Mein Deewana Fan-Fic(Last Part,Page 73) - Page 5

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Part 8


At Marine Hotel


Angad reach early at the restaurant.He Drank many cups of coffee,almost 6 or 7 cups of coffee.At Last Josh reached there.Angad saw Josh at the door way coming inside.He ran to Josh.He hugged him,Josh was shocked at this behavior of Angad.They Both reach their table.


A:Josh c'mon start, Tension se mera blood pressure high ho raha hai aur ab tum ne aik min bhi dair ki mujhe woh baat baatane mein to main mar jaon ga.


J:Chill Chill..

A:chill my foot now tell fast plz..

J:jab hum london mein rehte the to kripa wahan study karti thi aik college mein.os college mein aik naya larka aya jise os college ke bare mein kuch pata nahi tha.Kripa ne ose baataya aur ragging hone se bachaya woh dono aik hi class mein the.woh dono aik sath parhte yahan tak ke aik tak khate ghoomte.aik din os larke ne ghar aa ker kripa ko propose kiya kripa ne haan ker di aur phir woh larka papa ke pass gaya aur papa ne ose ghar se dhakke maar ker bahar nikaal diya.He was not even poor.woh bohut rich tha mager papa ki marzi ke aag kripa ki aik na chali.Kripa phir bhi baaz nahi ayi aur chup chup ker os se milti thi.aik din os larke
ne kripa ko phone kiye cinema jane ke liye.aur papa ne os ki baatein dosere phone per sun li aur kuch gundon ko hire ker ke le gaye aur kripa ke samne ose itna mara peeta ke os ke bache ke koi chances nahi the aur aaj tak kripa ko yeh nahi pata ke woh kaha hai kyon ke hum
yahan shift ho gaye the.roz raat ko sleeping pills leti hai kyon ke ose neend nahi ati bas jab sone lagti hai to wohi accident os ke samne aa jata hai..

A(SAD):hmmmmm..mein kripa ko sleeping pills nahi lene don ga its harm for her..

J:haan pata nahi kya hoga os ka shayad os ki zindagi mein kuch aur likha ho shayad

A(INTERRUPTS):shayad os ki zindagi mein os se behtar likha ho

Josh sees him whose eyes are in full love..

A:shayad woh os ke liye acha na ho.Shayad os ki kismat mein koi aur likha ho

Now Angad smiles and says

A:Shayad woh mein hi hon

J:Angad mujhe tum per pura bharosa hai aur mein tumhara pura saath don ga.. Don't Worry

A:ok to mein ab chalta hon...haan lekin os larke ka kya naam hai

J:os ka naam

Suddenly Josh's cell phone rings

J(ON CELL):Hello

AN:tum kaha ho

J:anjum mein bas aa raha hon

AN:come fast

J:ok jaan bye

AN:bye

J:angad i have to go bye dude

A:Josh per os larke ka naam

But it was too late Josh was gone..


To Be continued

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Part 9


At khanna Mansion


Dilip was waiting for angad to come and have some dinner when he sees angad on the door way coming upset.

A:Hello

Dilip was shocked that he said hello to Him And stops and looks at Dilip who was totally shocked.

A:don't worry meine aap ko nahi mom ko kaha hai..Hi mom

D:Beta ao dinner ker lo

A:mom mujhe bohut bhook lagi hai mere kamre mein dinner bejwa deina

D:beta yahan beth ke kha lo

A:don't say beta ok..

N:Angad mind ur language kaise baat ker rahe ho apne papa se

D:naina plz chup ho jao

A:aaray aap rehne dijiye

N:shut up angad

D:naina plz

N:plz bohut ho gaya aap chup rehiye din ba din ye kuch zayada hi bolta hai

A:mom aap mujhe kyon dant rahi hain what i did?

N:tum ne to kuch kiya hi nahi na he is ur dad understood

A:no he is not

right then kartick enters with his court on his right hand

N:lo ab isi ki bari thi ao tum bhi ao

KA:kyon ab kya hua...wait a min kahi yahan sab phir woh larai jadga...Oh Jesus

A:mein too chala kyon ke mera bohut sir dard ho raha hai

K:haan mein bhi aage hi business ki waja se mera sir phata ja raha hai aur yahan behez ker ke mein apna sir pharna nahi chahta

They both leave as Dilip fell down on the floor.Naina runs to him and says

N:Dilip aap theek to hain na

D:naina meri fikar mat karo jao apne beton ko dekho ke woh theek hain

N:Dilip aap

D:Naina bas tum jao

N:lekin dilip

D:Naina jao..plz just go

Naina leaves while Dilip go to his room and cries..

At Kartick's room

Naina enter and saw kartick fell on his bed like he was soooooo tired..

