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Posted: 13 years ago
hey its a long time since update...waiting for update dear :)
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PART- 47

After some time when maan returned from his study room he surprised. In his room nothing is on place. every thing is misplaced. Maan is a very discipline person. He don't like when any things misplaced in his room but today what happened…all the things cloths thrown here and there. geet running behind kuhu. Kuhu is already hiding under the coat.

"kuhu pls come here its already time up…"

Even he saw under the cot . only wearing dipper and she is hiding with wide smile showing her thumb up. He saw geet face. She made baby face." Maan look at her …I am trying from last thirty minutes to catch her …but she is not obeying my words. She is running here and there see ,how she thrown her cloths and toys .now she went under the cot" very sweetly she complained.

Maan saw her face. No one believe that she is a mother to two years baby. it seems like two children fought and complain to each other. Some where he didn't found difference between them.

Its really tuff to go under the cot. But kuhu sitting under the cot and teasing both of them. Anni before itself informed that how she will escape from her daily bath and when feeding her. its daily a task for her. now it is experiencing both of them.

Now both try to go under the cot. Again kuhu started to move under the cot. While trying to catch her both head hitted by cot. " ouch "Geet immediately screamed. Immediately maan rubbed her head and geet started to rub his head. after few seconds both came on sense and look at kuhu. Still she is giving naughty smile and blubbering " mama…" geet smoothly pulled kuhu to engulf and try to come out. Maan went out pulled her leg from under the cot. Finally kuhu and geet both came out side.

Now geet hold kuhu tightly and take her bathroom. Even maan followed. Geet made her sit in baby tub started to pour water and try to apply baby soap. Suddenly kuhu started to jump in bath tub and started cry loudly. Maan worried and rushed to test the water temperature. It is quite warm that means wontedly kuhu playing with them.

Finally geet started to tell some old stories , now kuhu started to enjoy her bath with parents. Maan just watching how geet is handling kuhu. Every thing is new to him. he missed all this beautiful movements all these days. Now he is enjoying each and every movement with his family.

Suddenly kuhu started to hit soap water from her tiny hands. It splashed on geet and maan. she is playing with soap bubbles and water. geet worried whether the soap water harm her eyes. she try to stop her, in this process soap water splashed on her face and it entered her eyes also.

Its really burning to her…some how she managed to complete her bath and take her from washroom. She applied baby cream and baby powder to her body. when she dress up her neatly its taken nearly one and half hour. Maan just wondering looking her patience.

He saw the time it is already eleven clock..he didn't believe it. he spend so much of time with kuhu without time sense. How its possible..he smiled…at office when employs come to office 10 to 20 minutes late due to some family problems he will fire them…when he is firing they will be in tense after few minutes they will be chatting happily with subordinates. He will question him self how its possible how can happy so much after getting so much shouting from him. now he understood, Nothing is painful in front of his baby and wife. Today he missed his meetings and other important schedule but still he is happy bcoz he is enjoying with his family for first time.

Anni came and take kuhu to feed her…geet still rubbing her eyes…still it is burning to her. maan moved to close her….she is busy in wiping her eyes. Its become already red…now it is itching her..again she moved her hand to rub her eyes..maan hold her hand immediately." Geet ..it will hurt you..ill do it.. "he come close. he stared on her eyes. his look melting her….she just lost in his look…she forget her pain, just she is watching his eyes. slowly he leaned on her face and he touched his warm lips deeply to her eye, she closed her eye. Geet felt wet and warm on her eye. Its removing her pains. She stood like a statue. Few seconds passed still both lost in their own world. Maan closed his eyes with pleasure. His body hormones are craving to move more with her.

Now he is scanning her feelings from top to bottom. Her complete surrender is waking his beasts which he hided all these days. Without his effort his fingers holed her soft chin. Her cheeks turn to red. Her eyes glued on floor. After their three years marriage still she is shying like a new bride. Her shyness waking his desires . geet lifted her right hand. Her palm slowly caressed his cheek. . Her touch taking him to heaven. His left hand pulled her waist close..she didn't protest it. Still she lost in his eyes. he leaned on her rosy lips. before touching her lips some thing made him to wait. Geet parted her lips …inviting him.

