'love N deception'- abhay-piya FF updated pg-143

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Pari Gupta

@Pari-Gupta

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#231

The update was gr8... Full of Abhiya... Loved the way both were jealous... Really excited for the next update Piya at Abhay's house... maybe some misunderstandings will be clear... Can you give more of Angel Abhay and Piya talks? please please as they three are really adorable... Looking forward for the next update... Continue soon

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shivanirajput

@shivanirajput

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#232

hey what a cool update full of abhay pia moments

just loved it

the way abhay consoled her was very touching

when angel said i love u to pia through abhay it was really divine i felt actually like tears coming from my eyes😭

u are really doing a fab job i just don't have words to praise u👏👏

this ff is really very touching

but hey u are so mean how can u end ur update at such an interesting point😆

very excited about the next update

abhay and pia finally together alone in a house sounds gr8😉

i am just expecting some fireworks in next update 😳

i just hope that soon abhay will tell the full truth to pia and she will except him whole heartedly😃

thanks for the pm

do continue with ur good work and plzzz plzzz plzzz update asap

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shivanirajput

@shivanirajput

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#233

sorry for double posting

Edited by shivanirajput - 14 years ago

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minibsp2007

@minibsp2007

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#234

👏👏👏...

Wow nice update. You have define both abhay and pia's feelings very nicely.

Now can't wait for the next update

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Ki fark Painda hai

@Courageous_Leo

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#235

Heena ji ...wah ustad wah...😛😛😛...Kya update hai...Jamie..Piya convo was cute...Piya kitna phenkti hai yaar...Khud ko to cntrl nhi kar pati...😆😆😆...I think title shld b changed..Kahani Jalkukde aur Jalkukdi ki...😆😆..Kitna jalte hai..Piya ne to receptionist ko bhi nhi choda...n Abhay ...is totally J ..of K...meri wify ke peeche pada hai...Ab tera kya hoga kabir???😆😆😆..

Abhiya convo was vryyy touching...Dil ko choo lete hai yaar...N Abhay ..the way he was talking 2 piya...was😍😍😍...

Abhay I think is a weight lifter..Har baar piya ko uthata rehta hai...or is he checking her weight???😆😆😆...

Uff..cnt wait 4 next update...Abhiya in 1 room😆😆😆..Hum tum ek kamre me band ho...aur...nt saying further..sharam aa rhi hai...Lovely update Heena..Intezaar nhi hota ..plsss update 2 day...😛😛😛...cnt wait 3 their dhishoom-dhishoom n coochie coo...This is 4 u...👏👏👏 ⭐️⭐️⭐️

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CleviveDsouza

@CleviveDsouza

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#236

awesome post
bravo brava
great update
continue soon
plz pm me

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Selina

@Selinapiya

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#237

Heena ..ur an awesome writer..

I like Abhiya nok jhok a lot..

Loved it..Thanks for the Pm ..Update soon...

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heena mehta

@heena_mehta

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: princess_xeelan
Ok sorry for being so late 😆 😆 hehehehehe...noe worries😆
It's not my fault... since you finished the chpt earlier I had to finish mine withing tonight... 😳 😈 hmmm...dats y u did dat reservation😆
As usual I loveeddd it...big time 😃 👏 👏 thanx alot tanzie dear😊
Abhay surely knows how to charm Piya...i can see Piya mellowing a bit 😳 😆 I can only imagine how she can possibly stop herself from falling in love with Abhay all over again... 😍 😍 tanzie just think like this hw cn she even think of stopping himself when abhay is there😆😉
Abhay's effort to mend a broken heart is soo in style and sooo amazing... loved it ☺️ 😍 glad dear u liked it😊
the angel is as always soo cute and i can see how imp part she plays in their amendment 😃 😆 Akhir beti kiski hai 😉 apne irresistable dad ki😆
the last scene is wowww as well... both are sooo stubborn na...love them... and continue soon... working on nxt part...hopefully wl try to by today night or tomorrow morning
btw... no more blackmailing ha...i gotta go out of town for my work 2mrw so uploading the next chpt in 2 days is impossible 😭 but aft that promise ha 😳 it means u cn post tomorrow na...😉😆
and much loveee to u and a biggg huggg 🤗 🤗 luv u🤗