'love N deception'- abhay-piya FF updated pg-143 - Page 26

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: missglam

Awesome update! thanx alot dear😊
The office scene was fab. glad u liked it😊
I hope,abhay clears al the misunderstandings.. wait n watch dear😊
Angel is cho chweet..I just luv her..Wel, abhay jealous.. Huh ! I simply luv it when abhay goes al protective over pia & make her do wat he wants..Poor piya..It isnt her fault.. If abhay is so irresistable.. hehehehehe...reli he is so irresistable...😆😆😉
Thanks for the pm. sweets..It means a lot. ma pleasure dear
waiting for next chap wl try to update soon. When abhiya r going to b al alone yeee😊😆😉.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ifrah.

aww..cute update :)

thanx alot dear😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pari_smart

The update was gr8..thanx alot dear. Full of Abhiya... Loved the way both were jealous..glad u liked it😊. Really excited for the next update Piya at Abhay's house.i think nxt chapter wl b more xcited bf4 their house scene😆😉.. maybe some misunderstandings will be clear.not so soon dear😊.😆. 😉Can you give more of Angel Abhay and Piya talks sorry nxt part wl b more of abhay-pia...bt surely wl try to add few of her scnes also? please please as they three are really adorable awww promise there wl b few scene of three of them... Looking forward for the next update..wl try to update soon😊. Continue soon

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shivanirajput

hey what a cool update full of abhay pia moments

just loved it glad dear u loved it n thanx for ur comments...😊
the way abhay consoled her was very touching
when angel said i love u to pia through abhay it was really divine i felt actually like tears coming from my eyes😭 awww dear...
u are really doing a fab job i just don't have words to praise u👏👏 thankuuu so much for saying dat😊
this ff is really very touching awww
but hey u are so mean how can u end ur update at such an interesting point😆
don't worry dear i m sure after reading nxt part...u wl take back ur complain😆😉
very excited about the next update
abhay and pia finally together alone in a house sounds gr8😉 hehehehe wait n watch...amy b u wl find out something more interesting😉
i am just expecting some fireworks in next update 😳 definately fireworks wl b there😆😉
i just hope that soon abhay will tell the full truth to pia and she will except him whole heartedly😃 wait n watch dear
thanks for the pm ma pleasure
do continue with ur good work and plzzz plzzz plzzz update asap wl try to update soon n thanx for ur apprecaition😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: minibsp2007

👏👏👏...

Wow nice update. You have define both abhay and pia's feelings very nicely. thankuuu so much dearie...😊😊
Now can't wait for the next update...wl try to update soon...keep reading😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zoozoo123

Heena ji ...wah ustad wah...😛😛😛 thankuuu ji 😊...Kya update hai...Jamie..Piya convo was cute...Piya kitna phenkti hai yaar...Khud ko to cntrl nhi kar pati...😆😆😆.seriously abhay ko dekh ke pia ka dimag aur dil dono tiger ki spead pe dorte hain..😆.😆.I think title shld b changed..Kahani Jalkukde aur Jalkukdi ki...😆😆. wowww nice 😆.Kitna jalte hai..Piya ne to receptionist ko bhi nhi choda...n Abhay ...is totally J ..of K...meri wify ke peeche pada hai...Ab tera kya hoga kabir???😆😆😆..wahi hoga jo manjure abhay hoga...😆😆

Abhiya convo was vryyy touching...Dil ko choo lete hai yaar...N Abhay ..the way he was talking 2 piya...was😍😍😍...glad yaar u liked it...😊
Abhay I think is a weight lifter..Har baar piya ko uthata rehta hai...or is he checking her weight???😆😆😆...nahi wo bas moke par choka marta hai waise to hath lagne nahi degi😆😉
Uff..cnt wait 4 next update...Abhiya in 1 room😆😆😆..Hum tum ek kamre me band ho...aur...nt saying further..sharam aa rhi hai..don't worry kamre tak pohanxhe se pheli hi sharma aane wali hai nxt part me 😆😉.Lovely update Heena..Intezaar nhi hota ..plsss update 2 day..hehehehe...thoda sabar phal bahut metha hoga...believe me.😛😛😛...cnt wait 3 their dhishoom-dhishoom n coochie coo...This is 4 u...👏👏👏 ⭐️⭐️⭐️ thanxkuu so much vidya dear😊 luv
heena

