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wow awesome concept dear...
prologue
wow Maan a DON...
haye...
he is scary, ruthless, but has charisma...
is Adi Geet's bro?
well cant wait to read further...
cont soon...
add me to ur pm list for this one too...
thanks for the pm...

PS why dont u open a thread for ur ffs' links separately?

love you ff pls add to your pm list thanks

Originally posted by: anjy-1988

fab!!!!

plz pm me!!!😛😛😛

plz update it!!!!

thanks dear for liking it😊

Originally posted by: Fantasies

anu... u are sucha a girl...

gosh... i hate u.. for ur cliff hangers... was it adi geet's bro?

omigosh... is it the DON... who he wants her to marry... bt hw could a bro do it.. i mean.. i know don is Maan.. but marrying his own sis to a DON!...

anu... hw can u keep us hanging in mid air han?... tell me when wil u update next... pls ya... do it soon.. na.. i mean.. this one.. and one on one!...😉

love ya... and this FF... was awesome!!!!!!

I'll try to update soon dear...I didn't wanted to leave it at cliff hanger...sacchi...my younger bro snatched the key board😡
nyways yup adi is geet's bro...I'll give a character sketch soon😛
well story will be more clear in the next part, till then have the same old PATIENCE...😆
n yes thanks for liking it😳

Originally posted by: shining_moon

I'll try to update soon dear...I didn't wanted to leave it at cliff hanger...sacchi...my younger bro snatched the key board😡
nyways yup adi is geet's bro...I'll give a character sketch soon😛
well story will be more clear in the next part, till then have the same old PATIENCE...😆
n yes thanks for liking it😳

Originally posted by: NoorFatima

wicked ff .. and a thriilling prologue..

its a new concept yaar (atleast for me on IF)

and maan as an under wrld don is sooo sooo WICKED..

would really love to read how the underworld don and a simple naive girl would fall in love..

and please dont make adi geet's bro.. it would be sooo sooo 🤬 of him to get his sis married to a don..

eagerly waiting for the next part..

Noor

thanks dear😛

well I hope to make everyone feel it a totally original one😳😳

yeah, me too love wicked DON😉

well I m sorry but adi is geet's bro and don't jump on conclusion dear there is lot more in the story😊

love u

anupam

Originally posted by: Fantasies

Sigh!😆

gosh... u ppl have made me literarily fall in love with all types of criminals...

ek taraf Reet and Sam and now u... gosh...

Oh yeah as they good girls fall for bad guys😉
n that reminds me I have not read part4 of sam's gangster...I saw she has updated
just love all the dark maana😈

Originally posted by: SOLACEofEYES

Yeah new ff awesome yaar, inspired by which DON SRK's or AB.
Continue soon.
Thanks 4 pm.

well kind of mixture of both...AB's angry man side n srk's sexy attitude though I m not a fan of srk I just loved his please dialogue in don😉

Originally posted by: holyangel

waht?? dont tell me that "bhaiya" is Geet's bro.. !!!!!! no no no.. it cant b... or is it really a geet's bro working with Maan.. ohhh .. is it Narag.. geet's bro..??? 😕

plzzz update next part soon.. can't wait.. 😊

nope its adi, he is geet's bro
will clear it out in the next part😊