MG HISTORICAL FF:MYTH-AWALK INTO THE PAST~epilogue - Page 79

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Posted: 13 years ago
😉

Originally posted by: madhubala123




HUGS ONLY FOR HER NO FOR ME?????? ME VERY SAD...


I just found that pic randomly while searching a Thank u pic for Arushi 😳



ok I did see your face and forgive u😉😉... thanksss for the lotsa lov and big hugz...😃🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗😉
Edited by harshdb - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
mindblowing update
waiting 4 geet to realise her past
😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing updates...rain to honi hi thi...but i am surprised they just let go off NT and Abhay...i am wondering what can be their future though...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update. I will miss This FF. Can't wait rocsee what happens next!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi all... 😃 😃

I am really overwhelmed by the awesome response for the previous part.Thats why i'm makin this update today instead of Monday!!!!

Thank You for all the support, LIKEs and COMMENTs 🤗 🤗

Myth will be done by One more part and an epilogue 😃

Thinking of some unusual topic on Maaneet. As always researching my movie lists 😳

Will be up with something sooon... 😊

PART 29

He cupped her face and kissed her forehead.She couldnt stop herself with the passion in his eyes.She hugged him tightly like never letting him go.
He gaspd and uttered,'mishty..'
He held her even closer and kissed on her nape...He slowly moved his hand to her nose ring and played with them.She chuckled finding his interest in her nose ring.He lukd into her her eyes as if seeking her permission.He took off the nose ring and rightfully placed his lips that belonged to hers.She pulled him closer and together they fell on the bed with him on top of her.



He dipped his head on her shoulder kissing along her collar bone.Geet dug her fingers into his hair.Her breathing was raising erotically.She was feeling more than just arousal..like this was the moment she had been waiting all her life,like the purpose of her birth being fulfilled...She pulled him closer to her.Maan nibbled her earlobe and moaned,'Devi..'
She felt her heart would burst any moment in his passion...but reality struck when he called her 'devi'



She tried to push him back.He opened his eyes and lukd at her.
Maan: Kya hua Geet?
He cupped her face.
Geet: Maan..yehi me apse puchna chahti hu.Ye sab..kya he?
He got off her and lukd away.Geet sat on the bed waiting for an answer.
Maan:ye humari zindagi ka sach he.
Geet: wat? That we were married 800years ago? Cmon MK this is 21st century.U can fool them not me.And why are u lying to me at the first place.
Maan stared at her.It took sometime for him to realize that she is still Geet Handa and not Geetanjali,his wife.
Finding him silent,
Geet: Maan,i know u want to save me and dad but i hav made it clear to u we cant play with the feelings of these people.Its our fault that we intruded into their life and now lets face it.
Maan: Geet..I'm not lying.Ye humare zindagi ka sabse bada sach he.
Geet: Enough Maan! Its so.. pathetic.Atleast mere samne to sach ko accept kariye.I never knew u could stoop this low.Now wats the difference between u and Abhay?
Maan: Geeet!
Geet:nhe Maan! I cant accept this.Me abhi jake sabko sach batane ja rhe hu.
She quickly straightened herself and ran outside.
Jodha who was passing by that direction was shocked to see a worrying Geet followed by Maan.
Maan: Geet meri baat to suno...ye sach he!
Geet went to Jodha and held her arms.
Geet: dekhiye hum koi raja aur rani nhe he.Hum apne matlab se yeha aye the.Mere papa ko dhundne.Humara apko nuksaan pohunchane ka koi irada nhe he.Ap plz hume..i mean kripya hume jaane dijiye..
Jodha lukd at Maan whose eyes had pain.She felt sorry for Maan.
Geet:ap kuch bolti kyu nhe?



Jodha: Ap shaant ho jaiye maharani.Hum apki haalat samaj sakte he.Mere khayal se apko Maan veerji se baat karni chahiye.

Maan was silent.He couldnt say anything.There was a time when she longed for his acceptance.And now after so many years when he was trying to fulfill her wishes she is not even realising it.Why is fate so cruel to them??
Geet: Maan se mujhe koi baat nhe karne.Wo hume bachane ke liye pata nhe kya kya keh rhe he.Me Maan ko mere liye jhuta hote nhe dekh sakti.

Jodha smiled seeing that eternal love above all beliefs and truth.
Geet: ap samajti kyu nhe ye sab jhut he.Na me koi rani thi aur na ye mere pati.Maan jhut bol rhe he!
'nhe Geet' came the voice of Pratap.
Pratap: bacha Maan is right.Tum dono ko kismat yeha wapas laya he.
Geet:dad ye ap kya keh rhe he?
Pratap: sach.Mene khud tum dono ki tasveer Udaipur palace me dekhi he.Kya ye sab ek saath jhut ho sakta he Geet? Nhe na? Tumhe is sach ko accept karna hi hoga.Ye saare log tumhara intezaar kar rhe the,kar rhe he.Unhe is zindagi se tabhi mukti milegi jab tum dono milkar inhe apnaugey aur inhe ashirwaad doge.Yehi tumhare zindagi ka maqsat he.Geet,its all destiny.U belong to Maan my dear.That is the sole truth of your life.You are his queen!