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: CleviveDsouza

awesome post thankuuu so much dear
bravo brava
great update glad u liked it😊
continue soon sure wl try
plz pm me ofcourse😊


luv
heena😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Selinapiya

Heena ..ur an awesome writer..thankuuu so much dear

I like Abhiya nok jhok a lot..glad u liked it
Loved it thanx..Thanks for the Pm ma pleasure..Update soon...sure wl try😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

part-7





abhay(bf4 abhay could av said ny thing else)- his cell started ringing flashing kabir's name
abhay's ( his xpressions changed again frm so called arrogance to anger)- bt controlling himself...he received his call
kabir- hey dude...pls cn u do me a favour
abhay( sounding as calm as he could) ya sure kabir
kabir- hey cn u pls arrange a safe place for pia, for a night...so dat she cn stay there
abhay(he anger started melting)- ya sure kabir...i wl take care of everything...u cn trust me
kabir- oh dude i completely trust u...dats y i called u up...pls tk care of her...
abhay- sure...don't worry...
kabir-thanx...n he cut d call
abhay was feeling guilty at his own thoughts dat wat made him to think like this for him, he was d one who was wid his pia everytime n everywhere , when he himself should av been there at kabir's place ...i should b thankfull to him...n wat am i doing...
pia(who was still sulking)- if u r done wid ur own thoughts...cn u pls tel wat he was saying...
abhay(coming out of his thoughtS)- he wanted me to take care of u...so nw u don't av anyother choice...
pia- ahhh...Krrr.....
b/w this whole bashing thing abhay-pia reached ice-cream parlour
bt ofcourse pia is pia...
abhay- lets go pia...av ur ice- cream first, then wl go home
pia(rudely)- i m nt going nywhere...
abhay(y u r so stubborn)- wat u reli want me to pick u again or something like dat...
pia(totally giving him"gonna kill u " looks"- ok lets go...
abhay- dat better swtheart
pia- don't u dare call me dat....i m nt ur swtheart......
abhay-ok swtheart
pia-ahhh...
.......
pia was sitting outside...there was proper sitting arrangment outside d parlour "kind of open one"
abhay brought ben n jerry's chocolate ice-cream as per his daughter's demand...
pia was still in dat same foul mood...abhay came sit infront of her...n placed d mug of ice-cream on d table near her...
bt she was like totally nt interested
abhay opened dat mug n took out spoonfull ice-cream n brought near her mouth
n there she just gt melted wid d whole chocolaty smell...she opened her mouth like a child n took dat whole in one ...
abhay (smiled at her behaviour)- bt kept on feeding her n pia was enjoying it like a child...n she didn't even notice dat she got ice-cream pasted all around her lips...a beautiful smile was there on his face who was actually amused looking at his daughter's mother like this...in such a condition where dat she cn't even control herself in public...although he was also nt bothered abt d public at all...he took a tissue n cleaned dat ice-cream frm her lips
they both were so lost...pia in ice-cream n abhay in her...dat they didn't realise dat only very ppl were left there coz it was almost abt 2 rain...n after few minutes it was raining there , abhay came out of his trance...thanx to rain
abhay- pia lets go...
pia- no abhay...wait for some time...let me feel this rain...
abhay- no way pia...u wl catch cold or may b fever...i reli don't want dat
pia(while pouting)- stop behaving like sado boyfriend...n u cn ask frm ur daughter...i m sure she would also b on my side this time
abhay( was abt to say something bt stopped there in b/w) when he saw dat pia went n stood infront of his parked car ...her both arms were opened like she was welcoming it...her eyes were closed...she was facing d dark, cloudy sky...n n rain drops on her face looking like pearls on her beautiful flawless skin...
abhay was admiring d perfcet beauty of his angel(pia) in dat rain which was adding beauty to her pure soul...
abhay thought...she is a divine beauty...an angel in a disguise of human...n this angel is mine...he took his steps towards pia...
