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Posted: 13 years ago
ridiii
OMG OMG what a beautiful update
i justloveditridi
it was damn cute and superb
lol lol lol mayank ki tou halat he kharab ho gayi..
i loved the way he was trying to identify the reason abt her wired behavior..lol lol
and his each and every explanation cracked me up..
it was such cuty-shewty update re...
i enjoyed it a lot
fabulous fabulous part...

dil khush hogayi.--maza agaya
ridi plz do update next part soon
take care

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey i told u to pm me but u didn't pm its ok plzz next time do pm me and ur update is as usual rocking love mayank thought
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Posted: 13 years ago
IMP NOTE:Frnds I'm going out of station so can't able to update for some days. But I promise When I'll come back u'll get ur update. Till then plz keep patience and Take care.

Love
Ridi
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful Update, and loved the conversation between mayank and his conscience. and Ridi get well soon Yar, God bless You and sorry for late reply.

P.S Have a Safe journey.
Edited by -moona- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
BEAUTIFUL UPDATE...N HOPE UR HEALTH IS FINE NOW..TAKE CARE..UPDATE MORE..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

amazing update...

convo between mind and mayank ...lol...
now he 'll go to see psychiatrist... 😲
cant wait to see...
cont soon dear.
and god bless u...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update so finaly Mayank sharma fall in lv
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry Ridi for the late comment it was awesome part loved it thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update Ridz

very beautiful,

loved d convo between mayank n his conscience ... nw he ll go to see psychiatrist?????

omg ... mayanak is such a fool ... pyar karne laga hai aur believe hi nai kar raha hai ...

waiting for next update.

get well soon and have safe journey.

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Posted: 13 years ago
hello guys I'm back with an update. Sorry for being late. actually now a days my net connection has some problem. So I can't able to post updates easily. sorry. So here is today's updates. I hope u'll like it and plz forgive me for errors.

P.S. sorry I couldn't able to reply ur comments individually due to net problem. Thank u all for ur precious comments. keep commenting
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09.

Mayank was standing outside a psychiatrist cabin. Actually this psychiatrist was his cousin too. They both shared a good relation. So Mayank thought perhaps he could help him properly. The cabin door was showing a name plate printed DR. Shekhar Kapoor, Consultant Psychiatrist. Mayank knocked the door and then entered into the room. A young guy, about 3-4 years older than Mayank, was sitting behind the desk. When Mayank entered into the room he raised his head and saw him. A smile came on his lips.

Shekhar: arre Mayank..tu yaha…rasta bhool gaye the yaha phir hum yaad a gaye the!

Mayank: dono!

Shekhar: matlab?

Mayank: matlab main rasta bhatak gaya aur phir mujhe apka yaad aya.

Shekhar: hm…toh mere bhai bata main teri kya kam a sakta hoon?

Mayank: actually bhai mujhe lagta hey mere sath koyi psychological problem huya hey so mujhe apki madad chahiye usse solve karne main.

Shekhar: hm…toh bata kya huya tere sath.

Mayank: main yaha ek ladhki ke sath rehta hoon..

Shekhar: kya? Tu live in relation kar raha hey?

Mayank: nehi…aisa kuch nehi. Hum dono flat mate hey. Wo meri dost hey,yaha akeli rehti hey..toh usse ek flat mate chahiye thi aur mujhe bhi rehne ki jaga chahiye tha toh hum donne ek dusre ki madad ki hey.

Shekhar:acha…toh phir problem kya hey? Uss ladhki ko tujhse pyar ho gayi hey kya?

Mayank: nehi…wo ye sab fazool batein nehi manti …..wo baki ladhki o jaisi pagal nehi hey…wo toh bilkul meri tarah hey.

Shekhar: jab tune kaha teri friend toh mujhe samaj jana chahiye tha….aage bol.

Mayank: hum dono best buddies hey aur hum dono ke beech koyi problem nehi hey….par recently mere sath kuch ajib ho raha hey.

Shekhar: ajib! Kis tarah ki ajib?

Mayank: wo mujhe…..acha main shuru se apko batata hoon…kuch din pehle hum dono ek shadi main gaye the..

