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aarthiash

@aarthiash

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#251

hi da update was very very hot n da hottness is 2 da core...n wen i was reading da closet part in penthouse ..i thought how ll it b abt a shower ...n u made it real...for dat am so happyy...do cont soon..

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#252

Awesome update

loved it loadz

OMG OMG OMG

girl are yah trying 2 kill us

man sooo hot

i think i need a fan 2 cool me down

cant wait 4 da next part

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

Muahhh

Xxx

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RAJSHREE

@raj_202

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#253

give 4or5 partsof family n then con't their honeymoon

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#254

Bth jus cant get enough of each other

Geet paka pagal hai

He was jus teasing her n she took that seriously

She shuld hav bandaged Maan's 1st

Lets c wats aage

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hopehot

@hopehot

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#255

...☺️...update

for the precap...mix it up half an half

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sana.saba7

@sana.saba7

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#256

me in AC its so HOT NA.

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Neha

@cherieLover

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#257

LOVELYYY PART

loved it

beautiful part

just simpley owesome

update soon

no family intro or anything yet, plzzz just con. this honeymoon

just lovinh it

update soon

amezing

fabulous

outstanding

spectacular

oweosme part...

update soon,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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Swati

@SwatiBeanyBrown

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#258

ok marvee,😍 3 things- positive, comparative n superlative i.e hot hotter n yes hottest!!☺️ my holy gudness!! r u realy on some mission 2 kill ur readers out of a steamy reading attack??☺️ hell yes! 😳omg!! shower scenes wanted me 2 tk a shower 4 myself! ☺️true to life scenes. 👏no fake n prudish modesty were dre! u write d real stuff grl! 👏n that's wat i love abt u n ur sexy sensuous writing style. ❤️🤗u dont go in2 safe toned down innuendos or metaphors.. u show n atleast try 2 portray d real stuff! 😉ok c'mon now, it's d 21st century 4 god's sake!!! we all knw wat is wat! 😆

ok an advice, plzz send ur name n bio 2 d mills n boons offices! ⭐️plzz do so.. they will get an ideal writer 4 their stuff! m serious!😊

n abt precap, oh yes no intruding family members nw, jst d honeymoon-temporary,permanent, real ones watever! 😍u hv given ur readers a taste of sizzling story-telling so we want MORE of it!! 😳

p.s. i jst love d way u write 18+ warning atop ur updates! 😉😆 well just keep writing n tk cr of urself n upd8 real soon!🤗