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Posted: 14 years ago

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Haila Heena...I mean Hi Heena...😛😛😛..hi dear...amy i ask ur name😊.Kya dhasu update hai..awww thanx for dashu comments also😊.Hmm...so daddy dearest rechd hsi angel...Loved their convo.glad u liked it😊..Abhay was behaving literally like a human...Btw woh itni jaldi piya aur Baby ke paas kaise pahuch gaya...Im sure he never uses transport...kanjoos hai na...😆😆😆.hehehehehe....N as I said...Piya mommy ka BP Badha...n baby ne react kiya...by giving laats rite...😆😆😆.yes...🤣..Angel is purely dady's girl...😃😃😃..yes she is completely daddy's gal...

When Abhay completed tht line..."she is exactly like her dad"...I was jst thinking abt it...Oh god the picture is sooo clear...😆😆😆...Loved the understnding bw the child n daddy dearest...i m happy dat u would av been able to picturise d whole thing😊
Kabir -Jamey scene was cute 😊...Haseena darling is vry tensed...bt god tht she did nt stopped him...she is quite samjhdhar😆
N last scene ...Haye mujhe sharam aati hai...😆😆😆..Wonderful...then think mujhe likhte waqt kitni sharam aayi hogi 😆N update jaldi karna...sure wl try😉

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Posted: 14 years ago

part-5


they parted frm each other bt still holding each other firmly...pia leaning her forehead on abhay's shoulder..n abhay's hands on her waist...pia's heart beats were so fast n out of order dat abhay could av listened them...pia was exhaling n inhaling as fast as she could...her legs were nt supporting her ...her whole body was shivering ...abhay picked her into his strong arms like she was a delicate flower...while pia trying to read those deep blue eyes, she was trying to figure out wat was going around her, she was in a big mess of her own feelings...her emotions were over powering her...hatred n love both d feelings were playing wid her!!)

abhay made her sit comfortably on a couch..n made himself sit on d floor in front of her by folding his knees- he took her hands in his...n said pia...

bt pia cutting him in b/w ( n nt looking into his eyes )- pls abhay leave...i don't want to listen nything pls leave...pls ( aving maximum control on her emotions)

abhay was totally hurt n widout saying another word...he stood frm his place n looking towards her ( his eyes full of guilt n pain) n he turned to leave ...when he felt a vampire's presence there n he got attentive..bt suddenly he saw dat someone entered frm d main door...n abhay couldn't believe on his eyes dat jamie was standing infront of him...

abhay(surprised)- jamieee

jamie...(shocked)- abhay wat r u doing here while taking her steps towards him...where is pia abhay...( she got panic)

jamie directly moved towards ...where pia was sitting...

jamie while sitting beside her...pia r u ok??

pia-she just nodded her head in yes...

jamie turned her gaze towards abhay ( pleading n widout any voice , in a silent way she said leave abhay...i wl talk to u later)

abhay(in a d same silent way) - he said thanx n left d place immediately...

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as soon as abhay left d place he heard his angel's voice again..

angel (in her baby voice bt quite sad)- dad...

abhay(as soon as he heard her voice... smile returned on his face)- ma princess...how r u n ur mom...r u both fine...sorry princess u n ur mom gt hurt coz of me today

angel(again wid a sad voice)- no dad...i m choli dat coz of me mom gt hurt...

abhay- no princess...dat was nt ur fault...n nw everything is fine...so don't b upset...(abhay didn't want her angel to b upset at ny cost)

angel(still nt covienced)- bt dad y u left me...i want u to be wid us...

abhay (didn't want to sound low)- i promise, very soon i wl b there wid n ur mom...n then wl av loads of fun...bt just till then promise me..u wl tk good care of urself n ur mom...

angel- dad i promise i wl take cr of me n mom n i love u dad...u r d best...

abhay(he forgot all his pain)- u r also d best princess...u r d best daughter...i luv u...n tel me nw..av u taken ur dinner

angel-- oh dinner dad!!...yes dad i m aving it wid mom..although i cn feel she didn't want to av it bt for me she is taking it...

abhay(felt bad) ok princess...so i think nw u should av some sleep...

angel(coming back to her chrippy n baby voice)- no dad...how cn i sleep bf4 listening mum'a favourite song

abhay gt surprised by this new discovery abt his daughter n her mother...