At Angad's Room

Angad throws all the thing on the floor and cries alot while throwing a lamp his perfumes bottle his clothes and everything.Now Angad looks at the mirror his Face and says to himself

A:mujhe nafrat hai..nafrat hai dad ke mein aap ko beta hon lekin mein apne aap ko doshi kyon de raha meine to kuch kiya hi nahi...lekin aap ko is ki saza bhokatni hogi..he says louder.. BHOKATNI HOGI.......

and he fell on the floor and cries louder and louder...Naina enters and is shocked to see angad in this pain.....

N:angad ye tum ne...tum ro rahe ho

A:mom plz leave me alone at once and he cries again..

N(AKSO CRIES):nahi mein aise tumhe akele nahi chodh sakti..beta is mera kya kasoor..tum dono mujhe kyon saza dete ho in sab baataon ki..

A:mom aap ka koi kasoor nahi balke aap ke pati ka kasoor hai

D:beta woh mere pati aur tumhare dad..

A(INTERRUPT AS TEARS ARE FALLING DOWN TO HIS CHEEKS):woh mere dad nahi hain woh sirf aap ke pati hai na hi mere dad..

N:theek hai ab tum rona band karo warna mein apne aap ko kuch ker bethon gi

A:plz mom aap aisa mat kehiye ager aap ko kuch ho gaya to mein apne aap ko kabhi kaaf nahi ker
paon ga..

N:ok now stop..she wipes angad's tears and angad put his head on Naina's Lap and closes his eyes.Naina caresess his hair while angad just relax..Soon angad fall asleep and naina goes to his room and also goes to sleep before she can make dilip sleep..


TO BE CONTINUED...


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Part 10


At Sharma Mansion

Gayatri and Surybhaan goes to a business trip at early morning.Josh was busy in flirting other girls on his cell and kripa was just boring while she remembers all moments with Angad

K(TO HERSELF):ye mujhe kya ho raha hai mein kyona ngad ki taraf ja rahi hon ye kon si dori hai jo mujhe angad ke itne kareeb le ja rahi hai

Suddenly Josh enters Kripa's room and sees him in dreams.Josh snaps fingers in front of kripa suddenly kripa comes back to reality

K:Josh tum..kab..aye

J:krips kaha khoyi ho is everything ok..

K:ya sab theek hai..

J:dekho kripa i m ur bro u can share with me

K:Josh sab theek hai

J:sure

K:yeah

J:chalo kahi bahar chalte hain

K:nahi josh mera mann nahi hai

J:yaar kripa..ok fine kam se kam tum mere sath niche to aa sakti ho na

K:josh seriously mere kuch karne ko mann nahi hai

J:ok

Kripa's Cell Ring with vibration

Ring Ring

Josh was leaving from Kripa's room when he hears..

K:Hi Angad

Josh was shocked that kripa was talking to Angad like Happy Girl he goes out and listen their all conversation

K:mein theek hon bolo kaise yaad kiya

A:woh kripa i was boring to chalo kahi bahar chalte hain

K:haan mein bhi i think this is a good idea

A:to kaha chalein

K:beach per chalte hain wohi wali

A:ok fine be ready

K:ok bye

A:bye

Kripa puts his cell down.Josh once again enter's KRipa's Room singing

J:le jayenge le jayenge dilwaley dulhania le jayenge

K:JOsh ye sab kya hai

Josh continues to sing and didn't reply to kripa

J:le jayenge le jayenge dilwalay dulhania le jayenge

K:josh stop it

Kripa throws a pillow to Josh and josh runs..

J:ok stop..wah kya rishta nibhaya hai meine kaha ke chalo bahar chalen tum ne mana ker diya dulhe sahab se kaha oops i mean to say angad ne pocha to haan beach per chalte hain

K:Josh aisa kuch nahi hai

J:to meine kab kaha ke hai

Kripa was turning red

J:Bolo haan haan bolo meine kuch aisa kaha ke aisa kuch hai..

K:Josh aisa sach mein kuch nahi hai aur if u wanna come u can..

J:ya i will mein ghar per bor ho jaon ga.

K:great so get ready angad ata hi hoga

J:ok

they both get ready at time and soon we hear a horn outside.Kripa looks outside through window and u see angad's red beauty.

K:Jooooooooosssssssshhhhh...annnngggaaadd aaaaaa ggggaaaayyyyaaa

J(COVERYING HIS EARS):ssshh Kripa chila kyon rahi hon lets go..

Kripa was leaving when Josh grabs kripa's hand

J:oh God mein to Anjum ko baatana hi bhool gaya Kripa tum chalo mein abhi aya ok

K:ok

Kripa goes outside she was lookin very beautiful she was wearing a pink sleeves shirt and white pant.Angad looks at her and quickly comes back himself

K(CHEERFUL):Hi Angad

A:Kya baat hai Kripa aaj tum bohut khush aur khili khili lag rahi ho..

K:nahi aisa kuch nahi hai bas aise hi

A:ok then lets go..

TO BE CONTINUED

I know this part was a boring part i'll try next part to be good and interesting..!!

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