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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update! Yayyy...Abhiya are married! Can't wait for some cute Abhiya moments! Eagerly looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: LuvAbhiyaarjuhi

Awesome update yeah Abhiya got married ..& these new characters r intersetin



thanks dear... yes new characters you will enjy till then tc



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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepi20

Awesome update! Yayyy...Abhiya are married! Can't wait for some cute Abhiya moments! Eagerly looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊



thanks dear i hope you have enjyed...
i wil update sson the next part
till then tc



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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

hey kajal dat was reli a nice update...

finally abhay- pia r married nw...woww.
wasn't T enough dat metri has also made her entry...
u knw i m dying to knw abhay's inner turnmoil nw...watever is going is real or fake??
i want to knw abhay's POV badly
pls continue soon

luv
heena😊



oh dear you will get to know soon...
thanks dear, but i can guess excitment ka mazaa hi kuch aur hai...
i will update soon dear
till then enjoy and take care


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepi20

Awesome update! Yayyy...Abhiya are married! Can't wait for some cute Abhiya moments! Eagerly looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊



thanks dear... i will update soon...



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Posted: 14 years ago

Part-8


abhay is worried, haseena comes to abhay...

abhay: mom mainey piya sey shaadi toh kaar li but i dont know ki aagey kya hoga?
haseena: i know abhay lain piya ab tumari responsiblity hai...
abhay: mom i know lakin aap metri ko toh jaanti hi hai..how i will make him conrol?
haseena: wahi toh mey jo soch rahi hu... phil haal enjoy the party...dont spoil ur mood..

piya needs you...jao piya ke pass jao...

abhay goes to piya... piya smiles and abhay holdes piya... suddenly a girl comes and opens the door... "surprise dada..." abhay looks at aarzoo.. she smiles at him..abhay leaves piya...😲

abhay comes to aarzoo...abhay hugs aarzoo

abhay: hey sweetheart how are you? hmm missed me my little angel..
aarzoo {kiss on his cheeks}: yes dadu {big bro} i love you so much aur mainey aapko bahut bahut misss kiya? aur aapney mujhe kitna miss kiya..?
abhay: mainey tumhey...ahhh

aarzoo was curious to know... she was serious...abhay looks at aarzoo...

abhay: mainey tumhey bilkul miss nahi kiya...
aarzoo: dada masti nahi, i know you misses me...
abhay: who said this?
aarzoo: me aarzoo raichand abhay rachand small sis..
abhay {laughs}: come here my sweet cute angel {he hugs her amd kisses on her forehead.. waise you put weight ha motu

abeer and vedh smiles and misha was just looking at abhay and aarzoo.. aarzoo gets angry and goes to chand...

aarzoo: dad dekhiye na dadu mujhe kaisey tang kar rahey hai {she hugs chand}

chand hugs aarzoo...haseesna also hugs aarzoo...

haseena: papa ki ladali beti...mumma ko toh koi puch hi nahi raha..
aarzoo: oh common mumma i love you so much,...but i love my dad and dadu so much...

abeer: waah waah isey kehtey hai maa beti ka pyar...kyu vedh bhai...😉😉
vedh: koi problem hai kya? tu chup nahi reh sakta kya?
abeer: aapsey toh jayada hi bolta hai hu bhai...kuch sudaar karo...😉😉
vedh: not again abeer...😡😡😡

piya looks at aarzoo...she comes to piya...she hugs her tightly jus like misha...misha feels jealous...

aarzoo: you are piya...right dadu ney mujhe sab bataya...

abhay comes to piya...abhay sees here and there...aarzoo looks at him

aarzoo: dada please dont look here and there she is not here,..oh shit shit i forget to tell dad

piya: abhay yeh kiski baat kar rahey they...ae you waiting for someboday
abhay: no jaan nothing just like that...

aarzoo goes to chand...

aarzoo: dad i wanna give you special message guru ma is cominh with metri...
chand: what guru ma is coming here...when bachey?

chand us to call aarzoo bachey...he is worried that guru ma is coming, and she didnt know about abhay and piya marraige...misha sees all of them in worried look...misha comes to abhay and piya...