abhay- song??

angel- yes dad mom always listens a song bf4 going to bed n today i want u to sing dat song for me...

abhay- me song...bt how cn i...n which song r u talking abt angel??

angel- dad mum's favourite song...ummm ammm ummm.

abhay started thinking abt which song his angel was talking...n then he realised dat it could b d only one n yes d one which his love dedicated to him once

angel- dad...ummm i don't knw d song...bt i want u too sing it for me n mom...

abhay(smiling at his angel's wish)- ok...i knw abt which song u r talking...n there he started...n d song was "

Staring at the moon so blue

Turning all my thoughts to you
I was without hope or dream
Try to dull an inner scream
But you . . . saw me through . . .

Walking on a path of air
See your faces everywhere
As you melt this heart of stone
You take my hand to guide me home and now I'm in love

You took my heart away
When my whole world was grey
You gave me everything and a little bit more
And when it's cold at night
And you sleep by my side
You become the meaning of my life . . .

n abhay after few minutes realised d angel might av slept coz she was nt connecting herself to abhay nw!!

on d other hand jamie made pia to av something n wid her strong efforts she also made her to fall asleep ...coz she knew dat pia was too disturbed ...either to av something or to take rest herself...

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abhay was thinking abt d time when he n pia danced on this song n she said...abhay i would like to dedicate this song to u...

then he said to himself(pia u still love me, bt then y u cn't give me a single chance...bt now i knw d truth..n i knw wat i av to do...u r just mine pia n u av to forgive me)...n he came out of his thoughts wen he saw jamie's no on his cell...

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jamie n abhay was sitting in a restaurant ...

abhay- jamie how is she nw?/

jamie(quite angry)- she is fine abhay...bt totally disturbed...n i must tell u abhay she is nt in a condition to go through these emotional tortures...so u tel me straight...wat do u want ??

abhay(understood y jamie was so rude to him)- thanx jamie for coming here, thanx for everything ...thanx for taking care of ma life n ma daughter...n sorry for being such a jerk...sorry for nt being neither a good lover nor a good frnd...bt u r d one...who actually proved her frndship...

jamie( could c dat he was totally heart broken...she had never seen abhay like this bf4...so much of emotions)- she said softly abhay...

abhay- i knew i m responsible for pia's condition bt believe me i never wanted this...i never even thought of betraying such an innocent soul in ma last dream...bt then everything changed suddenly...n then abhay told jamie d whole story frm d very starting...............

jamie was hell shocked...she couldn't believe on her ears...she was feeling so bad for abhay...even being one of d strongest vampire of their clan...a walking dead...wid no heart...was so much in pain coz of his own love mathali...she betrayed him...all this were sounding so heart wrenching...
jamie- bt abhay mathali...i mean...
abhay- pls jamie i don't want to talk abt her...plsss
jamie...ok abhay...
abhay- thanx jamie...jamie cn i ask something frm u...
jamie- u want to knw abt her n ur daughter...
abhay( a smile appeared on his face)- hmmm
jamie told him how pia called her up n their meeting wid dr. david...
jamie..abhay ...i must say she loves u more than her own life...bt abhay dat life is now in grave danger...her decision of nurturing ur child in her womb wl take her life away frm her...abhay she is just fragile human being n carrying a vampire's child...is simply like an invitation to her own death...n worst even after knowing d consequences...she took dis decision...
abhay was hell shocked- (while closing his eyes) how cn i forget abt all this...all d time i was so happy for ma daughter...bt how cn i forget dat bringing this child in this world will cost her life...no..she cn't do this to me , to herself...i wl stop her...i cn't let her do this...
jamie(put her hands on abhay's hands as his hands were on d table)- abhay ...this is nt possible..its too late nw...u r already connected to ur daughter...how cn u even think of killing her knw
abhay(too disturbed)- then u tel me jamie how cn i c her ending her life coz of me...coz of my child...no jamie...watever happened b/w us was love...bt only she is in this whole situation...y jamie...i av ruined everything...i d only one who is responsible for dis situtation
jamie( was feeling so bad for abhay)- abhay nw there is only one thing u cn do...u need to wid her each n every time...she needs u , ur daughter needs u bt pia is so hurt dat she wl never accpet this thing dat she needs u although she knw herself dat wat she wants...n she is also very stubbonn just like u abhay
abhay(while trying to smile a little)- i knw jamie, bt i think dat she has forget dat to wat xtent i cn go...to get her back in my life...
jamie told him all abt pia's present life n they made a plan......

