my dil goes...hmmm...hmmm..hmmm.MG.SS ...prt 2 pg6 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
awesome lovely start yaar loved it a lot...waiting 4 geet's entry...😊😳😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awsum beggining


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Update soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved the update...
mishti is so cute and adorable she speaks like geet but geet is not her mother right...
adorable dad...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved the start. please pm me on the update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome part..love the bonding of father and daughter..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: preethia

loved the update...

mishti is so cute and adorable she speaks like geet but geet is not her mother right...
adorable dad...
pl cont soon




ya ur rite...geet is not her mother...


and who is her mother...the secret will reveal according to the story...😉


thnx..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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who wants to get pm...plz snd me a buddy reqst...then it will be easy for me...😊



thnx for liking it...



will update tonight...😊


love u all...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plz plz plz plz continue...& i am fully excited 2 d hundredth power...lolllzzz😆😆😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part~2


later on the evening...maan comes from office...enters his room and finds mishti is sitting on the bed...


he was a bit curious to see her this time sitting there...usually this time she remians in her study room doing her home works...


'mishtu...bacha tum is waqt yahan?...home works ho gyi?...'he askes her...


she smiles at her widely...and says..'oh papa...padai to hoti rehti hai na...but aaj muje papa ke sath yahan beth kar bohot sari bate karni hai...'saying this..she holds his hand and made him sit on the bed...



maan smell something fishy...hmm...mishty always behave unnecessecerily sweet when there is some thing she want...he made her sit on his lap...'acha bacha?...thik hai fir...aj ke lie no padai...so bataiye...kya bat karni hai hamari princess ko humse?...'he said...



mishty tries to smiled hard...'papa...u know...u r the bestest papa in the world...i just love you...'she kisses him on his cheek...



by this time maan confirms that there is surely something cooking in her mind...'ya mishty i know that...and u r also papas good daughter...now tell me the truth mishty...'he winks at her...



she gulpes down her saliva...'truth...konsa papa?...aap bhi na...'she made a complaining face...



'mishty...u know na am ur dad...u cant hide anythink from me..he.tell me wts the matter?...'he said sternly...



'papa...woh...woh...'she fumbles...


'mishty...'he said a bit seriosly loudlly this time...



she becomes scared and immidietly passes her school dairy to him...


maan opens it..and read it carefully...'hmm...summer camp...on shimla?...no way...i will talk to ur techer tommorow...'



'but papa...i wanna go this time...u never allows me to go there...'she mades a pleading face...




'mishty...tum akele mere bina kahin nahi ja rhi...samji..?tum summer camp ke lie nahi jarahi...and thats it...'he closes the dairy at once...



'papa please...'she reqsts...



'no means no...dont you get me?...'he shout...



it bring tears to her eyes...she starts to cry...maan closes his eyes in frustation...she hates tearts in her eyes...and now he is the reason for it...


'daat dia na bachhi ko?...maan...aisa kya kaha usne?...tum kiyu nahi jane dete use?...uske sare frnds to jate hai?...'


maan turns his head to find daadi is standing near the door...mishty goes to her...and hugs her crying...


'daadi ab aap bhi?...no way daadi...its not safe..agar use kuch ho gaya to?...no way...me use kabhi permission nahi dunga...'he declared...


'tum kabhi nahi sudhroge...'daadi took mishty in her lap and take her to daadi's room...


mishty was still crying...'daadi...aap please kaho na papa se ke muje jaane de...muje jana hai daadi..please...'


daadi feels sorry for her...then suddenly a plan comes to her mind...'beta..agar aapke dad ko pata hi na chale ke tum camp par gayi ho to?...'



she wipes her tears in joy...'sachhi daadi?but aisa kaise ho sakta hai?...'



'ho sakta hai...ek kam krte hai...aj rat jab aapke papa so jayenge..to hum or aap chupke se camp kelie nikal jayenge...to unhe pata bhi nahi chalega...ok?'


'grtt daadi...but fir to woh boht tension krenge na mere lie?...'she puts a baby face...



'ha woh bhi hai..thik ha aap unke lie ek letr likh kr jana ok?...'



'woh daadi..ur the best...'she hugs her...




later on the night...maan comes to daadis room to find mishty is sleeping on the bed..he bends and kisses her forehead...'sorry baby...humne aapko rula dia...par kya kare?...aap agar ek mint ke lie bhi humse door hote ho to aapke papa kijaan nikal jati hai...'he murmers...and left silently...



after he was gone...mishty openes her eyes...'sorry papa...but i realy wanna go...'she said...


after maan sleeps...she and daadi goes out for shimla...



IN THE CAMP...



mishty just comes out of the car,,,she just fall in love with the place...she starts to talk with the kids...and they enters through the gate...



she found all the kids were running to a direction...she follows them...daadi wne to the rooms for rest...


she founds a girl...weariung a pink salwar kamiz is standing at a distance holding some baloons and chocolates in her hand and with a wide smile in her face...


mishty goes to her along with other kids...


the girl distributes the baloons and chocolates among them...and then she introduces herself...



'hii kids...am your dance teacher here...my name is geet...tum sab muje geet didi kehkar bula sakte ho...ok?...so...ab kon apna name batayega?...she askes to them...



mishty finds her very nice...she looks very sweet...she talks so nicely...



after some time geet comes to her...'sweetheart..aapne apna naamnahi bataya?...'she smiles to her...



'my name is mishty...'she smiles back...



'arre wah..yeh to bohot acha name hai...or aapko pata hai..aap bhi aapki name ki trah bohot mishty ho...;she pulls her chicks...


'thnk u didi...aap bhi bohot achi ho...'she replied...



geet couldnot stop her smiling...she talks so cutely...'acha?..so u like me?...'she askes...




mishty nodes immedietly...'ha bohot...'



'umm..then lets be friend...?...'geet forwads her hand to shake with her...



'friends...'she holds her hands...



and boht of them starts to chat...


precap~maans reaction...😲😲😲😲

maaneet meeting...😉




how ws it guys?...


i know it was a lot like k2h2...😉


hope u wil like it...


love u all...


~~~soumi~~~




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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
Nice part
Maan loves Mishti a lot
N Mishti n Geet's meet was sho cute
It sumwhr reminds of K2H2

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