui ab thoda time toh lagega na...

here abhay and piya comes piya was looking so beautiful in saree as her hairs were open and she was wearing matching jewllerey with that a small sindoor in her mang and yeah a mangalsutra cotains diamonds...it was shining..

friends she s wearing this saree and this jewellery...




piya greets all of them, hugs haseena and takes blessings...chand was hesitate to give blessings {friends he is a vampire}...chand just smiles hair put hand on piya head, but say nothing... piya goes to misha and hugs her...chand sees abhay and signals him to come in... abhay goes in vedh sees him...

Scene shifts:

chand: abhay tum jantey ho ki aaj guru ma aur metri aa rahi hai...
abhay: yes dad mujhe pata hai...
chand: hmm tum jantey ho tumhey kya karna hai...
abhay: yes dad...

abhay goes and chand sees him going from there..abhay comes to piya...

abhay: mey aap sabsey kuch kehna chahta hu

abeer, vedh, aarzoo aur piya, misha looks at abhay...

abhay: jin haalato mey meri aur piya ki shaadi hui hai usey aap sab log waa kif hai.. aaj yaha metri aur guru maa aa rahi hai...mey nahi chahta ki unhey meri aur piya ki shaadi ka pta chaley...iska kya reason hai mey nahi bata sakta {vedh, abeer and aarzoo understands}

piya looks at abhay...misha is shocked to listen this...piya goes to her room...abhay looks at piya and follows her...piya is standing beside window..abhay comes and puts hands on her shoulder...piya turns...

abhay: kya hua abhay?
piya: hum apni shaadi ke baarey mey kisi ko kyu nahi bata saktey abhay...
abhay: piyaa metri woh ladhki jisey guru ma ney merey liye chuna tha lakin mujhe tum pasand aa gayi isliye...
piya: toh abhay woh humhey sath dekhkar khush nahi hogi..
abhay {puts arms on piya shoulder}: no piya aisa kuch nahi hai...hum apna relation unke samney reveal nahi kar saktey
piya: lakin abhay, {piya hugs abhay}
abhay: dont worry mey hamesha tumarey sath hu...sirf kuch dino ki baat hai...
piya: hmm

abhay thinks and piya closes her eyes while hugging abhay...

piya:abhay mujhe tumsey baat karni hai...
abhay: bolo piya kya baat hai..
piya: abhay mey collehe join karna chahti hu,,,
abhay: piya lakin college kyu...
piya: i mean joo kuch bi hua i just need a space so i thought ki college jakar i can divert myself...
abhay: but piya
piya: please abhay
abhay: but i will also come...

aarzoo calls abhay and abhay kisses piya and leaves..piya thinks...abhay comes down and piya sees from window from where she can see hall from abhay room..
one girl with black dress...




piya thinks that she is metri and one more woman nayarni shastri she was also in black saree...

nayarni shastri {her name is sabhaa}: for everyone she is sabhaa nut in dark world she is guru maa..she is having control on the power of every vampire..she can is intelligent and very soft spoken...very confident, smart intelligent... piya sees her...



metri sees abhay standing, piya comes down... metri comes to abhay...she kisses abhay...

metri: hi sexy howz life...

piya sees this and she was boiling inside...misha holds her hand...abhay senses that piya is feeling jealous... guru maa {sabhaa} sees piya and she comes to her...

guru maa {sabhaa}: kaun ho tum pehaley toh tumhey kabhi nahi dekha...
haseena: guru maa woh aarzoo ki dosti hai...

guru maa {sabhaa }stares her for a min..abeer comes to guru maa {sabhaa}.. he hugs him...

guru maa: abeer bahut sharati hogaye ho tum..

abhay, aarzoo, vedh and chand, haseena bows their head in front of her...she smiles and tell them u to stand up...misha and piya looks themm

misha: piya mey ja rahi hu this is so strange...
piya: but misha dont go na mujhe bi ajeeb sa lag rah hai...

guru maa {sabhaa} turns and see piya. she comes to piya...piya feels nervous..

guru maa: kya ajeeb sa lag raha hai...

piya is shocked to hear this...

piya: nothing, {sees abhay} i am not feeling well {she smiles at guru maa and leaves to abahy room}

guru maa: insaan na jaaney kyu itna darta hayee reh insaan... {she smiles}..

T is waiting for someone in a cafe.. she is looking at watch... someone comes in a black BMW.. someone is a grey suit...T smiles and hugs him... they sit in a cafe..

Person: hey T toh kyu bulaya mujhe yaha pe...

T {gives piya pic }: yeh piya humhey isey khatam karna hai...kimat tum jo bolo

Person: hmm kaam ho jaayega...

T: lakin dhyan sey iske sath aur ladka hai jiska abhay raichand...

T smiles go and that person goes from there..she smiles and thinks

"piya ab dekhti hu tumhey kaun bachayega mujse..."


piya goes to her room and decides to clean the room as its messy.
While doing the bed, abhay comes in quitely, locks the door and hugs piya from behind..


piya jumps but doesnt pull away as she knos its abhay.

abhay kisses her neck and pulls her closer and closer till he feels her blood rushing in her body. He kisses her ears and takes her earing
off and she pulls away.

piya: What are you doing?

abhay: love

piya: its nt the right time

abhay: there is no right or wrong time in love..

piya: But look around you, the room is so messy..

abhay: i dont care, i only want you

piya: let me clean the room first.

piya bends to pick up her earing and abhay picks her up and puts her on the bed!. She gets angry and goes red.

abhay kisses her forehead not caring about her anger and continues to go down and kisses her nose then lips then neck and then he untie 😳
one dhori and piya couldnt pull away as she couldnt control her feelings. piya lays down and abhay covers her face with his head and
the screen blurs... ( i hope you got it lool, this is for those people who wanted abhya to have a round 2, OMG Im so besharam)...😳

so friends here i stop here today hope you will like it...


















Edited by stary_kajal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago



----edited-----

yes yes akir is shubh kam ki surat toh mujhse hi honi hai!!again first😛
btw i am just imagining piya in towel and abhay in vest OMG😆
it was superb!totally hot!!!but metri how dare she kiss abhay and guru maa maa yeh tum kahan se tapak gayi!!i am so scared she will make piya's life hell!!
but above all...abhiya romance was too hot!!bechari piya gussa karne ka koi fayeda nahi but what if metri comes at abhay's room at that time??

T se kya darna usse nipatne ke liye abhay hai na!i fear from that guru maa onlyaaj toh long comment diya hai😉
Edited by ilove99 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago


hanji bolo ji aapke compliment sey hi shuruwaat hti hai





Edited by stary_kajal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesum part!!!!!!!!
soo romantic
bt piya shud b angry on abhay coz of metri
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: charmingkiller

awesum part!!!!!!!!

soo romantic
bt piya shud b angry on abhay coz of metri



well piya ko abhay pe pura trust hai she loves him a lot
and she know abhay will never betray him
anyways thanks dear




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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: stary_kajal



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