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in d morning...after loads of forcing frm jamie pia got ready for d office...she was still so confused n upset of d events of last day...watever happened b/w her n abhay wa still so alive infront of her mind

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kabir was little worried after seeing his chumpunk so quite n lost bt jamie made him believe (atleast she tried) ...dat it happens during pregnancy n in pia's case things r bit difficult also...n kabir thought dat ofcourse his chimpunk was all alone ...so he decideddat they three wl b going out for dinner tonight...

on d other hand pia made herself busy wid working on designes...bt abhay was all there in her mind n heart...she was feeling his fragnance still on her...she was trying hard to concentrate bt all was going into vein...

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kabir n jamie were working on mr.walter's project...when kabir asked a very sudden question frm jamie...

kabir(in a serious tone)- jamie r u dating sumone??

jamie(surprised by his question)- wat?? y r u asking such question frm me kabir???

kabir(going to his normal tone)- y...cn't i ask this frm u?? (while winking at her) ...u knw if i wl take u wid me on a date...i don't want me to come back home in two pieces after dat...who knws ...ur bf do wat to me for trying to date his beautiful gal???

jamie(while trying nt to laugh )- btw kabir i m nt dating anyone...so don't worry u wl go back ur home in one piece only... after a date

kabir- wowww it means u r ready to go on a date wid me??

jamie(got it where he was gng)- nooo...i didn't mean dat...

kabir bt u said dat while making faces like an innocent child who won his battle

jamie--- kabirrr...cn v do work if ur stop flirting wid me...

kabir(trying to sound serious)- hey jamie i m serious...believe me...i m asking u for a date

jamie-kabir...first let us finish this project...then vl think abt our dat

kabir- fine...u broke of ma heart jamie(while placing his hand on his heart n showing dat he was hurt)

jamie(while hitting him wid a file which was in her hand)- just shut up kabir


n after few minutes fight , they started doing their work again

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in d evening pia was just finshing her work when both jamie n kabir entered her cabin

kabir while taking away file frm her hand ...hey chimpunk lets go...finish rest of d designs tomorrow...v r going for dinner today

pia(still sounding low)- dinner bt y

kabir- coz v r normal ppl pia...n v need to av our proper meals nt like u who just keep on eating nw these days...one need to prepare a chart for ur uncountable meals...this made pia passed smile ..stop it kabir...

pia - reli kR i don't want to go

kabir- hey chipmunk ...don't b a spoil spot..v three r going n dats final...n u knw wat if i wl convience u to go wid us for a dinner. then jamie wl go on a date wid me...so pls chimpunk for jamie n me...lets go

jamie's jaw dropped ...n she was giving those killing looks to kabir n pia finally started laughing...

pia.ok fine KR...this if for ur date wid jamie...

jamie while smiling...n i wl nt kill u kabir coz u made pia laugh finally

kabir..so lets go gal...

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a week passed away...pia was getting normal...bt her encounter wid abhay had unsettled her all emotions...

she was still trying to keep them away...bt it was getting hard for her...

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at office...

kabir n jamie both were present in pia's cabin

kabir while standing wid pia...

hey chimpunk i av got a new project n n u knw wat d owner wants our company to design his hotel n d best part ...bt bf4 finshinh his sentence kabir gt a msg frm d receptionist dat someone wants to met him...n kabir said ok send him in pia's office...

kabir- hey pia abt whom i was talking has arrived...

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n pia's cabin door got opened n someone wid those classy looks n classy attire entered her office...n this time there was full attitude on his face...n his signature smile...n pia got shocked...even in her last dreams she was nt xpecting dat kabir was talking abt him...abhay...

kabir moved towards abhay n they both shaked their hands n then both hugged each other like they were very gud frnds...pia was feeling dat floor under her feet started revolving..she held her chair tightly..

kabir looked at pia n then abhay...

kabir. abhay meet chipmunk ops i m sorry i m mean pia n jamie(while pointing towards them)...n guys he is abhay...abhay raichand... d owner of raichand empire and ma new frnd...

abhay(behaving like he doesn't knw nyone there xcept kabir)- hi pia ...hi jamie while giving his best smile...

