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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART 5

they all go to the dance floor the background music is Halka Halka Sa nasha from the movie
Chocolate.Angad looks at kripa while dancing .kripa is so busy in talking to prithvi that she
doesn't feel like someone is staring at her.angad keeps on staring and dreaming...when the
song changes.now the partners were as follows

Angad with Anjum

Josh With Anita

Rahul with Mishti

Harshini with the rich guy will be introduced soon..

Prithvi with Kripa

but when the songs changes now the partners were:

Anjum with Josh

Anita with Rahul

Harshini with Prithvi

Mishti with any son of a rich family will be introduced soon..

Angad with Kripa..

Angad was shocked that kripa was with him .he can't believe his eyes his arms his hands which
are touching her waist.He juts stared at her with dreamy eyes.But when kripa know that she was
with prithvi's friend she started feeling embaracing.but some where in her heart was saying that
this boy is her destiny don't leave her,he will love u,start to talk with her,ask his name
so u will not feel embarace.but as her heart says to speak something angad speak first.

A:Hi i m ANgad Abhi Abhi Josh ne mujhe introduce karaya Remember..

K:ya i remember

K(thing to herself):stupid idiot abhi josh ne hume milwaya to zahir si baat hai ke mein is
se mili hon..

A(thinking to himself):God how stupid i m shuru kiya bhi to kya bola..of course os ne mujhe
dekha hai to mili hi hogi...kuch aur poch leta hon..Angad and Kripa Both Speaks together.

K AND A:TUM!!

they both laugh coz they said tum at the same time..

A:dekho kitni achi shuruwat hui hai..

K:haan mujhe bhi yehi lagta hai..

A:so Friends..

K:uuhhhhhhhhhh

A:c'mon kripa is mein sochne ki kya baat hai..

K:ok Friends..

A:forever?

K(laughs):ya forever...

and they share a dance for long time and get separated coz of the game..after some time the
game is over now..

A:Josh!!!

J:aray tum..yaar bohut matlabi ho tum..meri behen ko dekhte hi os ke sath chipak gaye..

A:yaar aisi koi baat nahi..ab sirf introduction aur dosti se to kam nahi chalta na..

J:what kaha tum ne come again

A:uff..dekho tum pagal ho ..nahi hona..

Josh nods her head

A:haan to os pagalpan ke sath jina mumkin nahi jab ke pagal hona zaroori hai..ager tum pagal ho...to
ose zahir na karo aur pagal nahi aur to pagalpan zahir karo is tarah tum pure ke pure pagal ho nahi
sakte kyon ke pagal hi duniya mein sab se bara mana jata hai....Then he takes a heavy breath..
understood..

J:uhh...yaar tume ye jo pagalpan ka itna bara lecture diya hai os ka kya matlab hai..

A:yaar tum nahi samjho ge...

P:yaar what r u doing here lets enjoy..

K:Joshh lets go mein suba se bohut thaki hui hon...

J:little bit plz haan to angad woh tum..

A(interrupts):josh tumhari behen ghar jane ko keh rahi hai aur tum ho ki kaise bhai ho..kripa
tum fikar mat karo mein tumhe chor deta hon..meine aise ache ache bhaiyon ko theek kiya hai
tum chalo..and kripa nods her head and they both went outside..

J(talking to himself):aray meine aisa kaha kya...

Prithvi laughs:yaar tum angad ko to jante ho na....ullu bana gaya tum ko..and he laughs again
and Josh was still conufused.....

to be continued

Sweetz Gurl 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#32
haha!!!!...omgg tht was soo funni and cute!!!...im loving this story soo far!!!!...its very interesting!!!...plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon!!!...i cant wait!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#33
wowwwwwww so cuteeeeeee
plz cont sooon
love the partssssss 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
Part 6

Outside

K:angad mein bohut thak gayi hon plz drop me home as soon as possible..

A:ok

Angad drive at a sea place where it was silence u can feel relax of the sound of the waves..

K:angad ye tum mujha kaha le aye i said drop me home not here..

A:haan mager ye aik aise jaga hai jab bhi mein yahan ata hon to bohut relax feel karta hon..

K:oh really

A:ya ..yahan ki khasiyat hi yehi hai ke yahan log bohut kam ate hain jaise ke tum dekh hi sakti ho ke yahan dur dur tak koi admi ka naam-o-nishaan nahi..

K:haan woh to hai per..

A:per wer kuch nahi come with me..

They both close to the sea and sit on one rock..

A:so how r u feeling?when angad looked at kripa she saw a new kripa who have closed her eyes and relaxing..angad was taken back by kripa now..

K:angad its soo relaxing ..aisa lag raha hai jaise bohut dino baad aram ker rahi hon..when she opened her eyes she saw angad staring at her with dreamy eyes..

