FF-Hot Chocolate,Rain,and You-Chp7: pg42 on 13 Apr - Page 23

Originally posted by: sweet_girl234

Ah! Loved the update!
How khushi took arnav with her
and how she talked to him about her feelings!
Update soon!!
And add me to the pm list

Originally posted by: paintthetown

my wonder child!!!

chamatkar! marvelous updatee!!!
btw kaisi ho?

Originally posted by: paintthetown

i'm good and hearty! except that i myt die in a few days.
school is literally murdering me🤢🤢

Originally posted by: daya0628

Suvi Mein Aagai :D 🤗So soon! Kaise karti ho?

Prologue
haila suvi what a start...father's funeral :'( Well as long as the ending is a happy one😛 Aww suvi I liked how you have Khushi thinking about her dads likes dislikes...the way u have connected it to the coffin and then how the church had explained that it was a corpse and nothing more...his soul was in paradise ...and she has not yet shed a tear eh ...not good ..shocked hai bechari...😆 and not acknowledging any relatives...hmm she has been affected greatly...so her sis is payal ...yep..she's a nice character so she is leaving with her...so the sisters seem on good terms...well they are sisters! but the change is big for khushi...so she is starting new in a new place ...so Arnav's intro :) and his sis is getting married...i like her name lol anjali ...she's very sweet and cute hmm...aww he was sad too that she would leave him ...but still there was that happiness...but he knew he will miss her ...he felt the distance being created with her through the formation of a new bond. Arnavs eyes on the crack in the tile in front of the big toe...wow suvi very symbolic...um...how is it symbolic? I just put it there randomly..um..and very well written am so in love with it already...great work ...now me heading to read chapter 1 :) thank you

Chapter 1
I really like the bit before u begin the chapter...beautiful ..meaningful words ...meaningful?🤣payal is pregnant...LOL I almost forgot, u know...seriously..the updates have so much ArHi that I forgot bout Payal😆 so its been two years and Khushi is back to normal :) haaye haaye lol Arnav in Oslo yeahhh! I love norway...u noe i have no idea how these characters look ...lol i shud look them up :P ...MMhmm so Arnav and Anjali have come back to their 'older home' ...nice...and plan is to stay only a month eh...so why did they leave the house in the first place? next chapter pata chalega..or maybe the one after..or the one after :P so he says until house clean they will stay in hotel for one day...that is so sweet...wat a nice bro he is lol...uski andar ki intentions ko dekhooo..he doesnt want to stay in that house!!😆and on the other hand we have such a loving husband who has arranged to do work from home until payal delivers..I know, right..Akash is such a sweetheart.so this aunt indira detests khushi ...but she goes to give the lovebirds some privacy...ok ...Yep, like in the show... so arnav ditched his sis to attend a meeting lol...i have a feeling the leads will meet ...oh look at that and they did...Dhayani ka sixth sense😃👏😆and of course starts with a fight ..Well yeah obviously😆OMG lol suvi he called her a couch patato heehee...aww fury and anger and she got scared lol...so he ends up postphoning the meeting...and refers to her as an idiot :O lol ...ok let me get straight to next part :)Yeah well woh itna bada hai, why wouldnt she get scared?😆 And the insults...well its nothing compared to the show😆 *jump jump*

