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Due to some personal problem i'm leaving IF for 7 or 8 months.
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I will continue this ff after that.
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FF:Madly in love with you

Part 4

On the dinner,Sujal noticed that maan was smiling while thinking about something.Sujal looked at kashish and pointed at maan.Kashish looked at maan and she also noticed the same thing.

Kashish:Maan tum khana kyu nahi kha rahe?

Sujal:Kya soch soch kar muskara rahe ho?

Maan(Blushed):Nothing!

Sujal:Tumhare 'nothing' ka matlab hai ka'there is something'.

Maan thought that he should tell his parents about meeting geet.He told sujal and kashish about how he met geet except that colliding part.Sujal and kashish were very happy.

Sujal(Happily):Chalo ab moka milte hi main aur kashish ja kar geet ka haath mang lein ge.

Kashish(Smiled):Haan iss bahane hum geet ko bhi dhekh lein ge.

Maan:Abhi aap log thore din wait karein main pehle adi se baat karloon phir aap log proposal le jana.

After the dinner,Maan happily went to his room.Maan lie down on the bed.

Maan(Thinking):Pata nahi kyu mujhe aisa lagta hai ka humare bech main koi aise cheez hai jo humain alag kar rahe hai.Tumhare ghar wale maan jayein ge na?Adi tu janta hai main tumse kitna pyaar karta hoon.Mujhe yakeen hai woh sab ko maana le ga.

Maan smiled and went to sleep.

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The next day,maan was too busy in his office work.Sujal called him and told him that their family friend Mr.Aryaan had invited them on a party at 8:00 pm because of getting big project.Maan told sujal that he would go there.At 8:00 pm.,Maan went to the party.He was surprised to see adi there.

Maan(While hugging adi):Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Adi:Mr.Aryaan mere father ka friend hai iss liye inhone humare pori family ko invite kiya hai.

Maan(Questioningly):Pori family?

Adi:Haan bhi maa,pinky,geet,meera aur yash sab aaye hain.

Maan got happily because geet was also there.He started to look in crowd and then his eyes stick to the most beautiful girl in the party.He corrected himself not in the party but in the whole world.No one could look that much angelic in black colour except her.Adi was talking to him while he was absentmindly giving him the answers.Meanwhile,Geet was enjoying the party with meera and yash when pinky came to her.

Pinky:Geet! dev ke call hai.Woh tumse baat karna chahta hai.

Geet took phone from pinky and because of loud music she could not hear dev's voice so she went out of the hall.

Geet:Hello dev!

Dev(Tauntingly):Hello! I'm sorry geet maine tumhi disturb kiya.Tum tu yash ke company bohat enjoy kar rahe thi na?

Geet:Nahi woh loud music tha na iss liye mujhe awaz nahi aa rahe thi.

Dev(Shouting):Oh please don't lie.Tumhi maine pehle bhi kaha tha ka yash se dor raho magar tumhi mere baat samijh main nahi aate.

Geet(Tears started to flow from her eyes):Woh main..

Dev(Angrily):Shut up tumhi rone ka ilawa kuch nahi aata.Mere baat maante nahi ho phir baad main kuch kaho tu miss rone lagte hain bachon ke tara.

He cut the call.Geet started to cry.No one had ever got angry on her because they knew how much sensitive she was.Geet heard footsteps from her back.She turned around.Her foot slipped and she fell into the swimming pool.

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Maan was looking at the direction of geet.When pinky gave her mobile.Geet went outside.Maan was waiting for geet to come back.Suddenly he started to feel that geet was not right.He went outside of the hall.He saw her crying.He felt hurt.He was about to go to her when she turned around and fell in the swimming pool.It looked like she didnot know how to swim so maan jumped in the water and picked her up in his arms while she was clinging to him.He took her out.She was still holding him.He knew that she was crying.He hugged her and moved his hand on her head to console her.She stopped crying and looked at him.He smiled.

Geet:Aap bhaiyya ka friend ho na? (Maan nodded) Aap bhaiyya ko na batana ka main ro rahe thi.

Maan:Kyu?

Geet:Woh pareshan ho jayein ge.Promise na ka aap nahi batao ge.

She rised her hand.He held her hand.

Maan(Smiled):Promise! Waise tum ro kyu rahe thi?

Geet:Woh na main aap ko baad main batao ge abhi mujhe thand lag rahe hai.

Maan(Gave her his coat):Ye pehan lo.

Geet(Smiled):Thank you!

Precap:Sujal meeting geet and sujal and kashish went for geet's proposal.

Edited by pickachu - 14 years ago
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NOTE:
Sorry for the late update😭😭!
Inshaa Allah i will update next part soon b/c i have already written three parts of this FF.
I will update gradually!
I hope u guys like the part.
If u have any question related to this FF.
Please pm me!
Pleaseee leave ur comments even if u don't like the part.


Love,
Fatima

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