K:Angad!!Angad..she waves her hand in the air

A:huh

K:kya hua

A:kuch nahi bas aise hi..he turned his face around

Kripa picks up some sand and sprinkle it all over angad ..Angad's mouth fell open..Kripa starts to run and kripa towards her...soon kripa stopped falls..Both of them were laughing like crazy but soon when they realized that they were so close to each other.Kripa stood up cleaning her sari and pulling up her sari from one shoulder..

K:angad plz lets drive at my home way..i m feeling like sleepy and they ran from there into the car..

Angad didn't know what was just happened with kripa and why was she soo scared..he was confused and left to the car as well.. There was a strange silence between them.Angad could not take it them and Angad can't take this anymore so he finally speaks..


A:kripa tumhe mere sath ane mein koi problem to nahi hai na

K:nahi angad its fine

A:aur tum ne kis haq se bola..

K:kisi haq se nahi

Angad was little disappointed

A:Kripa tum ne kabhi kisi se pyaar kiya hai..

at first kripa made a sad look and was quite but later few minutes she speaks-

A:kripa..kahan ho..hello mein tum se baat ker raha hon..

K:huh..Angad aik baat bolon..

A:haan bolo

K:tum bolte bohut ho..thori dair chup nahi reh sakte..

A:aur ye tum ne kis haq se bola..

K:tumhari dost hone ke haq se..

now angad was happy and he remain quite and a smile appears on his face which was there on the whole way to kripa and soon they reach kripa's place..

K:thanks angad for dropping me at my home and bye..take care..she was about to turn around when she sees angad smiling at not replying..

K:angad u ok?angad i m talking to u??still no reply..Angad Talk damn it..

A:kripa pehle khud hi to bolti ho ke mein chup nahi reh sakta aur khud hi convince ker rahi ho bolne ke liye..

K:God angad tum bhi na..Aik dum pagal ho..

A(thinking to himself):haan woh to mein hon tumhare liye..

K:Ok bye angad and take care....

A:bye..

To be Continued..

Sweetz Gurl 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#35
wow!!!...tht was really good!!!!...plzzz continue!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#36
omg that was so cute...continue sooon....i cant wait
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 7

Next Morning

Josh opens the door of his room and thought that he should call angad coz he know angad is yet not awaken so he should awake him..

Angad who was dreaming all night of Kripa..and calling kripa's name again and again..in his dream he saw that one man is saying to angad that he should tell kripa that u love her and can't live without her.At the mean time angad's cell starts to ring

Ring Ring

Angad gets up shocked and picked up the call without saying who r u or else..he directly says"Kripa I LOVE U ...I REALLY LOVE U I CAN"T LIVE WITHOuT U.."

J:what????what do u mean?

angad came back to reality

A:whoz this?he asked little bit scared that it could not be josh's voice if it is then he would kill him..

J:its josh

Angad was shocked

A(hesitate):Josh..tu..m..itni suba kaise yaad kiya..

J:angad abhi abhi meine kya suna hai

A:kya suna hai mujhe bhi baatao

J:angad stop joking ...u love kripa and u din't told me..

A:who love kripa and who didn't told u plz explain

J(angrily):Angad!!!!tell me the truth right now..

A(scared):Josh..woh..tum ne sahi suna i love kripa..

J(still angry):kab se?

A:kal raat se

J:what??kal raat se aur ise tum pyaar kehte ho chi..

A:nahi yaar pyaar hone ke liye time nahi lagta bas kabhi bhi kisi waqt ho jata hai..

J:yaar tum to Love ke philosopher nikle..

A:is ka matlab tum mujh se naraz nahi ho na..

J:bilkul nahi..mager

A(scared):mager kya..

J:tum kripa ke bare mein aik kadhwa sach nahi jante..

A:kon sa sach..

J:sun sako ge

A(now being more scared):josh plz mera blood pressure high ho raha hai jaldi baatao warna mein mar jaon ga..

J:aise nahi hum shaam ko milte hai na..

A:nahi josh mein shaam tak intezaar nahi ker sakta..

J:to

A:josh plz do something tell me as soon as possible..

J:ok lunch per milte hain at Marine Hottle..

A:ok

they both put off the phone..

A(thinking to himself):Josh i can't wait till lunch too..ab ye waqt nikaalna to pare ga hi and he runs into the bathroom to take shower..

To be continued

Sweetz Gurl 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
awesome parts
and the part where josh phone is soo funny 😆 😆
cont soon
cant wait for next part and to know abt kripas past
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Posted: 19 years ago
#39
thank u hot_girl_2525 and yeah more twists are coming up in next more parts so keep reading 😛

Sweetz Gurl
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Posted: 19 years ago
#40
please cont soon soon soon soon
love ittt

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