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Posted: 14 years ago
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thnx dear...😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shafoo

wowow i just love it all 2 parts it was so intresting plzz add me to your pm list



thnx dear5 for liking my ff...i already sent u a buddy request😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: SamiraARTiMAYUR

Too good nups awesome part Ridi



nupur hey too good toh hoga hi😉...thnx dear😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: anuja4mayur

awesome update.loved it<3



thnx dear...😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

nice update ridi 😊



thnx dear...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: khushisati

hehehe ausum update ridi...
lovely.
kya kaam kiya he nupur ne by god.loved her...




jo karna chahiye tha nupur ne wohi kiya hey...wo hi nupur style main😉😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hello friends here I'm with another update...i hope u'll like it like previous updates. But before u start to read here is an announcement. I will not able to update my any ff for one month due to my xam. i'll update next time in august. So till then keep patience... now enjoy this part





03.

GREEN-NUPUR
BLUE-MAYANK
BLACK
- DIALOGUES AND THIRD PERSON VIEW

Finally I'm free bird. I have shifted from Delhi to Mumbai. Actually there are two reasons that are why I've shifted. Firstly I've got a very good job in Mumbai after my graduation and secondly my mom. If I stay one more month in my home she will definitely get me married to some one. So for saving myself I've escaped from my home to Mumbai. Life in Mumbai is awesome. I'm enjoying it so much. I've got a job in a multinational company. Along with my job I've joined ACCA classes. I know you are thinking why I join this when I'm already graduated. Actually I want to do something in my life and want to gain a position for me…..yes you're right I'm very high ambitious. That's why I've joined ACCA and I'm really enjoying my classes and my new life. I'm all alone in Mumbai. I'm living in a two bed room flat and looking for a flat mate. Though I love to stay alone but the rent of this flat is quite high. As I don't want to take money from my mom and along with that the expense of ACCA is quite high I want a flat mate to share my flat rent and today I give an advertisement for a flat mate.

Finally my dream is going to come true. I've got a chance to do my internship in one of the best hospital of India. So I've shifted from Delhi to Mumbai. Now I'm staying in one of my friend and looking for my own accommodation. Today I see an advertisement for a flat mate and I'm going there.

It's Sunday. It has been almost one month that I've shifted and this is my third Sunday in Mumbai. Actually this is only day when I get some time. Rest of the day of the week I spend my whole day in office and at evening I go for my classes. Till 10 my classes is going on. After that I come to home and eating my dinner then go to sleep. I don't get any time. So in Sunday I wake up late and then make some yummy food for me. After eating food I wash my clothes …washing clothes is disgusting..I hate this.. but what can I do….in home mom used to do this work but here there is nobody to do this kind of work. So I have to do this. This Sunday I'm doing the same. I've just finished washing my clothes. Now I'm taking rest when the door bell rings. I open the door and see a boy is standing there. I saw that boy before but can't remember where. Suddenly I remind where I saw him. We both met in a marriage ceromony and we spent some really good moment with each other….he is Mayank.

I reach the address. It's an apartment house. I go to the 6th floor which is mentioned in advertisement. I press the door bell. After sometimes a girl open the door and I'm surprised to see her there. I never expect that I can see her again. Of course I know the girl. She is Nupur. We both met in a marriage ceremony and spend really some good time with each other. But what is she doing here in Mumbai….

Mayank: arre Nupur tum yaha?

Nupur: hi Mayank…ye sawal toh main bhi puch sakti hoon na…..

Mayank: par maine pehele pucha toh jawab bhi mujhe pehele milna chahiye na…

Nupur: tumhe tumhara jawab mil jayega…..par yehi khare hoke jawab sunna hey kya.andar toh ao.

Mayank enters into the house. It's quite good but the condition of the house is not good. You all know how messy Nupur is. So the whole house is quite mess. Nothing is in its right place. Nupur takes Mayank to the living room.

Nupur: sorry dude ghar ka halat kuch thik nehi hey….wo kya hey na cheezein organize karne me main kuch khass assi nehi hoon…..

Mayank: I can understand…

Nupur: that's cool. Toh kya loge……coffee ya tea ya phir kuch aur?

Mayank: coffee….

Nupur: okay main abhi layi.

Nupur goes to the kitchen for making coffee for both of them. In the whole world there is may be one or two work which Nupur can do perfectly and making coffee is the best. Actually Nupur loves to drink coffee and she only drinks coffee which is made by her. So she can make excellent coffee. Nupur returns to living room with two coffee mugs and give one of them to Mayank.

Nupur: toh ab bolo tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?

Mayank: ye sawal ka jawab toh muhhe pehle chahiye tha na….

Nupur: okay..I'm telling….actually mujhe yaha ek assi job milgayi toh main yaha shift ho gayi. Ab tum bolo?

Mayank: same here…mujhe India ki one of the best hospital main internship karne ki chance mil gaye toh main yaha chala aya…

Nupur: par tumhe kaise pata chala ki main yaha rehti hoon?

Mayank: mujhe kya pata tha ki tum yaha rehte ho?

Nupur: toh phir?

