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undisclosed

@undisclosed

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

oh goodness its going to get more violent than this???...you have tackled it pretty well so far...i trust your writing so i will follow along...but i have to admit i am scared of what is to come...

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Lily201

@Lily201

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Oh God!! I can't really express the disgust that went through me when I read about Neel's doings🤢

I wish Geet gets the support from her family and as for Neel-the sooner he's taken to a psychologist/mental asylum the better.

Hope she overcomes this dark shadow in her childhood and Maan realizes her predicament though he's started to instinctively dislike Geet's cousin.

Well its a sensitive issue,wish you all the best!!

Edited by Lily201 - 14 years ago

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tania

@wifey

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

please continue cuz these r wat some children go through. i am very curious to wat happens next

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Kesha

@--Kesh--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Ohh poor baby... she is being molested by her own cousin...

I wonder how the story is going to develop...waiting eagerly for the next update...

Always love your works Lena... 🤗

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richiiiii

@richiiiii

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

god neel sucks!!

i seriously want to puke

and the sad part is that guys like him exist in the world...

btw great story!!!

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mandymore

@mandymore

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Nice start,very brave n imp topic..hw many parts u hav planned 4 it as its an os.cont soon.

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Lena.MG.PM.List

@Lena.MG.PM.List

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: sindu555
nice start ...

cant wait to read more ... btw how many parts are u planning to write for this ?

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Sana

Originally posted by: mandymore
Nice start,very brave n imp topic..hw many parts u hav planned 4 it as its an os.cont soon.

As of right now, I am unsure. However part it takes to finish this story.

Edited by Lena.MG.PM.List - 14 years ago

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XXaquafireXX

@XXaquafireXX

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

very well written. Neel is absolutely disgusting and obviously messed up...

This is just my POV but I would rate this story higher than Teen...

Can't wait for the update!

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Isha

@JilyPotter

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Okay Lena. I have so much to catch up on. All of your FF's and you add another one!!!

But none the less. CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!...hope for the best on this ff...

although the topic seems very horrid and frightening. But i will read it!

Love,

Isha

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Lena

@.Lina.

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: XXaquafireXX
very well written. Neel is absolutely disgusting and obviously messed up...
This is just my POV but I would rate this story higher than Teen...

Can't wait for the update!

That would be hypocritical for my part. i am teen and if i can write about it, then a teenager my age cant take it, right? 😉😆