Geet was all confused.Her mind and brain was goin blank.
She went to Maan who readily took her in his arms.She placed her head on his chest as he hugged her tightly.
Geet: Maan! Mujhe kuch samaj me nhe a rha.If all this is true,why cant i feel anything? Why is all this so alien to me? I'm scared Maan! I am an ordinary girl.How can i save a clan? How can i be their goddess? Why cant i feel the same way like u? Mujhe kuch mehsus kyu nhe hota?
And with that she fainted in his arms.Maan lifted her and took her to the bedroom.



The royal physician came and checked her.

Maan was pacing up and down luking at her now and then.Pratap patted his shoulder lovingly.
Pratap: dnt worry. She is stressed.
Maan:hmm..shayad me hi jaldbaazi kar rha hu usey yaad dilane ki.
'nhe Maanavendra! ' that was rajguru after his long meditation.
RG: Ashtagraho ke jaane me ab kuch hi samay he.Agar ussey pehle maharani ko kuch yaad nhe aya to phir is janm me kabhi yaad nhe ayega.Aur Rathore ki rani humare beech me rehkar gayi he ye shubh nhe.
Maan:hmm..kintu guruji itna sab kuch hone ke baad bhi Geet ko kuch yaad kyu nhe he?
RG: Isey niyati ka dharm samjho maharaj.Humare har janm me purv janm ke karmo ka phal sidh hota he.Maharaniji ne sache dil aur nishta se prarthna ki thi ki ap unhe aur unkey rishtey ko apnaye.Isi liye unkey bina kuch kahe apko unki aur unsey judi har baat yaad he.Lekin apney unkey jeete ji unkey rishtey ko nhe apnaya.Na chahte hue bhi unkey dil ko thoda he apney.Isiliye is janm me apko bhi wahi peeda mil rahi he.
Maan: to kya me apni Geet ke pyar, uskey khwab ko kabhi pura nhe kar paunga?
RG: Vishwas rakhiye Maanavendra sacha pyaar kabhi nhe haarta!

Maan was in deep thots.After so many years,will destiny allow them to meet?Whats in store for them?But could he just leave everything to fate and destiny? Enough! He had already done that mistake once.This time he wont let his love go.This time he wont let any law,any destiny to take away his love from him.He will win his wife! And together will they bless their people for a new life! This is a determined Maanavendra ready to conquer the whole world,the destiny itself for his love,his mishty!!

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OUTSIDE, Far away from the desert

NT : Arjun Veerji is bahar hum un Rajputo ko unki aukhad dikha denge. Humare devta ki murthy to hum haazil karke rahenge.

Arjun : Bilkul Nayan Tara. Humare sath to puri fauj he with all latest technologies.

Abhay : Pehle to us Maan ko khatam karna he. Geet ko tum log mujh par chod do. Phir wo Rajput kuch nhe kar payenge...

😈 😈 😈

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PRECAP : CONFRONTATION AGAIN...WILL THE MYTH REVEAL AFTER 800 YEARS????????

Who will win?????? This cruel world or true love????????

THE FINALE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ⭐️

ON MONDAY...Till then keep on commenting...That motivates me a lot and we will have fitting climax for this Mythical love story 😳 😃


PS : Sorry again for the short update. 😳


NEXT :PART 30 : page 131








Edited by madhubala123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hei awsmmm update👏... loved it😛... Geet ko abhi bhi kuch yaad nahi aa raha hai... ye to honahi tha... Maan wasn't fair in his behavior with Geet in his past life😔... but dat bitch is again doing some chip conspiracy huh😡... n datt abhay😡😡 ... sharam nam ki chiz hai ya nahi usmey😡... uh story has reached to its climax🥳... hmmm wait nahi ho raha hai... cont soon😍
Edited by sayaneegupta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey madhu
baby ur update was awesome cant imagine
yaar it was so divine of love over all
continue soon will be waiting for Monday
thanx for pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanx for pm Madhu...

very beautiful...lovely update...but very short...aisa laga abhi-abhi read karna shuru kiya tha...aur abhi end ho gaya...
anyway next part long update hona chahiye..plz..plz...plz.

Geet doesn't remember anything and there NT is planning to destroy them...I pray Geet should remember everything fast so that they can reunite and bless their clan.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome, brilliant part
loved it
brilliant way described maaneet confrontation.
geet's confusion, maan helplessness
all described well
Nt and abhay r same , shameless person and now arjun joined them.
precap is interesting
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome!
poor geet!...she can't remember anything!
I hope that maan will solve everything soon!
continue sooN!

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