Mayank: actually mujhe rehne ke liya jaga chahiye aur main aj ek advertisement dekha toh main chala aya.

Nupur: tum wo advertisement dekke aye ho…..par mujhe toh ek ladhki chahiye jiske sath main flat share karungi…..aur maine advertisement main wohi diya tha.

Mayank: par uha toh kahi likha nehi tha ki it's only for girl.

Nupur: really? Par aisa kaise ho sakta hey?

Mayank: don't know….shayed printing mistake ho gaya.

Nupur: shayed…..toh tum yaha mere flat mate banne ke liye aye ho.

Mayank: irada toh wohi tha..par lagta hey ab mujhe kahi aur jaga dhunda padhega.

Nupur: kyun?

Mayank: kyunki main ladhki nehi hoon na toh main yaha kaise reh sakta hoon.

Nupur: ha wo toh hey……par agar main chahu toh tum reh sakte ho….

Mayank: kya?

Nupur: ha…..dekho main tumhe janti hoon…tum asse ladhke ho…ye ki main kisi ajnabi ladhki ko apna room rent pe dooon isse better ki main apne koyi purana dost ko hi room rent pe de doon…..

Mayank: are you sure that you want to share your flat with me?

Nupur: 100% sure…..

Mayank: tumhe koyi problem toh nehi hoga na?

Nupur: nehi Mayank..it'll be fine. Now you can shift here.

Mayank: thanks buddy. Tumne mujhe bacha liya. Main yaha ek dost ki uha reh raha tha par uha bahut sare problem hey.aur mujhe ek jaga urgently chahiye tha. Thank you so much.

Nupur: you're most welcome. b/w rent aur other expense mila ke 8500 dena hoga tumhe. Is it okay?

Mayank: ya……it's perfect.

Nupur: toh tum kab shift hoge?

Mayank: ho sake toh aj hi agar tumhe koyi problem na ho toh.

Nupur: nehi mujhe koyi problem nehi hey.

Mayank: toh thik hey main jake apna saman leke ata hoon.

Nupur: okay main tumhara room thik kar deti hoon…..

Mayank: uski koyi jarurat nehi hey main khud thik kar lunga.

Nupur: that'll be cool.wo kya hey na mujhe ye safai bafai pasand nehi hey.

Mayank: ya I know……wo toh tumhari ghar ko dekhte hi pata chalta hey.

Nupur: come on yaar jab tak reh sakti hoon tab tak aise rehne main kya problem hey?

Mayank: kuch nehi…….actually mujhe bhi ye saf safai pasand nehi…..I think its waste of time.

Nupur: exactly…….thank god tum cleanliness freak nehi ho.kyunki mujhe phirse kisike sath iss baat pe argument nehi karni…..phisle 23 saal se mom se karke thak chuki hoon.

Mayank: same here…okay toh ab main chalta hoon apna saman lene.

Nupur: okay bye…jaldi ana…..

Mayank: main yu gaya aur yu aya sweetheart!

Nupur: Mayank don't call me sweetheart…..

Mayank: I knew it ki tum aise react karoge….

Nupur: toh phir kyun kaha?

Mayank: tumhe irritate karne ke liye…..

Nupur: Mayank tumhe yaha shanty se rehna hey na?

Mayank: ha…..

Nupur: toh mujhse thik tarah behave karna….tumhe pata hey na mujhe ye sab bilkul pasand nehi hey….apne kheriat chahte ho toh aisa maat karna.

Mayank: main toh majak kar raha tha…mujhe pata hey kit um wo dusre stupid ladhkiyo jaisi nehi ho…you have brain buddy…

Nupur: ya I have…..

Mayank: now I'm going…akar baat karte hey.

Nupur: okay.

Mayank leaves the house to bring his belongings.

So finally I get an accommodation. It's right that I'm going to stay with a girl. But Nupur is not like other girls who're drooling over me. Actually she has minimum quality of a girl. She is kind of me. She is my buddy. So I hope there will be no problem between us and we're going to enjoy our friendship.

I'm going to share my flat with Mayank. I don't have any problem to share my flat with him though I only met him once. I trust him. He is not like other boys who have some peculiar thoughts in their mind. Though he is a great flirt but I know he never flirts with me. I know he doesn't think me like other girls with whom he flirts. I've got know this in our first meeting. So I give the room to him. I hope there will be no problem between us and we're going to enjoy our friendship.

Mayank and Nupur are going to share a flat. Yes they are right. There will be no problem between them and they are going to enjoy their friendship. They are so similar. Their ideology towards life is same. They think in same way and this will make them great friends……but what happen when this stupid so called 'LOVE' will come between themand their friendship…will their friendship resist or it'll end?


LOVE

ridi


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Posted: 14 years ago
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beautiful ridi...
wow both are sharing same apartments...😉
both are almost of same personality ..lets see wht destiny would do wid thm...


All the very best for the papers...🤗
Edited by drmaha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great Ridi...
very nice part...
all the best for ur exams...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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aweosme update Ridi.
fianally mayur met.
waiting for their love story.
continue soon.
thanks for the pm.

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