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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing part dear! I just love the mistery of don,now he is feeling bad about adi! Hmm,so dev is the one to whom adi wanted to marry geet...was he on the phone with romeo or was it don!? Anyway this is fabulous...a lil request,make this romeo talk a lil more english,i do understand hindi but i was not able to understand him too well ,pls dont take it the wrong way,i dont want to say to u how to write just wanted to express my problem,thank you! Do continue soon cause the story is great!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hii anu...
shit man...mera poora prediction ulta nikla...
so maan is indeed a don..and no super undercover cop...
i m feeling sad that things are going to turn ugly..
par tera koi bharosa nahi...kab kya twist daal de...šŸ˜†
geet's plight was heartwrenching , having lost the only person she had as family in the world..
her grief and bereaved state has been well captured , which just makes us symphatise with her...
so dev is the man adi was talking about...i want dev to be the traitor so much ...ohhh gosh i have bcome such a sadist that i cant see dev in positive character...šŸ˜†
this sameera is getting on my nerves...jab dekho chipak jaati hai maan se...fevicol kahin kišŸ˜”šŸ˜†
what is the mystery of the flat which adi had never told geet about it...
i am sure it has some significance and probably cud throw some light on the mystery...😔...but i am too tired to rack my brains now...so i will better leave this to u to explainšŸ˜†
love the character of romeo...he seems to b like urchin...but adding zing to the update...
not much of maan in this update, but he is upto something...now what is it...
ab jyada tadpao mat...aur jaldi jaldi mystery ka pardafash kar došŸ˜†...greedy me...
keep writing sweetie...
and BTW u write so well that u make it tough for us not to comment...and appreciate...although main toh tumhe zyada dhamki hi deti hoon...with my red emoticons...šŸ˜†
but sorry sweetie...u have to jhelofy me
love u and ur ffs

reva



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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
who s helping her
is that maan ?
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Myra.nelly

Amazing part dear! I just love the mistery of don,now he is feeling bad about adi! Hmm,so dev is the one to whom adi wanted to marry geet...was he on the phone with romeo or was it don!? Anyway this is fabulous...a lil request,make this romeo talk a lil more english,i do understand hindi but i was not able to understand him too well ,pls dont take it the wrong way,i dont want to say to u how to write just wanted to express my problem,thank you! Do continue soon cause the story is great!


I undrstnd dear...actually romeo is the caretaker not exactly a servant about whom will be revealed in later parts and so he don't know english, so to give a realistic touch to his character I wroe his dialogues in hindi. But don't worry I'll translate this one as well as his future dialogues in english for u allšŸ˜›
hope that'll be fine😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update and i loved it, continue soon want to see maan meeting geet.plsss update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

hii anu...
shit man...mera poora prediction ulta nikla...
so maan is indeed a don..and no super undercover cop...
i m feeling sad that things are going to turn ugly..
par tera koi bharosa nahi...kab kya twist daal de...šŸ˜†
geet's plight was heartwrenching , having lost the only person she had as family in the world..
her grief and bereaved state has been well captured , which just makes us symphatise with her...
so dev is the man adi was talking about...i want dev to be the traitor so much ...ohhh gosh i have bcome such a sadist that i cant see dev in positive character...šŸ˜†
this sameera is getting on my nerves...jab dekho chipak jaati hai maan se...fevicol kahin kišŸ˜”šŸ˜†
what is the mystery of the flat which adi had never told geet about it...
i am sure it has some significance and probably cud throw some light on the mystery...😔...but i am too tired to rack my brains now...so i will better leave this to u to explainšŸ˜†
love the character of romeo...he seems to b like urchin...but adding zing to the update...
not much of maan in this update, but he is upto something...now what is it...
ab jyada tadpao mat...aur jaldi jaldi mystery ka pardafash kar došŸ˜†...greedy me...
keep writing sweetie...
and BTW u write so well that u make it tough for us not to comment...and appreciate...although main toh tumhe zyada dhamki hi deti hoon...with my red emoticons...šŸ˜†
but sorry sweetie...u have to jhelofy me
love u and ur ffs

reva




reva as I said u always make me smile with ur awesome commentsšŸ˜†šŸ˜†...even the red emoticons seems funnyšŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†

*ahem* seems like I have succeeded in confusing my readers to the core...yay...🤣
anyways...well u see things r still bit obscure so as I said before jumping on conclusions will only give u more shock in future...but I am glad u all r thinking over the story line to get the mystery...seriously it feels so good to see the readers involved to this extent😃

about dev more will be revealed in future parts and romeo is there to give some lightness to geet's dark life right nowšŸ˜›

sameera...uh...she is actually fevicol...so hate her as much u want...no issues with mešŸ˜†

potraying geet's emotions was a bit difficult as adi was her evrything, but I guess it turned out ok...!!

maan aka don will be seen in action soon and many things are coming ur way

so keep reading and commenting

love u too

anupam

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shining_moon



I undrstnd dear...actually romeo is the caretaker not exactly a servant about whom will be revealed in later parts and so he don't know english, so to give a realistic touch to his character I wroe his dialogues in hindi. But don't worry I'll translate this one as well as his future dialogues in english for u allšŸ˜›
hope that'll be fine😊

Thats great! Thank u so much! Knt wait to read whats next! 😃 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thnx 4 d pm


continue soon


It is a very interesting story !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
really missed u dear ...
luved the part alot...
lets see how will dev and geet ... will give punishment to maan ...
will geet be ever able to forgive maan for wat he did ...???//
thanks for the PM ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
fabulous update..
loved it..
bechaari geet.. feeling really sory for her..

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