on d other hand pia was still lost while feeling those pure waterdroplets on her...she was totally wet frm her head to toe...
abhay was just few inches away frm pia when she opened
her beautiful chocolate brown eyes...which were glitering ....
pia looked into abhay's eyes...n his gaze was enough for her to realise dat wat a thunder of passionate love approaching her...
pia while gasping n bitting her lips said lets go abhay...its quite dark nw...n she actually passed abhay while saying all this ..
bt abhay's mind n heart both were nt ready for this...he held her wrist n turned around...n he was facing pia's back nw...he pulled her towards him genetly n nw there was no gap b/w them...pia who was already shivering due to rain felt dat her harmones gt over charged just by his single touch...
on d other hand abhay;s one hand was entiwned wid hers n frm other he just removed her wet locks frm her neck...there was ofcourse cold outside bt both felt a heat of desires...abhay placed his wet lip on her wet clevical bone n as his lips touched her skin...pia entwined her fingers wid him as tightly as she could...while shivering pia said abhay...
abhay slowly turned her, now they were facing each other...
abhay cuped her face in his hands n placed a kiss on her forehead , then he slowly moved towards her eyes n kssing her both eyes...pia was all lost in his gentle touch...n abhay brought his wet lips towards her ...he just wanted to taste those pink n luscious lips where were wet n shivering at dat moment...pia's eyes were closed...n their lips met n current ran down to her spine...first she didn't respond coz of her senses nt working bt as soon as abhay's grip got stronger...she couldn't control her self...n he was teasing n sucking her lips, wanted to explore her mouth..n she wanted to feel dose cold lips on hers...soon abhay realised dat he needed to control his desires otherwise may b he wll end up hurting her...she is still nt strong to hold d power his desires n passion...when he stopped himself in a perfect way...pia opened her eyes...n looked at him for once n widin a sec she moved her gaze to d ground...she was too shy to look into his eyes directly n for supporting her she went into his arms.abhay encircled his strong arms around her back..abhay was smiling n feeling weak frm inside to stop himself...
they were still standing there ...when abhay sensed something...his muscle got stiffened...(pia realised it bt she was so lost to react at his any action)..anger n fear started returning in his eyes....
anger coz he felt a vampire presence near dat place n fear coz of her...
she was wid her...he was a vampire a very strong one...bt at ny cost he didn't want
to come in his actuall form infront of her at this time (he was sure she wl nt b able to bear all this thing)...
abhay(keeping his voice normal)- lets go pia...u r shivering badly...he took pia to d car...she was still holding him n he made her sat in d car n fasten her seat belt...pia was shivering badly ...)while coming to other side abhay looked here n there...bt he couldn't find someone...he took his driver seat n looked once again at pia who was quite...n feeling cold...he swtiched on d heater...
he wanted badly to knw who was there...bt d moment was nt right...at dat time pia's safety was more improtant frm both aspects human n supernatural...
abhay started driving living his thoughts behind at dat moment ...he looked at pia...who was still quite ...lost somewhere...
there was completely silence in d car xcept pia's chattering teeth...
abhay noticed dat pia was feeling quite uncomfortable due her wet clothes...
he stopped his car by side...n pia looked at him in a confused state...he took out a wrapper frm d back pocket of his car seat n passed it to pia...
pia(confused)-
abhay- open it...
pia opened it n found new branded man's jacket in it...
pia- wat??
abhay(while smiling) u r feeling quite comfortable just wear it or put it on urself .,as u feel comfortable
pia looked at him for once (she thought)- how cn u understand widout my saying abhay
abhay- where r u lost pia...i knw i m good looking...bt pls u r distracting me...i m still a man n above dat i m driving