Chapter 2
what is the reason for this aunt indira's dislike for Khushi? wow she is so rude...if someone visits u r to at least act like u r welcoming...and here she is asking why has she graced her with her presence ...LOL I never really thought to explain that you know...It's just like it is in the show...She hates her and insults her at first, and then starts loving her😕😆 But in mine she doesn't have much of a role...so she lets her stay only for payal...hmm...oye whats the story with Arnav...city where he lost everything...so scared to even let his sis walk out the door alone ...protective instincts...wow..Hmm..sher! Story you'll find out..thoda toh suspense rakhne do..revenge for NTL😆.I like his taste LOL his nice is cheap ruddy place where people rarely visit haha...ok ...but as long as the food is good who cares right :P Yep😆 but its not his taste, its his sisters...and he knows that..😆oh they meet again ...well not really i guess their eyes only :Paye haye Arnav's eyes that scared poor khushi lol...aww he made her feel giddy this time instead ...aww he had a smile on his face...hot chocooo yum yum yum,...I knooow😆and made by manju is good i hear haahaa she's the cafeteria lady..she never came back again she was so nice...she told Khushi that Arnav is her husband.. ...and she is leaving ...khushi is crying...haha again CRASH BANG THUD lol...they meet yet again...omg suvi i love her ...he spilled her hot choco...honestly i would cry for the hot choco over blazer too heehee.exactly..u cant do anything with a blazer, but atleast u can drink the hot choco😆 ...and he is like what the hell the blazer is worth more :P haha so now her turn to call him names...bull head little creep ...i like :P ...ok heehee next one wohoo...I struggled so much with the names😆
Chapter 3
hmm so am like so clueless about his past...you're not the only one😆but seems like it has left a bad scar...so with Anjali's reaction to Arnav's behavior it seems he breaks things often in anger/frustration..she just watched as if it were only natural yeah...in the first meeting, he broke Khushi's clothes...:P...aww khushi is thinking about Arnav and how much she hates him but none the less she is thinking about him.You know Khushi is sort of like me😆..LOL Khushi is crying over hot chocolate that is too cute haha...omg haunted house and of course it is none other than Arnav's & Anjali's house and she has met his sis now...this should be interesting..I hope it is =/.and they are hitting it off well i see...yep..when two sweet people meet, their relationship is bound to be sweet😆this aunt is not to bad...kaunsi aunt?😕😆...ohhh not too bad?but i am still curious about her and relationship btwn them...so khushi does not break promises..i like that ...she seems like a very sweey bubbly innocent girl...Now I'm lost..cant remember this bit..hoold on ohh haan haha yay they have come face to face yet again in at his house though...omg this arnav is too much ...she is sick not leg-less hmmm and no chocolates i would like tell him to get lost i want my chocolates :P ...I know..I would do the same..aww khushi trips he catches by waist and carries her down ...as she has hurt her knee and attends her wound :) already so much concern for her...aww kuch kuch hota hai ...me running to next one :P Yeah..bahut kuch hota hai *runs with Dhayani*

Chapter 4
Oh so khushi attempted to pay for blazer but he did not accept ...on an even note i guess...and Anjali is becoming someone close to khushi...she is so curious about him...why he is the way he is ...what happened...i am in same boat...have no clue his problem :P LOL he is like invading her mind lol...OH that is so funny i write this comment and seems as though she is also invading his thoughts hahaha...he is attracted to her ...he thinks she has a motive...omg and the possbilities he is going through are funny...now he is not sure what to think but keeps landing up with 'she does not seem bad'. I took ages with that part..😆OMG lmao suvi ...when khushi asks Anjali about why Arnav is the way he is I LOL@ and i quote..."Anjali hesitated. She felt like she was answering to a child asking her what their mummy and daddy do in their bedroom at night." ROFL ...only u my dear...ab well..ur right..its me na...and anyways, the situation is like that! 😆haha...well anjali is not revealing much but i like that she was talking as if responding but also like convincing herself of why her brother is the way he is...ok so she approaches Arnav...they fight like kids its soo adorable i am loving and enjoying it so much ...m really happy that u rhmm so where does she want to take him?...me running to read the next one to find out :P I thought it wouldn't be hard to guess..but oh well..

Chapter 5
how naturally they fit together lol...and their outting seems so casual even though they bicker a lot with each other...aww she is back .and i kinda thought this was coming :) ...aww family reunion lol and Arnav is like being ignored and when he makes his presence felt all eyes curious as to who he is to khushi...well, they would be na😆so she wants to go to her house now...love her family they are cute...I love them too..I wish I had a family like that..but all my family is in Indiashe slipped out of house and of course Arnav followed ... Nahh, he's going to stay with the uncles and drink beer😆 but she sent him away...aww she is sitting curled up thinking of her past...and she was feeling guilt for disregarding her aunt come mother...oh poor girl ...hmmm mother died giving birth and father died two years ago...wow so Arnav sat through it and listened and was so like understanding and nice about it...he can relate😉😆very nice...and now i have no more to run and read :( ...so jaldi update kar na...and i will wait for it ...
October😆
A very lovely FF suvi ...great job...honest to god it is very nicely written...and am enjoying it ...Thanks Dhayani🤗

anyway now am off to bed ...good night...or shall i say morning haha and take care..love you lots
You're awake now😃...love u too...
phir milenge chalte chalte

Originally posted by: livelygal

Suvi...

I haven't read it completely...I just saw the length and decided to praise you!

Wow! Kiddo...didn't your eyes burn writing this long??? I get so restless after typing three sentences...Dats ma Laziness record...

Neways will read the part and get back to you!😆