Now she crossed her arms around his neck. now without his effort she is pulling him close. There is a very beautiful movement between them..which can not be describe by words. Only who can understand and feel who can feel love. Maan couldn't control him self. he closed his eyes. very soft like feathers something touched his lips. it is very sweet….there is small whimper out from her mouth. When he opened his eyes he surprised. Geet kissing him her own wish …which is not believable. What he felt on his lips it is not a feather.

Her kiss ignite his desires. he continued with her, letting her in…. Very soon her lips glued on his lips. both closed their eyes enjoying their kiss. They really don't know how long they hold in same position. When maan mobile ring they came on sense….but maan didn't mind to pick the phone. He don't want to come out from his own world….but geet already withdrawn her self. immediately her eyes filled with tears.

She is blaming her self. why she is becoming so helpless in front of him. very well known what is his intension. Then how come I do this….why I am going weak in front of him….it means again I am going to fall him…no its not right….oh bhabhaji pls get me strength to fight against all these..now how to face him…her feelings turn to sobbing. She is controlling her self….yes maan promised..without her permission he won't touch her….he kept his promise ..but what I am doing..her shyness , pain, guilty everything turn to tears.

Maan observing her silently he understood what is running in her mind. He moved to her ..he hold her chin in his fingers."..geet.." there is lot of emotions are in his voice."…don't cry…its ok…" when he concerned her , suddenly she got angry…her blood rushed in her veins forcefully. She started to shiver. she don't know where to pour her anger ..her anger turns on him.

"maan , don't try to come near…pls don't make me so weak…you know very well that why I am in front of you…pls don't use me like…. what you said that day. I can't fight anymore in all this issue..i am tired.." she blabbered between her sobbing. she couldn't control her self…she fainted…

When she about to fell on floor maan holed her carefully. Immediately he placed her on bed. He informed anni….anni rushed inside…still her tear marks are on cheeks. Anni thrown a angry look on him..maan felt guilt" no..anni..i didn't do anything…. first you check her…"

Anni checked her blood pressure…it is too high..it can be hammer age her brain…"maan bhai ,what is the problem. Why she is stressing her self. …for her age its really to high..it mey paralyze her brain."

Maan shocked…..just he shattered… our closeness making her stress…"geet .." he whispered him self. once upon a time he didn't understand her love towards him…today he understood but she is not recognizing it. ….Each and every move she is doubting on him. she is stressing her self….how to make her to believe…. He pulled his hairs roughly.

Anni still watching his reaction…some thing is wrong…she took his hand in her hand" maan bhai still any problem…"

He didn't dare to answer to her question. just he dipped his face in her palms and started to cry. He couldn't speak. He couldn't explain about his situation….can anybody understand…no…the person who is suffering only he can understand about his feelings. Many times there is no words to explain about many thing. Now anni is asking something but he don't know how to explain it…no words to explain …

The great maan singh khurana who can deal everything within a second, who can control his surroundings with his finger tips…the ego which is present till today, today his ego hurt very badly. he is become nothing. His own wife is not believing his love. He felt as if he lost everything…..

Pre cap: pls wait for previous pre cap.

Friends really very sorry . I couldn't update regularly..bcoz my management handled some new projects to me. pls believe me ..before ill watch geet two or three times but now I am not getting time to watch it

Still I am waiting for your valuable likes and comments..

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Posted: 13 years ago
thanx for updating...
geet is fighting she is confused not able to understand whats going ...
nice part... loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome...loved it...

Update soon...

Thanx 4r pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome!
now i am feeling really sorry for maan!
continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
excellent
do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update...
feeling very sad for her...
she is not being able to come out of the past...
eagerly waiting for your next update...

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Posted: 13 years ago
its awesum varsha...

i can understand...dont stress urself dear...

v ll wait 4 d update...

luvd d update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 47 ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
late part but dear
great one

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