FF-Enigma- THREAD 8- (NOTE pg 137- Link to thrd 9) - Page 16

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~ENIGMA~
Part 67




?Geet "au private bathe hi!" she hides her self on his chest... Under the spread in embarrassment...

Maans hand slides on her waist looking at get lovingly. The seductive eyes brought only desire. The afternoon scorching sun starts to burn there skin! The window was full open, with small amour of breez geet felt the heat. "toh bato! What makes that word private?" geet sighed. Her skin turned pink. "hame pata nahi!" she simply replied. Couldn't look up. Dare not look up. Her eyes hungrily was looking somewhere. She knew where it wanted to look, but how could she possibly look at them.
Maan "hame nahi pata that ki!" he couldn't finish as her lips parted to say some word again. He could feel her bare breast underneath the cotton. It pressed against his chest. Her rapid heartbeat only added bit more pleasure as it messaged along his bare chest. He tries again to speak...
Geet "hame choro na!" she asks him sweetly but maan had some other ideas...
Maan "toh batovo!"
Geet "ham ka kahe?"
Maan "hamko jo suna hi!"
Geet "aur hame kase pata hoga apko ka suna hi?"
Maan "au toh seref tumko hi pata hoga!" geet sighed... Knowing where he may be indicating. Has her lips parted to speak again maan captured them in his mouth. Nibbling...
He pressed hard on her private part through his trouser and her kurta. She moaned in her mouth. It was only seductive touch nothing more or less... Her lips shivered under him while he took the control... She closed her eyes while taking in the pleasure...
Maan "ghar chale?"
Geet "ku? Ab nahi rahina!"
Maan "agar ... If you font mind us making love!" it was a very straight question, geet was shocked yet embarrassed... He slowly started to nibble on her lips... She pushed him way and covered her self more with the spread!

***


Somewhere in Zimbabwe... A heavy rain was under way. It's something usual! But it seems like there will be a unexpected storm coming. "sir we have to leave now! A hurricane is on it's way!"

"sure! Sure!" the man replied. "don't you think this storm have shown it's face bit to soon!"



"please sir! Please let's go!" the 2nd man in appearance seems to be his loyal guard. "mr archer, please let's go!"

Mr archer "calm down John! We will be fine!" mr archer a famous business tycoons one and only son. A young man. A young 20 years old man. He have no idea what life means to him, but all he knows, he loves danger. John, his faithful servant or you can say a body guard, he looks after every detail of his. Makes sure no hassle or trouble ever touches him.
John "please sir!" 4 car was waiting, with protection. The road was empty, not even a fly could be seen, and here mr archer, waiting for a storm. John repeats again, and this time mr archer does listen and walks in, the hurricane just missed them in matter of 2 minutes.

John "that wasn't cleaver sir! We could have been dead!"
Mr archer "we are not! We are perfectly fine John!"
John "your dad have called! Shall I answer?"
Mr archer "sure! Sure! Let's here what my father have to say!" a small screen pops out from one of the chair, then a video camera. John hurriedly turns it on... "Good Morning junior!"
Mr archer "it's afternoon dad!
"yes yes! Romeo my boy! You need some cheek to color your world!"
Romeo "may I know exactly who have you spend the day with!"
Mr arcer smiles, a cheeky smile! "this is not the way to talk about your new mother!"
Rome "I rather not here it dad! She is probably younger then me!"
Mr archer "a perfect guess!" romeo rolled his eyes, finding very disgusting but what els he could do!
Romeo "dad! Let's talk business!"
Mr archer "yes, yes my boy, you have to go to India!"
Romeo "I have no interest to see mother!"
Mr archer "it's not about that! It's business!"
Romeo "let's here it dad,"
Mr archer "our friend mr khurana, you have meeting with him!"
Romeo "I see why would you not go!"
Mr archer "you know why I won't! It's best for you to..." he looked way from the camera, then with a cheery voice "I hard Indian girl is very hot!" he winks and romeo closes the camera!
John on the side sat quietly, his lips itching to say something... "I wonder the same sir... Why haven't you ever dated any girl!" Romeo gives out one angry glare... He hates the word date... "they are wast of time!" the words were bitter... "they knows how to hurt you! Tear you! They don't know how to kill you on the spot! Nothing els!" there was bitter in his word. Pure hatred towards female! John dare not ever speak in front of him about girls but when his dad brings out the conversation he tries to poke little in...

Car arrives at the airport. He walks in to the airport with attitude. Frustrated even with the thought of girls...

***

Back in deli...

Geet stood there, tapping her foot. "you ripped my cloths!" they had a small fight... Which by accident both roped geets cloth!
Maan "see! See! Exactly! You stop blaming me! It was clearly your fault!"
Geet "maan! Hamse jagra math karna!" maan comes close...
Maan "toh me ka Karu?"
Geet "what els shall I were? This? With with... What would mama think!" she makes a cry face...
Maan "it's clearly your fault!"
Geet "Maaannn..." he spines round and walks to the cupboard... Geet flowing, one by one he takes all the cloths out, suddenly he comes across a girls cloth! "bingo!" it was a simple dress... Geet gets exited quickly snapping the cloths... Then stops... Her smile disappears... "whose cloths is this? & what a girl cloths doing in your cupboard?" she cross his arm with a furious look... "kiska cloth hi ay?"
Maan "how I suppose to know? I have a cloth! Think lucky!"
Geet "lucky? Whose room is this?"
Maan "my!"
Geet "then you should know why a girls cloths in your room!" maan was about to explain but he stops... Clearly seeing geets jealousy... Uff was this his lucky day???? He looks up... Thanking geets babaji...
Maan "so! What's wrong with a girl cloths?" geet fumed further... Oh he have no idea about geets little violent side... Uff what will he do now...
Geet "I am waiting for the answer..." she charges on him. Maan steps back.. Worried now...
Maan "well you see.. Few months back, just before you step in my life..." geet did not like the sound at all.



. & what els can she expect from this mens... No no.. She won't even say anything.. Geet closed her eyes in frustration and was about to leave when maan hugs her from the back...
Maan "saci hamko nahi pata... Dev & vicky also comes here! This farm house only have limited bedroom..." geet relax down a bit as maan starts kissing her cheek...
Geet "saci"
Maan "muchi"



next- ?
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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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haha seems lyk i'm always the first to comment on your updates😆
awesome update::
loved it x
hu is this Mr archer..and why does this romeo hate girls?hmmm
oof luvd maaneets part...at the end wen maan started to speak i got a bit worried thinking he might have slept wiv a girl but den was relieved wen he said it was vicky or devs
cont soon Xx...
Edited by MaaneetLuverr - 14 years ago
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Awesome update..
i truly loved the romace
waiting for them to have thier SR.. 😳😳😳 b4 marriage
update soon
~Jessica😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
woh new entry dnt tell me he'll fall for Geet..
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AWWW...LOVELY UPDATE...BUT WHO IS DIS
Mr archeR...ND JOHN...I WONDER WHAT R U UP2!!!...
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Omg omg omg
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loved the romance
wonder why john hate girls
beautiful part
love it
waiting eagerly
Edited by simi91 - 14 years ago

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