misha: piya lets go its already night i think you should sleep now...
abeer: ahhh hmm kya baat hai misha ji first night abhay aur piya ki hai aur jaldi aapko lagi hui hai
misha: kya karey {looks at vedh} kuch log interest hi nahi dikhatey dude...so cut the crap...
abeer {vedh ears slowly}: bhai ladhki line de rahi hai maukha hath sey jaaney na do warna kuwarey reh jaaogey
misha: what did you say?
abeer: kuch kuch bi toh nahi
vedh: not interested {looks at vedh} any prblem...
abeer: no prblem big bro...
aarzoo: kyu vedh ko satatey rehtey ho...u know he is different...

misha laughs and says on piya ears...

misha: different to lag hi raha lagta hai zombie ke planet set aaya hai...
piya: stop it mishu...😆😆😆
kabir: well guys bahut late hogaya hai aur ab humhey chalna chaiye...
misha: but abhi toh aaye hai...
kabir: but its 11 o clock yaar, uncle sey hum jhooth bolkar aaye hai pic ke bahney sey...
misha: oo yeah man i forget...piya got to know i will meet u and yeah takecare {she looks at abhay then piya}

piya undesrtands what misha wants to say..she feels shy,,,chand tells abhay to come in his room..haseena and aarzoo takes piya into abhay's room...abeer stands there and thinks...vedh first goes and then comes to abeer..

vedh: kya hua kya soch raha hai...
abeer: bhai mey soch raha tha hitler {chand} ki kya entry becharey humarey abhay {puts hand on his head} da socha tha biwi ke sath baat karegey lakin yaha toh hitler sath le gaya...pata nahi ma kaisey yeh sab hogi...

abeer calls haseena ma {with love, he rspects her a lot as mom}

vedh: unki chodh aur apni soch...tera honey waala sasur hai aur usey hi hitler bol raha hai saaley?
abeer: arey yeh toh izaat dey raha hu na mey matlab hitler ek mahan parakrani yodha waisey hi humarey sasur ji hitler sey kam hai kya...
vedh: acha ab chal mujhe kitab padhni hai...
abeer: tum jao bhai mey aata hu...

vedh nodes his head and goes to his room..abeer also goes from there...here haseena and aarzoo makes piya sit abhay bed...piya is feeling shy..aarzoo laughs...

aarzoo: mom piya kitna sharmati hai...mujhe toh pata hi nahi hai ki sharmatey kaisey hai..
piya: jab tumari shaadi hogi toh tum bi seekh jaaogei.. {haseena smiles}
hassena: lets go beta {aarzoo} abhay aata hi hoga...
aarzoo: all the best piya... i mean piya bhabi
piya: mom thodi der rukiye na mujhe dar lag raha hai [how cuteee]

haseena smiles and so as aazroo because how piya is feeling now...

Scene shifts:

Scene shifts to abhay & abeer!

abeer: Bhai, as much as i would love to celebrate your marriage, i think you should go before piya oops piya bhabi comes and beat me up!
abhay: Yes i am going! Don't follow me ! And dont disturb me ok?
abeer: Sign* Ok ok i wont, make sure you lock your door! *He winks at abhay*

Abhay gives a smile and walks up the stairs towards his room.

He's excited as well as nervous! He was going to be with his lady love for the first time ever however he kissed her many times but today he was going to be hers forever! He couldnt control his emotions. Thinkin about all this he didnt notice he was outside his bedroom door. he knocks the door...aarzoo opens the door and winks at him abhay gives cute smile to her...aarzoo turns...

aazroo: mom lets go.. dadu is here...

haseena comes there and smiles to abhay also gives smile in return...

abhay enters...

He looks around the room and smiles. it was decorates with flowers and candles. His eyes searching for his heart (piya).

He spots his beautiful bride on the bed waiting for him! ONLY HIM! abhay comes to piya, here piya is breathing heavily getting nervous and happy...

abhay next to the bed looking at piya who is still in her veil! The beautiful Lengha was blue and pink with matching jewelleries.
The moon was shining on her making her dress glow!