Shekhar: tu shadi main gaya tha!

Mayank: ha.wo kya hey na hum dono ko bahut bhook lagi thi aur hum dono main se kisiko khana banana nehi ata. Toh humne socha shadi main ache khana milte hey aur hum dono ke pass ek shadi ka invitation bhi tha toh humne socha ki jake khana khake ate hey.

Shekhar: Mayank.tu sudrega kab….tu shadi main muft ka khana khane gaya tha..wo bhi ek ladhki ko sath main lekar….i'm sure ki tu khana khake hi uha se bhag aya…..yaar uss ladhki ne tere bare main kya sochi hogi?

Mayank: kuch nehi…wo bhi mere sath yehi karne gayi thi…maine kaha na wo bilkul meri tarah hey.

Shekhar: samaj gaya…toh isme problem kya hey?

Mayank: isme koyi problem nehi hey…par problem usi din se shuru huya hey. Actually uss shadi ka dress code tha saree. So usko saree peheni padhi thi.

Shekhar: acha toh tujhe problem saree se hey ya saree pehen ne wali se.

Mayank: matlab?

Shekhar: matlab usse saree main dekhne ke baad tera problem shuru huya….b/w wo saree main kaisi lag rahi thi?

Mayank: yehi toh problem hey.wo saree main bahut ajib lag rahi thi….matlab uski jaisi nehi lag rahi thi!

Shekhar: Mayank…tera kya hoga…tu ek ladhki ko saree main dekke use khubsurat kehne ki bajwa ajib keh raha hey..mere samne keh diya thik hey par uske samne kabhi maat kehna bhai…tujhe maar dalegi.

Mayank: maine already usse keh diya ki wo saree main kitne ajib lag rahi thi…

Shekhar: uske baad bhi tu zinda hey!

Mayank: kyun...mujhe kya hona hey?

Shekhar: beta Mayank ek toh tune ladhki ko compliment nehi diya upar se ajib kaha…aur uss ladhki ne tujhe yuhi sor diya!

Mayank: kyunki usse bhi pata thi ki wo saree main ajib lagegi…wo kya hey na usse khudh saree pehena pasand nehi hey aur nahi jewelry. Aur nahi usse make up karna pasand hey.

Shekhar: wo ladhki hi hey na?

Mayank: definitely wo ladhki hey.par usme ladhki ki quality hardly milte hey. Wo mere jaisi hey. Isiliye toh hum best friend hey.

Shekhar: agar sab thik hey toh problem kya hey?

Mayank: problem ye hey ki usse saree main dekhne ke baad maine weird behave karna shuru kiya.

Shekhar: weird behave! Kaisa weird behave?

Mayank: uss din ke baad pata nehi kabhi kabhi mujhe kya ho jata hey ki main usse ghurte rehta hoon…aur aise ghurte rehta hoon ki uss waqt main puri duniya bhool jata hoon.

Shekhar: wo ye mamla hey…aur kya kya ajib karte hey?

Mayank: main aj kal usse bina fight kiye uss ka hadh baat manta hoon…apko pata hey maximum time ab jab hum raat ko cartoon dekhte hey toh main usse uski favorite cartoon dekhne deti hoon. Aur main khudh usse dekhte rehta hoon.

Shekhar: cartoon? Iss main cartoon kaha se aya. Tum dono 5 saal ke bacche ho kya jo raat ko cartoon dekhte ho.

Mayank: itne raat ko TV pe aur dikhata bhi kya hey?

Shekhar: Itne raat ko matlab? Tum log kitne raat ko TV dekhte ho?

Mayank: actually usse midnight snacks lene ki adat hey wo bhi cartoon dekhte dekhte….toh main bhi usse company de deta hoon.

Shekhar: ajib tere sath nehi ho raha hey wo ladhki hi ajib hey.

Mayank: ha thori ajib toh hey….par mere recent behavior ke samne kuch bhi nehi….maine toh ab tak apko sabse khatarnak part kaha hi hehi.

Shekhar: khatarnak?

Mayank: ha khatarnak……main usse aksar sapne main dekhta hoon…wo bhi saree pehne huye mere sath slow dance karte huye.

Shekhar: wow!