pia was still trying to digest everything which was going around her n jamie was just trying to show dat she was unawared of everything...

kabir- abhay...chimpunk...ops i mean

abhay- u mean pia right (while looking at pia n a flaunting his best smile)

kabir- ya...actually she is going to work on ur project...she is d best...

abhay(while giving full attitude)- n kabir i always want d best..

chimpunk u cn start ur work wid abhay wenever u want kabir said

abhay- kabir i want to get this work done asap ..so y don't c start frm today only...wat say miss pia

pia(in sarcastic way)- as u wish mr.raichand...

kabir- k guys then u carry on ...n chimpunk..me n jamie r going to mr. walters office for d approval of designs

pia(to herself) kabirrr wat u av done...oh no...working wid abhay...i m gonna kill u abhay...

kabir came towards pia n gave her a hug...luv u chimpunk...tk cr...n don't try to stress urself...

on d other hand abhay felt a pang of jealous when kabir hugged pia...he folded his fingers tightly ..forming a fist...someone was holding his world in his arms...

pia gave a heartfull smile to kabir ...u too tk cr of urself n jamie...n they both leftd office... leaving pia n abhay behind

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abhay- so miss pia jaiswal...cn v start our discussion

pia(brust out)- wat d hell r u doing here abhay...while coming towards him...bt still mainting a full of arm distance

abhay(coolly)- wat...u knw very well pia...ma dad is aving chain of hotels n v av also invested in new jersey n i want ur company to design ma hotel ,so wats a big deal...

pia (trying to control herself..this time she was nt hurt...she was just a bit frustarted )- abhay i knw very well wat do u want...

abhay while taking his steps towards her n she was moving backward...abhay than y don't u give me dat (winked at her)..n u knw only u cn give me wat i want...(while trying to control his laughter while looking at her frowned face)

pia- abhay uuu

abhay- wat me pia??... cn't u give ur best designs to me(making an innocent face) ( mean while pia hit d wall n abhay was standing infront of her still mainting a distance of single b/w them)

pia- u r sick abhay...

abhay(this time in serious tone) u wanna see how sick i cn be n(he covered d distance of dat single step b/w them n pia's heart beats again lost their track...due to his closeness n his fragnance both were making her crazy)- abhay brought his hand towards her face...he slowly removing her curls frm her face n n tucked them behind her ear...pia started gasping...n her lips started drying while abhay moving his finger on her face...

abhay(to himself)- oh god...this gal is making me crazy i don't knw how am i stoping myself(while looking towards her lips which were trembling)- pls pia(he closed his eyes so dat he could stop his desires frm over powering his mind) bt then he opened his yes while looking at her innocent face...

he went on his knees n carefully placing his hands on pia's belly...pia opened her eyes as soon as she felt his touch on her...pia was quite surprised looking at him like dat

abhay(her voice was full of love) hi angel...how r u ma luv...look u always want me to b wid u.n ur mom .i m here knw...

tears started welling up in her eyes...she couldn't dat her angel has got connected to her father to such xtent n like this(ofcourse this was something totally supernatural)

abhay again gt connected wid hisdaughter...

angel- dad...i m so happy...its d first time i m feeling ur touch...u knw i m chooo happy...

abhay was also feeling her angel's inside pia... n he said-i cn't xplain in words how am i feeling...my dead heart has started beating again angel ...thanx to u n ur bestest mom ..he looked at pia...who was just staring at abhay wid her beautiful eyes n abhay softly placed his lips on her belly...n tear rolled down her cheek

abhay- luv u angel...

angel- luv u too mom n dad...

abhay stood back..n they both were looking into each other eyes..they were sharing d feeling of being parents soon n then slowly pia closed her eyes to feel d moment .n abhay kissed her both eyes...then her forehead...n piya felt his lips were an inch apart..when she said abhay...its office...

abhy(coming out of his trance n bringing back his crocked smile...(bt somewhere in his heart he was smiling at her innocence n her so out of this world condition whenever he was around her)

abhay taking his steps back ..as u say miss jaiswal..

pia was all red n also frowned- while patting her foot on d ground n giving him so dready looks..she moved back towards her chair...

nw pia's back towards abhay who was still smiling...

pia was holding her chair...she was still feeling dizzy ...

pia(trying to control her heart beat)-finally she turned around...n abhay stopped smiling n pasting a sturn look on his face...

