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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
oh wow hearty loved da update yr

best of luck for ur exams
tc
loads of love
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
beautiful part.
Nw they both r going to stay togeather. Cool.
Luking forward to story.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
Oh thts nice

Another ff frm ur side :D

Just read d first chap

Loved it

Cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
Chap 2:

Amazing

Nupur is awesum :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
Chap 3:

Hmmm interesting

Loved it

Cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
nice part
mayur sharing flat is gr8
sorry for commenting late
thanks for the pm
😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
wow...😊😃😊
awesome ff dear...👏👍🏼👏
i loved it...😊
i loved it...😊😊
i loved it lodsss...😃😃😃
goshhh i love dis Nupur...😉😆😉
she is so bindaas yaar...😉😉
n mostly d most Different Nupur i hv ever known...By God
pehle to woh ladke walo ko jaise bhagaya na usne...🤣🤣🤣
🤣main to🤣haste haste🤣pagal hi ho gayi thi...🤣🤣

den phir ladki ho kar khud😲 KHUD😲😲...
Mayank se kaha flat share karne ke liye...By god...😉
ye Nupur to mujhe shock par shock dene pe utar ayi hain...😆😆😆
wah bare din baad itni BINDAAS Nupur se mil kar bada accha laga...😆😆
i loved it lodsss...😃😃

arey ye kya??????????😲
2months beet gaye n no update????????????😲😲
plzzz plzzz update soon plzzz😭
i want to read more...😔😔
plzzz continue soon...😒
waiting eagerly d actual EAGELY for ur next update...😊😊
plzzz update asap...😉
love ya...🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
ridiii
waiting or ur update
plzzz update dis FF
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
hello friends...i'm back...first I'm extremely sorry for being late...plz forgive me...and thnx for ur precious comments...and i'm sorry again that i can't reply ur comments individually...but i read all of them...it really encouraging...love u all🤗...nd now here is today's update...i hope u'll like it and plz forgive me for my mistakes...







04.

It's the first day after Mayank shifts to Nupur's flat….it's Monday. So they both have to go for their work. It's already 7 a.m. but they both are still sleeping….because of their alarm clock the neighbors wake up but they both are still sleeping…..when the alarm starts ringing for forth time they both are trying to open their eyes and they wake up with a jerk after seeing the time…..it's already 7.45 a.m.. they both run towards the washroom…after taking a shower they both go to the kitchen and meet with each other….but here is a problem….actually a huge problem….who make the breakfast……as they both just love to cook very much that they would prefer to be hungry rather than cooking…but right now they both are so hungry and they also need food….so they try something….

Nupur: good morning Mayank…

Mayank: good morning Nupur..so breakfast main kya hey?

Nupur: wo tpoh main tumse puchne wali thi?

Mayank: Nupur ye tumhara ghar hey aur aj iss ghar main mera pehla din hey toh maine socha ki breakfast tumhari taraf se hogi…

Nupur: Mayank main khud ke liye khana bahut mehnet se banati hoon aur tum mujhse breakfast expect kar rahe ho……subah subah kya joke mara hey…

Mayank: very funny….par ab hum kahenge kya….aur hume kam pe bhi jana hey….humare passa jaida waqt nehi hey.

Nupur: don't worry main hoon na…..matlab maggie hey na…..tum Maggie bana lo main coffee banati hoon…

Mayank: Maggie?

Nupur: ha Maggie.mera ek lauta shara….jo humesha mera bhukh mitata hey…toh shuru ho jau.uss cabinet main Maggie hey…

Mayank: Nupur ek problem hey…..mujhe Maggie banana nehi ata…

Nupur: Mayank…Maggie sabko banana ata hey. So don't worry…tum shuro toh karo.

Then they both starts cooking…Nupur is making coffee and Mayank is making Maggie.. After breakfast they both go for their work…. Almost at 10.30p.m. Nupur come back to the house….Mayank is already home…he was returning back at 9 p.m. When Nupur come back Mayank is watching TV….Nupur sit on the sofa and put her head on headrest…Mayank brings a glass of water for her…

Mayank: Nupur pani….

Nupur takes the glass and drinks the water…

Nupur: thanks…

Mayank: Nupur ek baat puchu?

Nupur: ha bolo…

Mayank: tum zinda kaise ho?

Nupur: kya?

Mayank: matlab puri din office uske baad classes….tum zinda kaise ho?

Nupur: maat puch yaar….mujhe khud nehi pata ki main zinda kaise hoon

Mayank: thik hey nehi puchta….par ye bata tu already graduate hey phir ye classes kyun?

Nupur: yaar tu toh janta hey ki aj kal job market main kitna competition hey. Sirf graduation se assa nokri nehi milte…extra degree bhi honi chahiye isiliye maine ye classes join ki…

Mayank: okay…phir bhi roj roj itna stress.tu handle kaise karega…..

Nupur: roj kaha hey.sirf tin din classes hoti hey…

Mayank: that's cool…

Nupur: assa sun khane main kya hey?

After hearing this Mayank's face become pale…he is feeling bad for Nupur…he knows that she is not able to cook food and he doesn't know how to cook….

Nupur: tere shakal se hi pata chal gaya ki kahani kya hey…

Mayank: tu chinta maat kar main kuch karta hoon…

Nupur: tujhe khana banana ata hey?

