Maneet FF - GEETIKA (OLD THREAD 2 - 2011-12) IMP NOTE PG 140 - Page 86

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Posted: 13 years ago
Here goes Part 55, will check errors one by one later.
PART 55:
Haan...I came to know everything... On my Birthday treat in Trident Square, you and Geet planned to dance together so that you can make me feel jealous...hmm?
Yash rubs his temple and not able to control his smile...At the same time, Maan breaks the glass which he was holding in his hand with a deep shock with what he just heard from Meera.

Geet got to see it and also got to see that Maan has hurt his hand by doing so and she shivers seeing blood in his hand. She's not able to take it.

Maan bangs his (Same) hand on the Bar table...So, this was the reason behind Geet-Yash to dance on that day...and I had assumed so many things...and what all followed is all because of that day...He is rolling his eyes and closes it again hating himself.

All that happened on that Friday and Sunday is my reaction towards that day I saw Geet with Yash...and as the result I poured her with all those abusive and harsh words and...

Geet runs to him and holds his hand...she's shivering with fear in seeing the blood...

Maan is not having the courage to even look at her. And when she came to my home for the first time, I didnt even care to allow her to drink even a glass of water...instead I hurt her and hrew her out...because all that time I was in this state of mind thinking about Yash and Geet. His head dipped in shame.

Get me Ice...and please arrange for a bandaid...She requests the bar attender.

She applies ice on the wound and plasters the bandaid on the effected area in the hand... and she's still going restless...

Sir...what is this? Why are you doing all this? Tell me what are you upto?

He slowly turns to look at her...

I know you care a damn about other's feelings...but I never knew you have the same attitude towards yourself!

He just looks at her...with a blank note...

Is this the way you behave yourself? You first break the glass and hurt your hand and with the same hand you bang the table...and...she stops for a while...See, how much you are hurting yourself...

He holds her hand...Geet...this is nothing in front of the pain of your hidden wounds...

They both have a emotional eyelock...She slowly frees her hold on his hand when she sees Dev and NT rush to the place.

Bro..what happened? Are you Alright?

I'm fine Dev...This glass broke by me and this caused small wound in my hand..

Geet slowly moves from there. She's still not completely out of her shell... To her she feels Maan doesnt like any of the employees to be involved in his family matters...she leaves from there as she didnt want to be inbetween his family...Idhu avaroda kudumbam...naan yen talaiidanum? (Its his family...why should I interfare?)

She comes back and joins Yash and Meera...

Geet...All fine na?

She's still lost in someother world...

GEET!

Hun..haan Meera...

What happened? Why are you so lost? Is everything fine with your boss?

Hmm..

Maybe he broke the glass accidently...Forget it...lets dance! Yash insists

Hey...you people carry on...I have some important work to finish and then join you in 5 mins. And Meera leaves from there

Yash notices Geet is still not in her form...he wants to cheer her up.

Geet...come lets dance...

Yash...you carry on...

Oh Geet...Dont worry about Meera. She'll not mind it any more hmm? Yash drags her to the dance floor and they dance together.

Yash talk to her while dancing...

Geet...Is everything all right at your end? I have been observing you all this while and you dont seem to be fine to me.

Yash...I told you right I had a busy day ...that's why.

Maan turns around to see every where and finally, he gets to see Geet dancing with Yash. This time he is not restless seeing her dancing wtih Yash. He has been working hard to make up to her and looking for every possible opportunity to patch up.

Maan slowly moves towards the dance floor. By then Yash and Geet take a break to have a soft drink. Maan happens to hear them talk.

Geet...Thank You so much...I am so excited today...All my dreams came true...You know something, My parents are behind me for the last 2 years asking me to get married and they will be so happy to know about Meera. I want to take her home...but silly thoughts come to my mind

What silly thoughts?

Will she like my home? Till yesterday I felt its big enough but why do I feel all of a sudden that I am living in a small place.

Yash...May I say something? No girl will ever see how big is your home...she will see how much love, affection, care and respect she gets from the people living there. What's the point if you are even living in a palace with out these elements...hmm? Geet smiles weakly with moist eyes remembering all what happened on Sunday.