pia smiled a little n wore dat jacket...on d other hand abhay was trying to concentrate on driving while his mind was moving b/w pia n dat vampire
after near abt 20 min they both reached abhay's house...n his house was as classy as his office...
in d same way technically equipped...d same sensor doors..., d same computerised system bt this time pia was nt surprised...although till d time they reached his home pia started sneezing badly...n abhay was worried...
abhay took pia directly to his room...n said pia - u go n get change urself in some dry cloth...
pia looked at him...n said while looking down- abhay i mean i don't av
abhay(widout letting her to complete her sentence)- pia if u want i cn go n bring something for u..coz
pia- no need of dat abhay (wid full concern in her voice)...i wl manage wid something else...ummm (feeling bit awkward).i mean something of urs kind of lower and some shirt...
abhay- ya sure...there is my wardrobe (while pointing in dat direction)- go n take watever u want or find suitable...till then i wl bring some hot drink for u
pia- bring?? r u going somewhere??(again wid concerned in her voice)
abhay(smiling)- no no..i m nt going anywhere...i wl prepare it myself...till u then u go n change
n she sneezed again
abhay- go pia...change first n get fresh
pia(so human)- u should also change
abhay smiled again n said ye sure u cn use dat washroom(while pointing towards) n i wl change here only!!
ahay left his room...
pia went towards his wardrobe...which was stylish just like him...
n finally after quite hard work pia found something for her (a black shirt n a grey lower)
pia(to herself)- gosh cn't he keep some t-shirts , nw i wl av to wear this shirt n she went to d bathroom
after few min abhay entered his room while aving a coffee mug in his hand ...as pia was nt there...he thought of changing his clothes
bt bf4 dat he switched on d heater of d room...
abhay got changed himself ..n he was wearning just lower
pia came out of bathroom... n as soon as he saw abhay she shouted n turned around while keeping her hands on her face
abhay (gt scared at her reaction)
pia- abhay where r ur clothes...
abhay(understood dat y she shouted n back to his smirk)- wat pia...i m aving enough clothes on my body dat a man need generally
pia- shut up abhay n wear something on ur upper body
abhay(still smiling at her innocent behaviour)- y so, cn;t u handle so much hotness
pia(this time bitting her lips)- abhay don't irritate me...n wear ur vest or watever u want...quickly..
abhay took his steps towards her n came infront of her...pia knew dat he was standing there infront of her only n her hands still on her face
pia- abhay pls...
abhay while holding dat smirk..moved pia's hand frm her face ...bt pia's eyes still closed...
abhay- open ur eyes...
pia- no first u go n cover urself...
abhay- pia i m telling u if u wl nt open ur eyes widin sec...i m gonna kiss u
n pia opened her eyes wid a shocked xpression...
n abhay was standing there aving his vest on his upper body
pia as soon she saw abhay...n he was laughing at her...she started hitting him on his chest..
abhay(like ahuman) pia stop it..stop hitting me, u r hurting me
bt pia was not listening anything...so finally abhay, while holding her arms in d air he pinned her to d wall bt not harshly
nw pia was totally silent...
abhay(while looking at her )- pia tel me one thing u wanted me to cover my upper body.. wat abt ur lowers???...where r they...y r u wearning just this shirt(while moving his fingers up n down) , or should i say dis rule of covering urself fully apply to me only...(he winked at her while showing his bestest smile)
pia looked down in horror...n then at abhay...she pushed him hard n ran towards bathroom directly...


Edited by heena_mehta - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

haha heena I came here 2 scold u ki where is ur update but 2 my surprise I saw ur update.This is called true connection haha🤣.Oh I luved it so romantic.I guess tht hidden vampy is metz.Ohh now u have 2 update soon.I m not patient enough 2 resist myself.So update as soon as possible or I'll fry u🤣😉.Abhiya momebts r always breath taking.Now plz kal hi update kar dena better agar aaj hi kardo🤣🤗

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