Mayank: wow? Isme wow wali konsi baat hey…..main usse sapno main saree pehne huye mere sath slow dance karte dekhta hoon…apko andaja bhi hey ye kitna weird hey…maine kaha na mere sath kuch psychological problem huya hey. App bataiye mere sath kya huya hey?

Shekhar: tu usse gurta rehta hey….uska haar baat manne laga hey…usse sapno main dekhta hey?

Mayank: toh kya main ab tak Chinese bol raha tha!

Shekhar: nehi…main toh bas confirm kar raha tha ki tere sath yehi hota hey na?

Mayank: ha…apko pata chala ki mujhe kya huya hey?

Shekhar: tune jo symptom bataya usse sunne ke baad mujhe jo lag raha hey…

Mayank: kya lag raha hey?

Shekhar: dekh tu hyper maat hona….shayed tujhe meri baat pe yakeen na ho.par mere bhai tere sath yehi huya hey!

Mayank: app itna natak kyun kar raha hey..mujhe huya kya hey wo sidha sidha bataiye…ap gar bhul gaye toh main bata deta hoon main bhi ek doctor hoon. So jo bhi hey khulke khahiye.

Shekhar: tujhe uss ladhki se pyar ho gaya hey!

After hearing this Mayank looked at Shekhar like he told that some aliens came to earth and they were going to take away Mayank with them. Then suddenly Mayank burst into laughter. Shekhar knew that Mayank would act like this. So he didn't become surprised.

He again tried to make him understand that Mayank was in love with that girl.

Shekhar: Mayank main majak nehi kar raha hoon.

Mayank: bhai mujhe lagta hey ap sabka ilaz karte karte khudh beemar ho gaye. Aur ab apko kisi psychiatrist ki jarurat hey. App chinta maat ki jiye main khudke sath sath apke liye bhi ek acha psychiatrist dhundta hoon.Phir dono sath main jate hey uske pass. Wo mere problem ke sath sath apka bhi problem solve kar dega.

Shekhar: Mayank tujhe sach main uss ladhki se pyar ho gaya hey.

Mayank: ek toh ap keh rahe hey ki mujhe pyar ho gaya hey. Yehi kafi hey ye prove karne ke liye ki apko koyi problem hey. Aur upar se app keh rahi hey ki mujhe Nupur se pyar huya hey. Ab toh main hundred percent sure hoon ki apko problem hey.

Shekhar: toh uss ladhki ka naam Nupur hey.

Mayank: ha.

Shekhar: acha nam hey. Ladhki dekhne main kaisi hey?

Mayank: jaisi dekhne main hoti hey waisi hi hey.

Shekhar: ye kaisi ajib jawab hey…tu jis ladhki se pyar karta hey uske bare main do chaar compliment nehi de sakta tha kya.

Mayank: bhai please phirse apka pyar ka punchnama shuru mat ki jiye. Mujhe koyi pyar vyar nehi huya hey. Hum dono bahut ache dost hey.

Shekhar: tune yeh nehi suna ki ek ladhka aur ladhki kabhi dost nehi ho sakte.

Mayank: ha suna hey na….yash raj ke uss so called romantic film main jo mujhe kisi comedy film je jaida nehi lagta.

Shekhar: Mayank tu maan ya na maan tujhe Nupur se pyar huya hey.

Mayank: app pagal ho chuke ho aur app meri problem ka solution nehi kar sakte. So main ja raha hoon. Good bye.

Mayank left the place. Shekhar was looking at his leaving way and started to talk to himself.

Shekhar: toh the great non believer of love Mr. Mayank Sharma bhi pyar ka shikar ho gaya…..ye toh breaking news ban sakte hey….jo bhi hey bacchu tu maan ya na maan tujhe toh pyar huya hey. Aur badhe bhai hone ke nate mera farz banta hey ki main tujhe sahi rasta dikhau. So mere bhai tu chinta maat kar main tera love story bilkul set kar dunga.

Precap:

Nupur: Mayank tujhe huya kya hey……..

Mayank:………………………………………..

………………………………………., mujhe tujhe pyar ho gaya hey!

Nupur: kya?...


Love
Ridi



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