So, treat her with what care she deserves...I am sure she will love your place.
Yash was amazed with her words but also could see some pain behind it. Maan heard all what she said and knows what she meant.
Yash...I have something to finish...Continue your dance with Meera hmm?
She turns around and wipes her tears trying to hide from Yash but not from Maan. Maan standing just behind her. She leaves from there and rushes towards the washroom to cryout in peace and wipes her tears.

When she gets back to the event floor, she gets to see Meera dancing with Yash, Pinky dancing with Aadi and many other people were on to the dance floor. She smiles at them and turns to leave from there when she sees Maan standing again right behind her. She passes by Maan and Maan suddently holds her hand...She is fighting with herself to not givein for a dance with him...slowly his hands runs thro her slender waist and pulls her towards him for a dance.

She turns around and looks at him and again tries to move out but he pulled her back for a dance.
He combines his fingers with hers making sure she doesnt escape this time.
She slowly gives in to the dance and gets fully involved in it. Both dance lost in each other's eyes as if the world doesnt mean anything to them...simply lost in each other in that brief moment.

People around are talking with each other looking at them...

Yash-Meera...Meera, dont you see something cooking between them? They look perfect together.

Meera gulping her saliva...doesnt know what to answer as she knows about Geet's past well. But also not able to relate what's going on and definetly she finds Maan and Geet's dance to be much more than what it seems.

Mr. Ravi-Mr. Hegde...Sir I could see their relationship is going one step ahead...God bless

Maan swings her and holds her hand and lifts her in the dance floor.

Dev-NT: Wow...I guess finally, Magic is working between Bro and Geetika.

NT is clinching her fist...How can I ever allow this to happen? Geetika? No way...I must find a way to stop all this. Just then she over hears Sasha and Tasha talking.

Tasha - Sasha...Maam...Maan sir didnt even look at you...and when you invited him for a dance he asked you to leave him alone and see what's going on now! Are you seeing what I am getting to see?...Look at them...this is not only a dance but something above that...

Sasha is fuming in such a way as if she is accumulating enough vocano within her.😡

Maan and Geet still making their presence in the dance floor...He had lifted her...

and slowly brings her back to the ground level invariably feeling every inch of her back and his hands rests on her waist but both didnt realise this whilst lost in each other's eyes.

Geet slowly turns to look around and finds everyone's eyes are on them. She holds his hand that's resting on her waist and pushes it slowly and moves from the dance floor.

Maan leaves from there to move in to a secret place...Why...why did I pulled her for a dance? I just wanted to make up to her...and I dragged her to the dance floor! What's happening to me? I want to do something and end up doing something else. Am I loosing it? He closes his eyes and just imagined what all happened in the dancefloor. I must go and apologize to her for this.
At the party hall...

Geet is all lost and hyperventing thinking about what just happened. She still feels his touch which she felt while dancing...Why...why did I give in to dance with him? Why?

Sasha and Tasha come close to her to taunt her with regard to dance. But stops at a distance after they see Pinky, Meera and Yash approach Geet first.

GEET...Are you alright?Meera is worried for her and Yash joins her.

Geet...do you need any help?

She's still shivering with all what happened Yash, please get me a soft drink...I am feeling really thirsty.

Sure Geet.

Yash orders one of the waiters to get a fruit cocktail without alcohol

Sasha gives a wicked smile as she has got a golden opportunity to take revenge from Geet. She stops that waiter and gives him 500 Rs and tells him to add some alcohol to the cocktail.

The waiter takes the drink to Geet...Yash and Meera still being on her side. Geet slowly sips the drink.

Geet...how are you feeling now?

Feeling better Yash...thanks for this drink.

By the way, its time to have dinner...hain na? Pinky is insisting by rubbing her tummy.

Oh yah...Lets finish with dinner...

Geet insists...you people carry on and will join you people in 5 mins hmm?

Sure Geet...finish with your drink and remember we are waiting for you.

In few minutes, Geet finishes with her drink...Sasha and Tasha are eagerly waiting for her to finish.

Tasha, Ab maza aayega, She has consumed alcohol and she'll slowly loose control over herself and end up doing things which she will be ashamed to know about it next day...😈

Yes Ma'm ...lets wait and watch what's going to happen...She was dancing so much with boss right? Now her true dance is going to be seen.