He touches her hand and she close her eyes to absord the feeling inside her! She breaths heavily and opened again!

Slowly he lifts it and gaze into her eyes! She looks at him with full emotions in her eyes. He smiles at her and she gave him a sweet smile back!

abhay goes forward to kiss her when she gets off the bed and runs to the window! (Stop blusing girls)..

She closes her eyes and smiles shyly. abhay follows her and stand next to her. she realise he was ryt there and could feel his hand holding hers. abhay pulls her towards him, lock her in his arms facing her. He looks in her eyes and vice versa!

abhay: piyaa
piya: Hmmm
abhay: Your Beautiful * While running his fingers on her face*
piya: Hmmm
abhay: I need to tell you something!
piya looks at him with a questioning eye!

abhay: What if i say you complete me? what if i say that my life is hell without you!!!!
Actually piya, i dont have words to describe you! My whole life i searched for true love, little did i kno i wud get someone who loves me this much! Your like a god-send angel!

THE NEXT SCENE IS NOT FOR KIDS... IM WARNING RYT NOW! Dont say i didnt warn anyone! LOL😃


*Roshni Se Bare Bare*(Ashoka) Music starts... (just imagine lol)
piya hesitates but gives in after feeling his touch!
He lifts her up and carries her to the bed. He takes off her duppata from her shoulder and unpins her hair!


He then takes off her jewelries leaving it beside them on the bed. Meanwhile abhay kisses her forehead and
eyes in shock! He smiles and she blushes...
she closes her eyes!
abhay gives a naughty look at took the opportunity while her eyes r closed, he kissed her lips and she opened her closed eyes!!!

Scene shift to abeer,

He decides to go call him!. He walks up the stairs n towards abhay's room and is about to knock when vedh comes He is drinking a wine glass {containg blood} and and he forgets its abhay's first night 2day!. vedh comes and stops him!.

abeer: What happened bhai? Any problem?
vedh: You idiot, dont disturb Da!
abeer: why? is he ok?
vedh: you know that. dont do nonsense and go to your room...
abeer: yes da i am so tired...
vedh: paagal
abeer: good night vedh da...

Scene shifts to abhaya room... *song still playing*

abhay again kisses piya and this time she gives in! she holds the back of his head and pulls him towards her feeling the response.abhay got happy and made the kiss deeper. While with his fingers he starts to untie the dhori's that are located at the back of piya's lengha!

He pins piya's hand to the bed and slightly move on top of her (his face to top of hers, not the body! Relax girls, i hope not fainted)

Her eyes closed and he admires her!

Slighty goes in to her face, he kisses her nose, eyes, cheeks forehead and then finds his way to her lips which was light pink! His kiss was full of passion and love! piya response his kiss with love as well!

He slips a ring on her fingure, and unzip her lower part of her lengha! and lifts her up again! (what to do? hes a macho man)

Puts her in the middle of the bed! Then you see the white silky bed sheets on piya and abhay is still in black suit..he removes his shirt and untug his buttons

Then abhay holds piya close and starts caressing her and she moans a little ! He closes his eyes with her voice ecoing in his head! He pins her hands against the bed and she moans in his ears! piya finally grip her hand to his and they become one!

The wind blows the candles and the room has only moon lights which makes the whole scene natural!

The sun rises and brings a new day, piya sleeping on abhays Bare chest and their clothes is on the floor!


so friends here i end the story..here i tried to make some natural scene...hope you will like them...












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Posted: 14 years ago
yay first again to coment😆

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hey kajal what can i say i am still blushing...i can just say it was too hot to handle😆
awesome!
Edited by ilove99 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago


well dear what happened? dont keep suspense say it



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Posted: 14 years ago
edited kajal i was reading have patience😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ilove99

yay first again to coment😆

-----edited--------

hey kajal what can i say i am still blushing...i can just say it was too hot to handle😆
awesome!



thanks actually yaar it took a lot of time for me to write everything
and like you all are my friends..so thoda excitement hota hai
jab abhay aur piya ki first night...thank u so much
hope u liked it...




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