pia- abhay v wl continue tomorrow

abhay(again wid smirk on his face)- wat...we cn continue nw even wats d need to wait for tomorrow.. i mean u should av told me ...v cn go home also...i would avn't mind it...i knw u cn't control urself when i m infront of u...

pia(couldn't believe on her ears...full of irritation in her voice)- r u mad abhay..u r totally a jerk...u r sick ..i was just talking abt this stupid meeting n ur designs...n u were thinking dat...ahhh...n listen ur closeness never affects me...got it

abhay (while still holding dat smirk)- he moved towards pia...n firstly pia didn't move frm her place(coz this time she wanted to show dat his closeness didn't affect her) bt all want into vein..when abhay was just a one step back frm her...she took her step back n got herself seated in dat office chair of her...

abhay(kept both of his hands on d arm of d chair...leaned towards her...he brought his mouth close to her ear (in a seducing way)...look i told u how much my closeness affect u...so don't u ever challenge me for dat...n he turned around to leave n then he stopped at d door , while turning back he said- pia there is one thing i m sure...if we wouldn't av been in d office at present then u wouldn't av stopped me frm completing ma task( he winked at her n left frm there

pia(in frustartion)- i just hate u abhay...n she just took a paper weight n threw in d direction frm where he left...

Edited by heena_mehta - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

wow heena awesome update.I love Abhiya interaction.Oh 1st Abhay was all crying & thn suddenly v got 2 c Attitude wala Abhay.He surely know how 2 seduce Pia or handle her.I love Angel & Abhay convo soo cute.Jammie is such a sweet frnd & so is Kabir.U rock baby.I loved it😊🤗

Edited by cuteshrishti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
owesom heena!!!👏

loved the update yar😳... wat an interaction between abhay and pia... finally jemme knows and atlast there is smone to help abhay and stay on his side😃... angel is sooo cute and her interactions were owesum... abhiya scenes were owesum😳... kabir and jammie were really sweet and nice... loved the update and continue soon🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Its so romantic n cute Heena! Angel was so sweet when she said,"I'M CHOLLI fo hurtng mum". Thats the best line ever! And Abhiya at office were so passionate that am speechless! Jamie n Kabir make such a lovely jodi!

P.S. Do we have some mental connection that we always update our ff's on the same night n at the same time???
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awww Heena... another wonderful chapter...loved it,... 🤗 This is my fav ff in all those i read... 😳
I love angel n Abhay's interaction 😳 and Piya- Abhya's convo was tooo good... so like Abhay... hecan seduce Piya anytime, make her angry, make her happy, sad all at a time... and he can change his mood in a minute... 😍
Jamie and Kabir are sooo cute... I hope they make a wonderful couple... can't wait for more encounters of ABHIYA at office... and thanks for the PM... luv n hug - Tanzi 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow u updated this early i didn't expected it love u for this
after reading it i just want to celebrate🥳and 🤗 u
what an update really i felt like living it
abhay was at his best here emotional ,caring but with full of attitude
he can seduce pia whenever he want to thats so sweet😳
angel and abhay's interaction was as always the best
pia's anger at abhay in office was adorable
jamie and kabir interaction was also very cute
abhay and pia's encounter at office was the symbol of pia ready to forgive abhay and give him one chance i hope this will happen soon
thanks for the pm and yes be a good girl and update asap like u did this time
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Thanx 4 luvly hug :))) awsum update as usual...Abhiya interaction iz so romantic n tody I luv most da FATHER-DAUGHTER Convo...datz amzin outstandin n so much cuteee...mmuahhh 2 angel n ofcourse 2 her soooper hottt DAD :pp

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Awesome update dr like u always do ,Abhay an Angle covo was cute nd Abhiya interaction was wow😳. loved it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
I absolutely loved this update! Just when I thought this FF couldn't get any better since it's already so perfect, you surprise me with this awesome update! I was wondering how we would get Abhiya moments if Piya was still angry with Abhay! And you found an awesome way for Abhay-Piya to stay together-Abhay working with Piya! That is totally awesome! I must say I loved the Abhay-Piya interaction in the office! It was so romantic! And I loved when Abhay was jealous when Kabir hugged Piya! 😆 This is one of my favorite FF's! 😛 Keep up the good work! 👏 Eagerly looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊

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