And the talk of the office will be Geet consuming Alcohol😈

Geet takes the final sip from her glass and she notices everything going blur in front of her. She's moving front and back not holding her hand on her head. Given a normal situation Sasha's plan would have been successful but this drink is having an extra effect on her for she not being an alcohol consumer till date more over her mental stress and empty stomach is just forcing her to loose her control and she's about to fall down and just then, Maan holds her.

She looks into his eyes and blinks and slowly gets unconscious.

GEET...Geet...open your eyes...what happened to you? He's patting on her face.

Yash, Meera, Pinky and Aadi rush to their side.

SS..Sir...what happened to her?

I dont know Aadi...She was about to faint and fall down. Thanks god I reached here on time.

Geet...Geet...open your eyes for God's sake? Meera is worried for Geet.

Sasha & Tasha are shocked...they didnt expect Geet to faint. They had different plan altogether. But Sasha tried to take further advantage of the situation.

MK...I guess she's drunk...

Excuse Me you...Yash loosing with what he listens from Sasha...

Who so ever you are...mind your language. She didnt consume any alcohol it was just a fruit cocktail.

Sasha gets a fear of her life...but still continues..

MK...Just smell the glass of drink which she just had.

Maan smells it and could sense some alcohol in it.

But Geet just had a fruit cocktail...I got it ordered for her. Somewhere something went wrong during the process.

Just leave it Yash...even I know that Geet consumed it by mistake. Now, let's take her to her home.

Meera says...sure Mr. Khurana...lets take her.

Maan couldnt find Dev and NT anywhere around. He calls Dev on his mobile.

Dev...be here till end of the event. I need to leave from here as there's some emergency.

Bro...is everything all right?

Nothing to worry. You just take care of the situation and update me later.

Maan lifts Geet and exits from that place.

Pinky, Yash, Meera and Aadi follow him.

NT finds its the right time to plan her move.

Sasha-Tasha are dumbstuck. What ever they do it goes for a toss.

Sasha Ma'm...was this in your plan that Geet will completely faint and Boss will carry her home...

SHUT UP TASHA😡

NT slowly comes near them...Hello Young ladies...

Sasha and Tasha turns to look at her.

Oh hello Ma'm...

You can call me Naintara hmm!

Sure Ma'm I mean Naintara.

That's better...she gives a wicked smile...I feel pity for you. I can see your interest in my Brother-in-law but he's not even bothering to look at you even...what a pity?

Sasha-Tasha looks at each other

I even know that you have been trying to woo Maan veer ji...but you have been unsuccessful...hmm?

Sasha bends down acknowledging what ever she is hearing from NT is absolutely right.

But I can help you out in this...You need to follow what I say and I promise that Maan Veerji will be all yours.

Sasha looks at her excitedly.

Before that, you need to do some tasks for me at office...hmm?

Sure...what you want me to do?

I will tell you but not now as this is not the right time for it hmm...Wait for my call.

Precap: Geet emails Maan to meet in a secret place.😲

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mrk_1

spam spam spam

spam spam zamana bole 😆
howz my song ?



loved it 😆
must say why not try a hand in becoming a lyricist of a movie
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank u sooo much for updating.

good that all doubts got cleared between them.
luvd their dance.
awww so maan is taking geet home. yummm...can't wait for the nxt update.
Edited by basicquestion1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago





I am waiting here






cum shower ur update didi
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow didi awesome update i loved it!!!maaneet dance was awesome wonderful update didi ... i want kill tat sasha

thanks for d update














Edited by poongs123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow what a damakka update
loved maan and geets dance
what ever sasha does it always ends up in bringing maaneet close
unknowingly sasha is acting as a cupid between maaneet
now wat is nt upto
hope maan does not repeat his mistake
pls continue soon
Edited by sarkh26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow i loved the update !!! maaneet dance !



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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum update.
Thank God Maan was there to catch her fall.

DUMB A** Sasha😡, want to punch her...and knock the lights out of her...🤢

Stupid Naintara...


hey is Geet gonna suffer more...??

Please...she has suffered enough...I do not want those two B*****s (pardon my language) causing problems for Geet n Maan...

Pleaseee
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update loved it lets hope this time all the plans would fail of sasha and NT
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
luved maaneet dance
urgh i hate nt sasha and tasha
hope maan does not repeat his mistake this time
pls continue soon

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