Mayank: nehi.par aj subah hi maine Maggie banana sikha so don't worry…

Nupur: very good toh tu Maggie bana main fresh hoke ati hoon…..and welcome to the club…

Mayank: konsi club?

Nupur: Maggie Club.

Mayank: Maggie club?

Nupur: ha…Maggie club.wo kya hey main ek club banaya jaha sirf unn logo ko membership milte hey jo log sirf Maggie banana jante hey….aur Maggie khake hi apna din gujara karte hey..main iss club ki founder aur ek lauta member hoon aur aj se tu bhi iss club ki member hey..

Mayank: thank you so much…toh ab tu ja aur main Maggie banata hoon.mujhe bhi bhukh lagi hey..

Nupur:okay..

After freshens up Nupur come back…the Maggie is already ready… They both take their dinner with Maggie and their random chit chat.. after finishing dinner they both go to their respective room as they both are so tired….At 3 p.m. Mayank suddenly wake up because of some noise…he come out from his room…the noise is coming from the living room….ho goes to the living room and see something which makes him surprised….Nupur is eating ice creams and watching TV…actually its better to say watching cartoons…

Mayank: Nupur?

Nupur: tu…..maine socha tu so raha hey..

Mayank: ha main so raha tha phir maine kuch awaz suna toh dekhne a gaya ki kya hey..

Nupur: uffs sorry to disturb your sleep…

Mayank: wo chod..tu bata tu yaha kya karrahi hey?

Nupur: apna midnight snacks le rahi hoon…

Mayank: midnight snacks?

Nupur: wo kya hey na mujhe aksar raat ko bhukh lagti hey toh main uthke kuch kha leti hoon…wo muhe bhukhi pet neend nehi ati na…

Mayank: oh…tu har raat aisa karti hey?

Nupur: nehi…bas kabhi kabhi jab diner thik tarah se karti hoon toh bhukh nehi lagti..par you know Maggie as dinner toh mujhe bhukh lag gayi….

Mayank: hm..aur ye cartoon…

Nupur: cartoon kya?

Mayank: matlab tu cartoon dekhti hey?

Nupur: nehi toh kya karu….Tv pe aur kuch hey kya dekhne ke liye iss cartoon ke siwa.

Mayank: kya?

Nupur: dekh music channels pe koyi apna jawani loota rahi hey ya toh koyi badnam ho rahi hey nehi toh koyi apna character kitna dila hey wo bata rahi hey…..dusri channels pe saas bahu wala serial.news channel pe aise khabar ate hey jise sunne ke baad mujhe lagta hey main duniya main kyun hoon…movie channels pe jo movie dikhati hey ya toh main dekh nehi sakti nehi toh pehle dekh chuki hoon……aur baki raha sports channel aur cartoon channel….iss waqt main koyi match nehi dekh sakti toh cartoon hi sahi…aur ye cartoon bahut interesting bhi hey..

Mayank is surprised to hear her words….she is so different…

Mayank: Nupur tu zoo main rahegi ya museum main?

Nupur: kya?

Mayank: tu kitni ajib hey yaar….so tu zoo main rahegi ya museum main

Nupur: very funny……bt tune pucha hey toh bata deta hoon…I prefer museum..

After hearing this they both burst into laughter…..they are both are so different…

Nupur: assa cha lab main sone chalti hoon.tu bhi ja…nehi toh subah uh nehi sakenge hum dono.

Mayank: okay…good night.

Nupur: good night…

Then they both go for sleep again…Days are passing away in same routine…they both wake up after four alarm….and they argue in who make breakfast….one day Nupur make breakfast one day Mayank…..and you know what they eat as their breakfast everyday…..yes you're right…..its Maggie…not only as breakfast they eat Maggie as dinner everyday…it seems Maggie company should give them award. I mean who eat Maggie like this…and now Nupur doesn't take her midnight snacks alone…every time Mayank joins her.. they both enjoy their midnight snacks with cartoon shows…..sometimes they fight over their favorite cartoon show at midnight as they both have different choice…Nupur's favorite cartoon show is Phiness and Ferb and Mayank's is Dexter….their days are passing away and its their first weekend together….


love

ridi



Edited by ridi_onasis - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
wow...
u updated...
thank u..
thank u sooo much...
i was waiting for u to update dis...
plzzz continue soon...

now abt d update...
i loved it...
i loved it...
i loved it lodsss...
awesome update dear...
i jst loved dis Nupur as i said earlier...
so dey both have only Maggie as breakfast n dinner...
hehehe...definately Maggie company shud gv dem AWARD...😆🤣😆
n Nupur words for d music channel...by god 🤣
its d most hillarious update...🤣
koi apni jawani luta rahi n koi badnaam ho rahi hain n koi apna character dhila hone ke bare mein bata raha hain...🤣🤣🤣
gosh...i love dis Nupur...lodsss...😉
plzzz plzzz update soon...😕😭😕
plzzz i want an early update plzzz..😕😕
continue soon.
dont make us wait for so longgg...
u know i really wish ke tum abhi update karo...
bt i guess asa to hoga nehi...
bt plzzz update d next part dis week plzzz...
love u...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago

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